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And why in God's name would either of them even begin to trust their parents? Nothing about this passes the smell test. Eld will find the letter later, but have to wonder what effect it will have...

Tsuru is right; James needs to stay out of the way unless instructed by one of them to do something. James, while trying to help, put himself in this position and his lack of patience and unwillingness to seek directions has lead directly to this current situation. Of course, none of them communicate the way they should. Charlie is linked to the Whale, by choice or need; I am not sure. He is going to do what he can to protect it; of course, if Sebastian had not broken him, that would not be the issue. Great chapter...

Excellent chapter as always, flowed wonderfully and exceptionally well crafted. Granger truly understands human nature in a way few ever have. Daventry sleeping with the Tsar's mother while helpful; isn't gaining anyone much at this point. Although she was all the way until her death deeply anti-French and worked to prevent any close ties between Russia and France. Addington was considered largely a failure as both Prime Minister and Home Secretary. However his years as Prime Minister were limited and Britain simply did not have the economy or allies to wage the type of war needed to defeat France. He did what he could with what he had; but that is the best that could probably be said of his term as Prime Minister. Love to Granger is able to handle and maneuver his way around the situation; no matter what it is... Bravo, Mark, Bravo...

I hope in his final moments that Sebastian felt pain and anguish, and true regret; but mostly pain and anguish. I don't think James really understands how powerful the Whale is; but I also don't think he cares either... OMG, such a great, is very short chapter....

Love this chapter; so many new things coming out. Of course, Eld Emery completely misunderstood the conversation between the brothers. I wonder if the lightning strike is what delayed his onset of omega; or does being favored by the dawn happen later naturally? So many questions...

Great update; maybe this group with a few unique powers will be able to keep themselves from being abducted or at least fight back after the abduction. Of course, it would be nice to be able to find out something about why this is happening and what the lunar cycle has to do with it. Yea... Team....

No matter what the issue is between James and Charlie and the Whale; it is Sebastian's fault and I blame him for it all.... A battle between James and the Whale with Charlie helping the Whale might be very interesting....

When one is young, bright sparkly things can pull your attention away from what is important; sometimes to the detriment of things most important. This chapter had a feeling of melancholy running through it...

I am so over Sebastian, he truly needs to die in a horrible painful way... So the Whale is trying to help put Charlie back together; but is it doing so to help Charlie or help it go somewhere else? James needs to focus on what is going on instead of just what he thinks is going on..

Why do some men, no matter where they are, think they have some innate knowledge that no one else possess and they have to share it with all; even when no one else wants to know it... Glad that S'brin and D'gar are back together; and really glad that S'brin has seemingly taken a step back from some of the more disruptive greens. I am going to miss Zalna, she was a steadying influence...

So much for following directions/orders/suggestions....

Well, James doesn't strike me as the Batman type, way to impulsive. But smart enough to figure out what to be able to eat safely and so far at least protecting Charlie. I so want the Whale to swallow Sebastian...

OMG, could the Whale be the one to save Charlie? Was the Whale a creature of good? Is that why it left the Earth before it did any significant damage? Did the team that went after it make it realize something in their battle with it? Or can it simply sense that Charlie is an open nerve and he is broadcasting pain so loudly that the Whale can't handle it. That is not a conversation that Hideyoshi ever wanted to have with Peter and Sarah. Casper was right; James is unbelievable powerful, but he is child and even with all that power, has proven again and again that he doesn't understand how and when to use it... Sarah just wants her child back, nothing else matters at this moment.

LOL, I was actually referring to the job interview...

I was actually hoping for something dealing with the actual interview... Starting to wonder if any of his friends really understand Maks at all... Good tension in the writing, and flowed well...

Well if the bitch had taken more care of her child; he might not have the scar... Some just should never be parents... Forget the balcony; let's go for a big splash in a volcano.... Excellent art work...

I am going to be beyond devastated if Charlie is really nothing but an empty shell... James is just going to have to stay away from Sebastian and hope that the ambient power present on that world is enough to restore some of the power to Charlie. We can hope that those left behind can get with 23 and maybe find the tracking information that the idiots placed on Charlie, but what can be tracked on earth might not be trackable on another world. Maybe the tracker from earlier in the story can get with Charlie's mom and figure out a way to track them...

Ah, so some clarity but still a lot of unanswered questions. Poland is noted for it's corruption as well as its issues with anyone even seeming to approve of much less engage in any gay lifestyle choices...

Am pretty sure that I agree with Aleks and that I do not like the fiancée or any of her girlfriends... Totally confused, but that isn't always a bad thing.

Aleks probably is not the killer; but does he know who is? Maks appears to be the kind of man that won't run to the authorities without more information, so where does this leave us?

An interesting introduction to what I assume will turn out to be the two main characters. Maks appears to be totally woebegone. and the kid that looks like he could be a football hooligan. I just don't know...

Well, glad that Brandon is going to be okay; but after several sessions with Ethan, I am sure he will be. Another elemental? The fact that she was egging the fire on just doesn't make sense, it was doing so much damage to everything, why try to make it worse; we need to find out what is going on there. 🤣🤣🤣 A bald wolf, just can't stop laughing about the idea of a wolf with no hair...

Sebastian would have been better off just grabbing Charlie and transporting away from the facility; if he had enough power left to do so. Sebastian is starting to sound sort of like an old time Nazi and their idea of racial purity. I think that Hideyoshi and Tsuru both know that Sebastian is still there and that they still need to move; James arrival will just make breaching the facilities shield easier. James needs to learn patience and subtlety. P.S. I want a second chapter on Sundays... LOL

No, No, No... I was not sad about how Will had built the walls, so to speak. I was more sad that he had gone through and witnessed enough that he felt he needed to do so. I agree that his behavior for most of the story has shown his level of maturity is exceptional for his age and beyond. This chapter, at least for me, just seemed to have a layer of sadness throughout. Will knows me might even come to truly love Connie; but either Connie has to give up his dream, and he would have at the time this story took place; or Will knows he and Connie would never be able to just be a couple. Will internally talked about how he wondered if some of those in the past had liked him because he could come across as straightish and as he said, knew how to act in public... Sometime life can just be sad, through no fault of anybody; it is just unfair and sad....

This chapter just made me sad... Will had sex with the guard, who I don't think he even really found attractive. To make up for being an ass; or just because it was there. Connie may be truly in love with Will, but can't be out with him and keep the career that he has worked his whole like to get to. Will builds walls to make sure he can't just fall in love, or get swept off his feet; because of what he has seen others go through and he himself has dealt with. Very well written, just felt so sad by the time that I had finished reading it...