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Too funny; nothing ever stays a secret now days...
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Traveling by river can be exciting but also not always the easiest thing to do; especially if you are not on a river designed to be used in that manner. Some of the smaller ones can be tricky to use and navigate.
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This is why my idea of roughing it involves four start hotels and spas....
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You never ever got camping, hiking, or anything of the sort without a detailed weather update...
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Really enjoying this story; I know part of it is rather fantasy level; but I have known people like this that just seem to go stumbling into one pot of gold after the other; unfortunately, never happens to me... LOL.
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Glad there is an income; because living that life is expensive...
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I hope that he is able to deal successfully with the bullies and keep what he wants private; but not sure how easy that will be in the end. Excellent job so far, truly enjoying this.
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Great chapter, that is one of the great advantages flying business or first class; you can actually get some sleep and not deal as much with jet lag. Oh this report for school is going to be great...
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I wonder if they will get to play at the Old Course, much tougher, than some of the new ones that are part of the complex. This chapter was well written and the pacing was spot on.
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Oh, a title and a small amount of land; but I can promise there will be taxes and other things so I hope there is some type of income along with it. LOL>
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Not just old European families but many around the world have had to let go of properties or houses that meant a great deal; but either taxes or other issues just meant that you could not longer afford to keep them and keep them updated and livable.
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Bullies are the same the world over. I too like to travel business or first class when it comes to planes; just so much more room and actually much healthier for you if you have any circulatory issues. I hate the smaller jets...Good pacing in this chapter.
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Another delight, but Cousin Robert is showing what someone with unlimited money, or even just more than enough, can do... Such a cute beginning to the story.
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Had someone recommend this story; and have to say the first chapter was a delight. Can't wait to see what you do with this...
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Chapter 8: Meeting Mother
centexhairysub commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Meeting Mother
I have a feeling that Ms. Elaine is probably more than deadly; glad to see someone of her skill level helping to train Vincent. He will need every trick to be able to handle what is to come. I have a feeling that the trip to New York will be very memorable. The duel maybe more than just memorable however, I have a feeling there is more going on than we know yet. -
I did not see that coming; Shania is going to be beyond an issue. I hope that Fergus gets butt fu&$ed in front of the whole pack by Jimmy first, then Sawyer, then everyone else with it ending with Shania pegging him with the biggest dildo she can find....
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Hate that he never got to come out to his mother; yes, she might have taken it badly, but maybe she could have learned to accept it. The issue is by never coming out to her, he feels trapped in the what ifs...
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Very interesting start to this story; gives some background on both of whom I suspect will be the main characters but leaves so much untold as well.
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Sneak Peak at Book Two
centexhairysub commented on zanoGreen's story chapter in Sneak Peak at Book Two
Well paced and well written; when you get people that make tough choices under duress; and then have to deal with the consequences later, you rarely get peace and harmony... -
Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Wonderful imagery, truly felt like you were in the middle of a horrific storm. Well, Boone has to be okay, or there wouldn't be much of a story. Have to wonder who will find him or will he manage to rescue himself. Hope he doesn't lose his boots in the river... -
Ugh, why couldn't F'drun getting eaten by thread... I do think they should have had at least more lookouts; after all they knew that thread did fall in the south. Seemed like way to sloppy to keep everyone safe. Glad that H'reck and D'gar got to talk things out...
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The Gap Year Music Recs
centexhairysub replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
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I guess it was truly a different time. I swear in todays world nothing about the reading of the will would have been simple. Someone would have objected to something or everything and there would been a fight over part or all of it... Well written, the pacing was a little off for me in this chapter, just seemed choppy. Can't really put my finger on why I think so; but still enjoyed it greatly.
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Okay, I am so excited about the new story, " Gap Year " and it has just started. I have already read the prologue and the first chapter twice each. I am getting a different vibe from this already. I can't decide if the writing style is slightly different or what, but it just feels very fresh; not that any of Mark's stories aren't fabulous but this was has just grabbed me so hard already. Will is not even my favorite character, barely makes my top eight, but I am so excited to see how he handles the challenge of a gap year, and not just the drama already rearing it's head in the first chapter. Is it just me on the vibe, am I just too excited about a new addition to the CAP series? Everyone, let's discuss...
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This chapter was a real delight. I loved how Mace wanted to walk around town showing off his mate. Loved how Vincent understood how important that was too him. Well written and the pacing was lovely. I like that even some of the humans know about the supernatural in this story and how they react to it in their daily lives. Guess the Mom was a surprise to Vincent. I would have thought that a mage would have a better sense of when another mage was around, do they not give off some type of energy like the others do with each other?
