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Just when I wonder where this story is going to go next and how you will create some drama you come through with flying colours. This is a great chapter.
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Great chapter, but a very worrisome ending. What is going on here? It sure doesn't bode well for Rydian.
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While its not good that Mattie and Casey have been kidnapped, Its good that we're getting a different kind of excitement in the story. There is potential for a lot to happen. It wont' take long for someone to figure out that Ernesto is involved in this. unless he stays behind at the rancho. I look forward to the next chapter - thank goodness Andrew posts new ones on a regular basis and doesn't keep us in the air for too long. And what's with Brandon back home? What will be his role in the whole family story?
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The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
Terry P commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
I can appreciate that Ben might think Mark went to the press, but he completely rejected Mark's denial. A bit harsh I think. -
I can't wait to see how Marcus will put an end to Lucius. It's time to end that one once and for all. As for Koen and Marcus - it's good to see how Marcus treats him and as much as possible under the circumstances considers him an equal. I'm sure that soon that will be made as a permanent and open situation. Good writing - I look forward to the next chapter.
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A First Time For Everything
Terry P commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in A First Time For Everything
I like this story - but with everybody's name starting with a Z I get confused who's who. -
I love this story. It's so sexy. I can't believe Zach is so shy(?). But Ryan is so patient. Love it.
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Searching for David - Jeremy Kimball
Terry P commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Searching for David - Jeremy Kimball
Suddenly some intrigue. Great. I think Sandy is the key to where David is - he's her Dad and He was suffering a disease that is now in the realm of her expertise. So looking forward to the next chapter. -
Great story. Very different. At first Tan seemed very naive, but as we found out he was far from it. I'm a bit of a rice queen (no offense intended to anyone) so you can imagine what that did to me.
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Thanks Sasha. I've located it and will definitely buy it.
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This has the beginnings of a great story. While it says the story is completed, the fact that it's called "Teaser" tells me more is to come. I hope that is the case. Thanks
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Saying Goodbye - David Reynolds
Terry P commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Saying Goodbye - David Reynolds
Wow! Quite the curve ball there. When I started reading this chapter I was thoroughly confused and wondered if I was getting my characters all mixed up. But it is an interesting angle and I liked it. I don't know what I would do if I was Jeremy and Sam, but I'm sure the fact that David is giving his blessing is going to help. There are so many people who we could say should know that David is still alive, but all of the morning is done and the harm it could cause now would be too great to risk. I am anxiously looking forward to more. -
In am thoroughly enjoying this story. Cole is amazing. Your omen for the future will only make this story better. I"m sure Jared (or Cole) hasn't heard the last of Joel. But knowing Cole it won't do him any good. I look forward to seeing the twist you'll put in.
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I really enjoyed this story, and was a little disappointed when it ended. Although, I think you ended it exactly as you should have. Thank you.
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This story is still new and its plot has to be developed, but for some reason I'm hooked on it. I look forward to see it unfold.
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Good chapter. Micah is moving up. Unfortunately I can see the fame and glory is going to go to his head. That would be unfortunate for such a sweet boy. By the way, the story is repeated in the same upload. You might want to check that out.
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This story was really enthralling. Well written. While I knew Callen was dead when he went into the water, but when he suddenly met with Sage I had some hope that he wasn't really. Of course when the realization that Sage too had somehow died I started looking at the story very differently. While I might have hoped for a happier ending, this one was appropriate. Thank you.
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I enjoyed this chapter. It was great to see how relaxed Alexis was with his family. And what an amazing family. I'm sure like all famiies, it's not perfect, but you can tell that its great having the family reunions. Marion is amazing, and I'm sure Philip is as well. His initial gruffness is to be expected from a family patriarch. But, by getting to know Joshua he'll open up to him and probably end up being his most staunch supporter if and when things get a little tougher. I'm speculating that Alexi's parents (or at least his mother) will shop up at the get together. That'll be amazing for Alexis. I look forward to more.
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The inevitable happpened. Ryo is going to N.Y. without Soubi. I don't understand why he couldn't have gone with him. It makes no sense to me. I can see Kaito and Sakura getting together. That would be an interesting situation. Ryo's mother would literally have a bird. While she hasn't accepted Sakura at all - I doubt she would ignore her own grandson. I look forward to seeing how Ryo and Soubi are going to keep their relationship going despite the long distance and the idea that there is four years ahead of them before they can get together. Or will the situation change?
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Great to have you back X. Sometimes when you have to wait for a long time for a new chapter you forget what you've read before and have to go back and refresh your memory. But not The Brotherhood. I'm glad Jacob put Alex in her place and hopefully she'll be gone. I can't say I agree with the way he did it, even if she deserved it. What we don't remember is she comes from the same town as Jacob and can do some serious damage there if she wants - and I woudln't put it past her.
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Section Four - Kurt DeWitt
Terry P commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Section Four - Kurt DeWitt
What a fascinating chapter. These guys really know their stuff. Finally we see some light in getting rid of Schroeder. If only the following events go the right way. If not it would mean that all of those involved would be in serious trouble - or at least out of a job. I also enjoy the interactions between the couples. What amazing relationships. Even with the newer ones. Can't wait for the next chapter - and the outcome of the vote (which is almost a given). It will be interesting to see if any vote against the motion, and who they are. -
Talk about a small world. Now there are so many questions. Did JP or Steph arrange this accident? Or did it just simply happen? (I know that's only 2 questions) Either way, now that they have met the wife and kids of JJ's coach they are going to really feel guilty. I do hope that it was an accident because knowing the family really changes the way I feel about it. Not that nothing should have been done, and this is perhaps better than revealing what a despicable person the coach was. His family will suffer, but it is better this way.
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Things are getting tense now! Gonzales has planned this carefully and very well. He hasn't left anything up in the air. I think you've got a trick up your sleeve on what's next. Gonzales has not underestimated Brigitte. Does "2 weddings" at the same time say anything? I'll wait till the next chapter to see if I'm right.
