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Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
Terry P commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 8 For richer, for poorer
I enjoyed this chapter and seeing the developments in all their lives. I noticed the change in writing style. It was much easier to know who was actually speaking. -
Epilogue – A Glimpse Into the Future SOK3
Terry P commented on Bill W's story chapter in Epilogue – A Glimpse Into the Future SOK3
I also enjoyed this story. Very nice to have the ending where we find out what happened to Kieran later on. -
Good chapter. But could you break it down into paragraphs. This one was really hard to read, and there was a lot of good stuff there.
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Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Terry P commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 2 Valentine’s Day Surprise
Yes, what a lovely story, with beautiful characteres. It would not be a good ending to just stop here, so a bit more at least would be appreciated. -
What a tear jerker. These last 2 chapters were amazing. Just when you thought it was really good, it got better. I look forward to more.
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Finally the great confrontation. Was it Madumba's magic that made him vanish? I think it was the magic of the Sword of Kings - but I guess we'll have to wait to find out. Great chapter.
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You got me hooked in this first chapter. What an introduction. What happened that Jared and Carly broke up? Why doesn't Craig have a clue what's going on? Was he in that much of a depression? I look forward to more - and soon.
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As usual another great chapter to a great story. Again CJ shows what he's made of when he shut's down Owen's ex. Bravo. A great inclusion of Tyson Hill and the reference to Love on the Rock's. That too is a great story that people should read.
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Great first chapter. It's great to see somebody like Ryan who doesn't feel sorry for himself and is willing to get out there. He's not looking for sympathy, and fortunately, so far he hasn't received it. Just meeting friendly people. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Great chapter, thanks. I'm stilling trying to figure out what a lunis is. Can anybody help with that? Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to everyone.
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There has to be more to Mary Ellen and Trevor than we've been led to think. Is there a possibility that Trevor is the real father to Mary Ellen's baby? hemmmm
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Any idea if and when updates wll be posted on this story. I've enjoyed it immensely and would like to see more. Cheers
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I too have enjoyed this story, and look forward to more. I enjoy reading stories with wolfshifters, and this one is different from most I 've read so far. It's great.
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Frustrations, Delays and Discoveries SOK3
Terry P commented on Bill W's story chapter in Frustrations, Delays and Discoveries SOK3
I always thought that Romaric had not died - and here he is (my guess only, but I'm 99% sure I'm right). It will be interesting to find out what he actually did reveal and what Madumba knows about Kieran and his small army. -
The Battle’s First Blood SOK3
Terry P commented on Bill W's story chapter in The Battle’s First Blood SOK3
I'm not very good at battle strategies, but this seems to be the best I've ever read. What will happen next? I'm anxious to find out. -
Thank you. A great ending. I look forward to more of your stories in the future.
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I don't think Wildman has deserted them. There is obviously something about to happen and I can't wait to see wha tit is.
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Chapter 7 - Just a Conversation
Terry P commented on Cynus's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Just a Conversation
Somehow I knew that was going to happen. But it's a good thing it was Chris that walked in rather than Jason. It will be interesting to see what happens, although I really doubt that Chris will let the cat out of the bag. -
I agree, we are finally getting somewhere. The break we've been waiting for came. Hopefullyhey won't be too hard on Eddie, and they won't speak with Bryan's mother before they speak with him, although it would be interesting to see how she would try and talk herself around that one.
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I just started this story and up to date. Only to find it out it's been almost a year since anything has been posted. Can we expect more? Please????
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Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
Terry P commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
While I don't agree with her shitty attitude towards Michael, at least we can now have some idea of why she is acting the way she is. Not very mature of her, but then we know that before Great chapter. -
Now the reason for the title of this story is getting clearer (I had an idea before but?) The "Black Widow" is Wade's mother and she can be deadly. Of course, she obviously hasn't learned her lesson in her dealings with the Shluter clan. This is an exciting part of the story (probably the most so far). Thanks Mark
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Another great chapter. However, in the section where everyone goes to the hospital and stops to visit with the Tomassi's, CJ spends time with the twins. Doc tell's Adriano that he'll be going home the next day. Then you say that the twin's had returned home the previous evening with their grandparent's. I don't think the twins were visiting their father as the grandparents aren't really that close to the hospital.
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It's not only Berault that hasn't had news from Kieran and his group lately. We too, haven't and the concern is mutual. They say no news is good news, but we would like to hear from them soon. Great story! Thanks
