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@Grumpy Bear, certainly hope that you pick up the story and work to completion in a manner that fits what you want. More importantly, I am glad that you are okay and it was just life getting in the way. I truly was worried that something had happened to you.

Interesting continuation of an ongoing saga, and I hope there is another story or two from it. I do like the general plotting and characterization in all of these stories in the saga. I do feel that there a few loose ends that never seem to get tied up or resolved and the chapters are in general a little short to me; I would rather have few chapters but longer ones. The plotting in interesting and moves along nicely; but the absence of resolution can at times be irritating. You do sometimes get answers to things that pop up a story or two later; and they do sometimes come out of left field. That said, the storytelling is well done and able to overcome any issues that I have with it. I do recommend these stories for the interesting characters and stories. Sit back on you porch with a glass of tea on your reader; enjoy these stories as you look up at the stars and wonder what exactly is out there.

Well, we all knew that Torres was up to no good; but who helped him and why? While he has been jailed; those that helped him for their own reasons are still unknown. The URP has finished the settlement modules on the Moon and now those chosen can move there and start their exploration. I would hope that they could leave the strife of Earth behind and concentrate on moving all of mankind forward; but we know that some will always fail to do so. This chapter tied a few things up and seems to be helping to set the next story up. Can't wait to see what direction the saga takes now.

So, we have a drop dead gorgeous Fae; a Lion, who thinks he is the cat's meow; a studly shadow shifter; and poor Elijah, who probably has no idea what is going on. Of course, we have no idea how Elijah's father was involved with the Lion shifter, and did he know he was a Lion shifter? Got lot's of little treats; but need so much more to start sorting this out. Can't wait for the next update... How delicious this one is already.

Damn, the stuff with Wagner is really heating up; and who is this new player? He seems to be getting in better that I thought he had. Can't wait to see what is going on; although I do wonder if the new Delta was just being an ass. Vincent is going to be good at being an auditory. I do hope that he gets to catch up with the Alpha there so maybe he can talk about what happened all those years ago. Great job, can't wait for the next update.

A wonderfully written and developed story full of chills, twist and turns, and some true romance. Characters, even the secondary ones, are wonderfully and fully developed. The touch of the supernatural gave the story a feeling of tension that added the perfect edge to it. The twist and turns keep you guessing right through to the end; and they are all so plausible and unlike so many actually make sense. The romance rings true and blossoms beautifully. A wonderful story to read on a rainy day looking out the window, being glad to be inside.

So enjoyed this story from start to finish; the writing and character development was excellent. All of the characters, even the more minor ones, were so full of life or death. So we know what happened now; and I am sure that Jenny probably either put money into the construction business because it needed it or blackmailed Bob the Builder in some other way. Jack almost made it out; but would he have ever been happy knowing what happened to Trevor and always having to look over his shoulder? Not that I did not wish that he escaped; but how lonely his life would probably have been. Hope that Sylvia and Brenda stay friends and learn to forgive themselves. Hope that Cynthia lives many more years before she and Nipper go off to their next grand adventure; leaving her house to Terry and Dan, who spend the rest of their lives working, living, and loving it all.

Well, the marriage of the Emperor is now complete. I would think that Mason would be glad that his time as Crown Prince could be over in the near future. You have to wonder who helped Mr. Torres; you know that he could not have afforded all that happened on his own. I am sure someone was paying him; but for what? Glad that James Hargraves has made another appearance. I sort of thought his brief appearance was interesting and hoped we would see him again.

Well, hell.... Elijah did not even have a chance to say goodbye to his parents; they did know he was safe and on his way home so they were at peace about that. We can hope that they never knew what happened. Obviously someone was searching for something; even the police could not really think it was a burglary with so many things like the TV and stereo system still there. I have a feeling that Elijah's mother having even a small amount of fae blood is what has caused this. Kage is going to be fae; let's hope not to close of a relation, although kissing cousins would be okay.. Your body reacts to stimuli; even a tragedy like Elijah is dealing with would not keep his body from reacting to something that delicious. Tyler and his family are close to Elijah; and for that reason he will want to make sure they are protected. Still do NOT understand why he did not immediately call Ben and Zev, afterall he just dealt with a truly horrible situation and there is always a chance no matter how remote that this could be linked. Of course, it won't be, but he doesn't know that yet....

Okay, I rarely give five stars on stories; have actually had authors ask me not to review because of that. That said, this one fully deserves every bit of a five star rating. The writing and pacing for this story were simply first rate from start to finish. The character development, even on the secondary and ancillary characters, were excellent. There was passion. There was adventure. There was werewolves. There was just so many great things about this story. Not going to give much away but do have to say that in the end, @kboiswas much more merciful that I would have been. Hope anyone that takes a chance on this story enjoys it as much as I did.

A wonderful chapter; Granger was in rare form throughout. Winkler, as usual, knew just the right information to impart to Granger. Granger and Daventry spent a little to get so much. Not only will the men be happier and more loyal; but the Visby itself will benefit. The men going ashore without money to enjoy their shore leave, would have caused way too many issues. Granger's past behavior has of course allowed him to benefit by getting stores, his mail, and perhaps some much needed information. Granger understands that even those in opposition, can be influenced by how they are treated. I am sure that something will befall both Granger and his new ship; but with the men more cohesive and Granger back in his element, I doubt it will be anything he cannot handle.

Well, started this last night and finished reading all of it in about six hours. Heading to bed now. I do hope that Vann and all the others are able to move on from his; even those that are trapped, there has to be a way to help them or at least help them come to terms with their situation. Well written and the flow and plotting were amazing.

Sebastian was merciful; I am not sure that I could have let Caleb live. I know that I could have come up with a more horrible death; at least for the first two.

Merging the packs and taking the Montana position is really the only option at this point. I think it will work out well. I really don't see how he can let Caleb live; I understand Caleb's motivation, but his death really is called for. I think his should be merciful; but the others should be public and horrible to contemplate.

Caleb better have one hell of an explanation; honestly not sure there is one that will be good enough. I still think the other two should be tortured to death in a truly gruesome horrible manner.

You have to wonder if any of the pups will ever truly be okay; can a wolf handle counseling? I still can't believe Caleb was in on this; so disappointed. I can't wait for Sebastian to confront Reilly's father; that is going to be one hell of a donnybrook.

Oh, nothing good is going to come from this one...

Well, they know the location; and getting some low down from the locals is always a good thing. I do worry that they took the boy so quickly; what is causing the rush?

WOW, they grabbed him the first night? Why so desperate?

Fortunately, the Hundred Acres Woods never had to handle anything like this. I understand why they are not letting all the information out to everyone; but I worry that someone won't know something and will miss something obvious if they had known what they were looking for.

Well, sounds like a plan is coming together; but I can still see issues that could go wrong. It is amazing how total lowlifes have the most amazing sense of self preservation and can sense when something is off.

Arrogance more than stupidity has been the downfall of many dictators, charlatans, and truly evil men.

So another soldier has joined the crusade; it may make all the difference in the world. It is amazing to me how people at a certain level just seem to forget that others have a brain. They will discuss something that should not be mentioned and all in front of someone that they simply see as to inferior to matter; as if they are deaf and dumb.

If the council had all been men; I would have just suggested that they whip them out on the table and see who was biggest, but always think the women won't really appreciate that. Would not think the council would try for bugs; at least not in such an obvious place, but when at home they might need to watch out. Round one and two are over; round three coming up.

Damn, don't you just wish that cell phones had never been invented. Of course, it was not a good idea for any of them to go; and I hate that a lone shapeshifter may be going in blind. I have a feeling that the trip to Germany will be full of so many landmines that they may not get out alive...