Terry P

My sincerest condolences.

I hope Liam's apparent decision not to let Alex back in his life stays that way. Nathan would be the better choice for him. Nathan's not pressuring him, but he is more mature than Alex who hurt Liam badly. I wouldn't give him another chance considering Liam has his doubts about it not happening again.

I'm really interested in what's wrong with Connor. And past abuse too? That doesn't look good. I'm sure that because of that he'll have some trust issues, and it only reinforces the idea that Hugh will have to tread carefully at the beginning. Thanks for this story - I'm really enjoying it.

Love it.

You said it was going to be a cliffhanger and it sure was. I love it. Now, what exactly was on that video Tink was showing. I have my guesses - so we'll see.

I wouldn't be so hard on Declan. I think he was in shock at what Chris did to Bailey. He did though stop the beating and stayed to make sure Bailey was ok, even following him home. We have to see what he does next to pass judgement on him. I think we'll be pleasantly surprised (or at least I hope we will).

I know it's a new website and there will be some bugs - I get that. And in the end we'll be really happy with the new one. My issues at the moment are: 1. Notifications: I guess there is a new way to get them, so I'll learn that. However, instead of writing the chapter name, could you not put the name of the story instead (the chapter # is more helpful than the title of the chapter). 2. When I save the latest chapter in my bookmarks can we have the name of the story, chapter and author? When I save my bookmarks I put them in alphabetical order. The way that they are saved now is not at all helpful. 3. We use to get notifications on only the stories we were reading. Now we get them for every story and every comment that is made. That's a lot of bother as far as I'm concerned. 4. I am now obligated to sign in to the website everytime I go to it, That should not happen. I appreciate all the hard work you've put into this and hope my comments (or rather suggestions) will be helpful.

Declan has some good friends who'll be up front and tell him what he's doing. I'm betting he's going to listen and change his ways (it's probably obvious, but whatever).

Not exactly a cliffhanger - but close. Great chapter! Now where did Josh get all that money? That'll be interesting to find out.

This is my second time reading this story, and I enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time. And that's saying a lot since I knew what happened. Well done Eric. Your writing skills are just as good, if not better in the stories you've written since.

I too enjoyed this chapter. Living in Canada, I have the same feelings as Ozzie about firearms, and I don't expect that will ever change. But I do respect differences of opinions and I think it's amazing you brought out this topic in the story. It says a lot for the characters in this book, especially CJ and Ozzie, that they worked this out.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. The characters, the intrigue and the drama. Not to forget the little Princess. While I'm not usually in favour of too much firearms, this story warrants it. It's cowboy country after all, and it's more than property that needs protection. I look forward to Bumpkis (appropriate name) and al being dealt with. They won't know what hit them.

I haven't commented or reviewed this story yet, as I just started reading it today. Now that I'm up to date I'd like to say that this is very enjoyable. Jeff moves pretty fast, but when you're sure about something, why not. I love the characters. Even the bad ones shine a bright light on the good folks. I look forward to continuing to read and enjoy.

I've never had sex with any of my brothers and have never desired it. But I don't get the problem people have with it. It's not like they can get each other pregnant, and that was why there was any taboo to sex between siblings. The results of a child being born as a result of two siblings having sex could and is often disastrous. I think it's kind of hot though and enjoy reading about it. Let's hope Jason and Mike can work out their issues. It will be interesting to see how they do that.

I am so enjoying this story. I thought it was ending chapters ago, but Eric Keeps developing new plots and scenarios. I'm not getting tired of this at all!. Thanks Eric

Thanks for the great story Eric. I really appreciate that you don't keep us waiting, and waiting, and waiting for the next chapter. I look forward to continuing future reads.

This is a fun story and I'm enjoying it. But when did "Eric" suddenly become "David"?

Great story. Thanks for writing it.

I was wondering what the special gift would be, as there didn't seem to be anything different with him. In fact it appeared everything was going really well for Adam. This is an interesting change in direction and I look forward to seeing where it goes. I am also little bit concerned about some of Adam's motor-difficulty problems. Hopefully it won't be too serious and/or he won't get too depressed about it. Thanks for this story. I'm really enjoying it.

Things are tought for Adam. Mike as well. Thankfully Adam's parents are accepting of their relationship. Things could have gone so much in another direction. Now it's wait and see what condition Adam will be in when he wakes up. Of course the brief description of the story gives us some indication. I'm really looking forward to more of this story soon. Cheers

A great introduction to this story. Very well written as well, so I'm doubly more interested in following it. All my best

Wow. When I realized Galen had disappeared like that I had an idea Roger was behind it. I don't think Josh had a clue about what was happening, litteraly in their own back yard. This is a great story and I hope Galen is ok.

I'm glad Brad wasn't on the plane. While I never did like Buzz I wouldn't wish him dead. He needed to get his comuppance but defnitely not this way. Although I am glad he won't be in the story anymore. But, who was the fourth person (or was there one)? Good chapter.

I don't like where this is heading. I sure hope CJ catches on soon enough. Or will José step up to the plate?

Such drama. Both JJ and Will can be irritating at some times. It does add excitement though. What is Buzz up to: Sex with JJ,, Will and Brad? The shit is going to hit the fan when that comes out. It could even jeapordize Buzz's role in working with Seth and Brad. I'm glad Brad is taking some precautions with Mike Carmichael, although I get really bad feelings about this.