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Oh, all hell is about to break loose... You just know it is either Lord Revi or the Empress, no one else would have dared. Firuz and Temu are the real hero's. They were both willing to give their lives. Firuz was right, they had to separate. I am glad that Rashan was able to make it back to the valley first, and even if Temu did not want to agree, they were right, Rashan had to be protected first. Bravo...

Outstanding chapter, Rashan is so grown up sometimes. Jihan truly is a parent, for being one means that your safety will always take a backseat to that of your child. To bad that Jihan's father never learned that lesson. Very well written and it flowed wonderfully, can't wait for the next update...

Oh, wow, this was just a truly illuminating chapter. Sargis and Baldric 2.0, love that Yeoldebard, have given me so much to think about, and then you through in Berhanu, and my head may just explode. And then there is the letter from Wilfried, I wonder if Baldric 2.0 will pull him deeper into the situation. Just WOW....

Truly a delight on so many levels; well written and as usual flowed beautifully. Have to wonder what all Bol saw about the future, well at least we know that Vincent has others watching out for him, even if they can't directly intervene. Second part of the chapter was equally delightful, full of joy, laughter, tears, and a good scotch; what more could anyone want...

I am pretty sure that in 2004. it was still illegal in most if not all of Australia for a gay male under 18 to have sex. This could put Connie in serious trouble if they get caught doing anything; Australia in the early 2000's was still not overtly welcoming to gay rights. I think a couple of the territories had started to age of consent on sexual matters but I know that not all of them had and the gay panic defense was still being used to justify any attack on a gay person that actually went to court, well not every one, but still very widespread. Will should have just hit his panic button. I know Brad would have blown a gasket at how irresponsible Will was, and yes, he was irresponsible, but it would have been better than getting raped. It turned out okay because Connie was there and decided to step in; but there was no way Will could have known he would even have noticed what was happening. Great chapter, and can't wait to see what Will and Connie end up doing next, and no, not just sex, get your minds out of the gutter...

So well done, we always need a chapter ever so often that gives us a lot of information without making us to emotional, this chapter does that masterfully. Can't wait to see what happens next, although we need to find out why that duplicate is going off on his own on this...

Read this story years ago, don't know why I did not write anything then but... This was so well written and the pacing and story development were truly first rate. I just could not stop reading this when I found it. Even though I actually knew in the first couple of chapters how it was going to end, and I was right, the story and writing just kept me so engrossed in it. This was well worth any time it took to read this. The character development was brilliant. I truly laughed and cried in equal measures while reading it. Just wonderful.

Great chapter, so many things happening but Chris needs to realize that he can't do it all himself. He has to let others help him; and yes, even remember to have fun and a life of his own. It isn't just all about saving the world. LOL. Excellent writing and flowed well.

Oh, Hell to the no. First another shadow mage, and now an ancient God? I wonder if the third shadow mage might be a servant to this Bol, God of Order? Loved how the chapter started, but the ending just WOW...

You want to think that love always wins; but often hate and bigotry do, at least initially. I am so sorry for Jimmy; he has been through so much but was so young and had no one left to help him understand that what happened was not all his fault. I doubt that what Sawyer says is enough to make Jimmy come to terms with his past, but it is at least a start. Jimmy can continue that journey, if Sawyer survives, if he doesn't he may turn feral himself and lose himself in his wolf. I personally choose to believe Sawyer will and Jimmy will challenge idiot for the Alpha position and pull Fergus's still beating heart and eat it raw...

I just don't think that Coy really knows what he wants yet; well he does, I think but the fear is still there. Boone wanting to be tied to the land is a primal urge in some. It gives them a way to tie themselves to something solid that you know will be there long after you are gone. I hope that Boone does not give up on Coy, I know that he doesn't want to push him in either direction; a sign of a truly good man, but he needs to stay the course and be there for him while Coy wrestles with the decision on how his life will go. Just so well written, the eloquence and description of the land is first rate.

Excellent chapter, well written and very exciting. I am sure that Sweetlion is right. And D'gar should not blame himself.

Another wonderful addition to this story, although it is hard to read and begin to care about this characters because you know what will eventually befall their families and descendants with the revolution and death of the Czar in a little more than 100 years from these events. The Stroganvos's were a real family in Russia. Pavel would have come from the younger branch of the family which actually reached into the nobility but died out prior to the revolution; while the older or senior branch fell into poverty well before the revolution but continues to exist today. Don't remember all the detail, way to long ago since Russian history 205. But like several of the characters we have met in this story, they are based on real families and many did not survive what was to come. I am sure that Granger will not particularly enjoy sleeping with the Czarina but even Caroline will understand his reasoning for doing so. Can't wait to see how Granger handles it. Mark, the way you interweave your story with actual events is just second to none. The writing as always is first rate, and the pacing and timing are spot on. It is the little things like George and Winkler's interaction; or the conversation between Granger and Richelieu that make this story soar... Bravo...

Simply delicious. a lovely appetizer, a nice spicy soup, a main course full of protein and taste, and then the perfect light soufflé for desert. Can't wait to see what happens at the meeting between Vincent and Stefano, I am sure that Ms. Elaine will be there for this as well.

Do the seven realize how powerful Kotik will become and can they see the outcome of the current situation? This chapter was really interesting and touched on several truly important issues...

Great chapter, Vincent's abilities are growing by leaps and bounds. We don't know yet if having an Alpha wolf will boost his mage abilities but can't wait to find out. He and Mace are just so hot together. Was sort of hoping for another hint on who the backstabber is, of course, have an idea but... Love the new character in New York, can't wait for Vincent and Mace to go visit up there... Just so well done...

I have to wonder how young Jimmy was when his pack was destroyed. I can't believe Jimmy doesn't realize he is an Alpha. Jimmy is going to destroy himself and any chance he has with Sawyer if he doesn't deal not only with his past but with Fergus...

Yikes, what a frightening vision of what may come for some of the duplicates if all of this comes to pass. Unintended consequences can be a great burden. Just so well done, and flowed beautifully.

Coy is taking the first steps to being truly his own man. Neither Boone or we know what that will mean exactly, but we have to be happy for him. Coy is facing his past and how his family for good or bad influenced not only his actions but how he felt about himself. Never an easy thing to process, or even fully grasp. Excellent writing, can't wait for the next chapter.

A truly delightful chapter, just loved the conversations between the wolves. This was written and plotted so well.

I do hope that S'fyn doesn't get in over his head. I think that F'drun would do something horrible to anyone that he even thought was trying to help D'gar. At least this group that is heading south seems to have some word of mouth about F'drun, maybe they will not fall for his stupidity so easily. I just hope the group that has been exposed to him down south that has returned doesn't cause too many issues. Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next update...

While I think this character was mentioned at one point in passing, not really positive, but glad for the new introduction. He should be an interesting addition, love the sister...

I still want Will to pull out his big dick and top Chris, make him a total little bitch. I hate the racist bullshit that can be so prevalent in the gay community, especially the younger dance party crowd. It isn't just in Australia but here still as well. Loved how Will handled most of the time with Connie, but like a couple of others, I think Will needs to learn how to accept the word no without trying so hard to just push through and get is way anyway. Nothing wrong with trying to change a guys mind, but sometimes people have rules that work for them; let them have the rules to keep their lives running smoothly. Loved that Will called Jake instead of Brad, I bet Brad is so jealous... LOL. Keep up the great work Mark, can't wait for the next update...

Hot damn.....

I don't like Sargis being in conflict with Baldric even just to try and prevent him from causing issues. I know that Sargis has to stay loyal to the Duke, but he should know that that damn druidic elf is also playing at games as well. Can't wait to see what happens next...