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Poor Corey. He father is such an asshole. At least Corey and his Mom are standing up to him - although Corey has to be more careful than her. Something has to break soon. In my books his father selling his motorcycle would have been the last straw. I think Corey quitting football and going to play baseball would be a great idea - he could even get a scholarship there because I'm sure he'll be good enough. Good story - thanks

Another great chapter, as usual. While it's great that Rachel and all are there to see Trevor and Shane, it's all too convenient for Gray. That will lead to interesting developments. As usual your writing is excellent. I would like to point out an editing error at the beginning of the chapter. In the paragraph where they are in Brisbane and they are talking about the City Botanical Gardens there is one sentence repeated. The chapter is: The other event scheduled was at the City Botanic Gardens, so they made their way back to the Zodiac and roared off, heading back downriver, where they moored at the foot of the river cliff, a low escarpment on the riverside edge of the botanic gardens, where a lone police officer was waiting. There, with Atlantis serenely moored in the background, they – mainly Trevor, though Shane signed a few – signed autographs, and then Trevor began telling of a few parts of his Indian Ocean crossing, while mentioning his coming book often. With Atlantis serenely moored in the background and apparently unmanned, they signed autographs, and then Trevor began telling of a few parts of his Indian Ocean crossing, while mentioning his coming book often. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. While this story is longer than many others it continues to be exciting and a must read.

Another great chapter. It's been a long, but enjoyable ride, and I'm looking forward to what's next. It's going to be full of excitement, and I fear, though hope not, some tragedy. Why is Kline so interested in Trevor handing him over money? Was this the agreement? (If it is I've forgotten). This whole press thing has me somewhat confused. Is it really that necessary? I presume the rest of the story might shed some light on it. While I do tend to comment on author's stories, I guess I, like others, have neglected to comment on this one - and yet it is one of the better written stories on GA. The characters are really interesting and likeable. I especially like the rapport between Trevor and Shane. Thank you,

My apologies for the repeat posts. I am on vacation and only have dial-up access - and it is so slow I kept pushing the "Add Comment" button too many times. That is so unlike me.

I would like to be a Beta reader. How does one go about this?

I really like your story. It's interesting and intriguing. However, I have a big problem with the format. You don't have any paragraphs - it's all one big paragraph. That makes it difficult and frustrating to read.

A really good story, with a good ending. Thank you.

I find this story fascinating. It is well written and I like how things are coming together. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Tibial is being ridiculous. I know he's been through a lot with Chad leaving him and then Mia. He obviously still loves Chad, otherwise he wouldn't have sought him out. Chad has told him he still loves him, so what's his deal?

Up to this point I've tended to side with Brad to some point - at least by thinking that Will had taken this a bit too far. This chapter clearly puts me on Will's side. Brad has some serious lessons to learn and I do believe he'll learn them, even if he doesn't like how it's being done. Excellent chapter, us usual, Mark. Looking forward to the next one.

What a great story and I was sad that it stopped so suddenly - especially with so much more to write about. I looked at Green's profile and saw that he passed away in January 2006 at only 23 years of age.

A short chapter, and what seems to be a shorter story as well! Oh well. It has been enjoyable and I it does make sense that the story is coming to an end. I think Tanner is going to save Gibby and at the same time Amanda will be exposed for what they did.

I really like this story. A good glimpse into the "future" and an intriguing plot. I look forward to the next chapters. But, what happened to chapter 4?

I enjoyed the story. The only criticism I would have has already been said (too much needless detail), and you already responded to that. I'm good. I am looking forward to your next story. It can only get better. Cheers

Tanner getting killed was not at all what I expected. I was hoping that just as Ethan and Amanda were going to hurt him that he would be saved (by Gibby). Normally I would be upset by this turn of events, but it is pointing to an interesting story. Will Amanda (and Ethan) get their due? I'm lookng forward to the next chapter.

Good first chapter. It seems pretty obvious to me that Alex was actually kidnapped and his parents are on the run from something. The big question is how will Alex and Jeremy be rejoined. Looking forward to more.

This is really getting interesting. Jonas and the job - Jonas and Opie - Jonas and the prospective date. This is going to be great.

I like Will - he's smart and cute. Unfortunately he needs to get a grip on himself. He's really being a shit with his Dads, and that's really not acceptable. Of course, that doesn't leave Brad off the hook either. Right now, even if Brad wanted to make things better he can't, because Will won't let him. I think the best person to step in to put an end to this tireless stuff is JP. Even more so than Stef. At least I hope someone does something soon.

Good story Renée. Sometimes short stories like this leave us up in the air but you didn't do it. There is a strong lesson here - one we all know deep inside of us. That is to be honest in our relationships. It's what will make them strong.

I'm really enjoying this story. With Chris discovering not only his family,but also who he is is fascinating.

A great chapter Mark. I am getting kind of tired of the battle between Will and Brad and Robbie. I think think the only way to resolve it is to get outside help (other than family).

I absolutely loved this story. Thank you. I'm enjoying reading the Ardour as well, and look forward to reading more of your work. You are an amazing author.

I'd really like to read this interview. I liked Silver as a character and look forward to it.

Great chapter and end to this part of the trilogy. I also am looking forward to the next. Love it.

Great chapter. A little short - but things are looking up for Jonas. I'm looking forward to more.