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    Chapter 6

    Well, that certainly too an unexpected turn. I so did not see that coming. Ainreth played Neven perfectly. But while he wants to protect Denir, will he truly betray his Queen? This is just too delicious.
  2. Christos wants to do something, wants to help, even if he is not sure how. I wonder how many will be like him; I am afraid it will be too few to truly make a difference. Chandar has come to the village with Christos to see the knights that have arrived. And finally, in the dark, Luther and his group arrive. True, this group may well not be able to overthrow Septimus, but every fight must start somewhere with a few good men.
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    Blaise

    Much like @drsawzall, not sure what to make of this chapter. Blaise seems to have rewritten parts of his life or memories of that life to suit him. I would honestly like to know what he remembers of the accident that took Anthony's life. Dante seems a little drawn to Blaise, which I find uncomfortable because of what he knows about the past. This just makes me sad, confused, annoyed, and I don't know, my mind is just in a whirlwind after this chapter.
  4. Can't wait to see what everyone comes up with this year...
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    Chapter 5

    Ainreth and Petre were able to follow as luck would have it the right track; and they were able to catch up and rescue Fennrin because carrying him caused the Oretski to have to take more breaks while traveling by air. I truly doubt they will get many answers out of him without torture, and never sure that gets you the truth anyway.
  6. I know, @Gary L, he had just either gotten back from a cruise or was leaving on one when this was posted...
  7. Rory and Slav disappointed Victor, as they should have. The return trip was relatively painless. Slav gets one more night with Rory, but they need to get looking for a larger house. Slav has decided to be more open, and that can be good or bad, only time will tell for sure. Can't wait for further adventures if they are to come.
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    Chapter 4

    I know that Fennrin isn't really army, did not get much training; but even he should have realized the second he knew that no one was on guard that something was wrong. He should have gone straight to shadow or really screamed as loud as possible. Well, the Captain makes it clear that he despises what he has become, but he did it to help him people when this war, not because he wanted to gain the abilities.
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    Chapter 9

    Hearts not true, and oaths that can be bought; both lead to tragedy. The hope has to be that enough are true, and enough remember the oaths and honor them. Many good men will perish by the decisions of those foolish and vain.
  10. My favorite genre, some wonderful stories and authors. Thank you for the dive...
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    New Orleans

    Well, much as asked by @VBlew, was this an ordered hit; or are they after the data? What self-respecting agent doesn't carry a gun?
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    Chapter 3

    Starting to dislike the Herald more than Ainreth. Honestly, getting a little annoyed with Fennrin that he can't see what an ass the Herald is. Love that Ainreth writes trashy sex books. Petre is a delight as is his friend.
  13. The Warlock was blinded by Septimus, or more likely his torturers. He gained the gift of prophecy from this. Does he serve Septimus, or just answer his questions? Judayah is evil, not just because he betrayed his order and oaths, but because in the end he only cares about himself. Rae knows the others are coming, but surely someone suspects a trap. What did the Warlock see in the last chapter?
  14. So, the Warlock and Rae come face to face, so to speak.
  15. Truly a wonderful story by one of the site's most gifted authors..
  16. Louis is really lucky to have Eileen in his life. I just love her, says what she thinks and backs it up. And you can tell that she truly does care about Louis, not just as someone she is involved with workwise, but as a person. Louis and Charlie and finding more depth to their relationship seemingly on a daily basis. Wonderful how they can talk and the conversation just flows whether it be work, interest, or personal. While I would put nothing past Graham, I could see his work being the cause of Daphane's death, but not him doing it himself. Don't think he has the balls for that.
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    Surf’s Up

    Well, Will got rid of Medusa and for his reward got to top another needy bottom, but one with power and influence. Will really did find the perfect gift for Travis. If everyone thinks that Kendo did that to the tires, why is he still there? Is his talent enough to keep him on the show, or is there another reason he manages to stay around? I am glad that Travis and Will got over their current issues, but does anyone think there won't be more drama as long as Kendo is around? Why didn't Will arrange for him to be gone when he was getting rid of Medusa, they could have slithered off together.
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    Chapter 2

    So, we get another look at Yarima, she actually seems interesting, when she isn't trying to kill Ainreth. And what does she expect, Fennrin loves him. He will do what he can to protect him. We also get our introduction to Denir, the reasonable heir. I wonder if he has any abilities. The Queen might be crazy, but would replacing her with Yarima be in better? I can't see her letting her brother just assume the throne.
  19. Judayah is truly evil and I hope he gets what is coming to him. He better leave off Tobias, Carel would not like it, and if he upsets him, he upsets the Warlock. Jamal lets curiosity guide him and he finds the perfect shelter with water and wood for a fire. The perfect place for them to ride out the storm.
  20. I have to admit, not much into the Olympics this time either, not sure why, just can't get that excited about it. Much like you, never enjoyed going to a bar alone. Even when traveling, don't mind eating alone, but going to a bar alone was always a step too far. Nice when a mixed group, although this wasn't that mixed can just all have a good time.
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    Chapter 1

    Ainreth and Fennrin seem awful trusting of what they are being told by the deserter. Yes, he could be telling the truth, but this could be a plant to draw them into a trap. The place is bound to be full of those with dual abilities or more, and the security would have to be beyond tight.
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    London

    What a lovely but truly dangerous rumba, and it has just begun. Let's hope no mistakes happen.
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    Chapter 22

    The Herald may well be right, but I don't like it; and I do not trust him, can't put my finger on it, but in this I think Ainreth is right, the Herald is trouble. What in the world did they just do? How much is this going to cause issues? And for the love of God, don't tell anyone until the two of you get a handle on this.
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    The Promise

    I truly hope that Travis comes to realize that Will is right about Kendo. I don't always agree with Will's judgement on everything, but on this I think he is right. Let's just hope that Travis realizes it before it becomes an issue. I totally understand Travis turning to JP, and I think JP's advice to both of them was spot on. He is still the best. Travis has to understand that Will is under pressure from Harvard as well, maybe not the same level that Travis is, or just of a different sort, but Will needs down time as well. Will has to have time to do the things he cares about, not just prop Travis up because of issues in his life and work. I am a little surprised that no one in the family, Jake perhaps, has not spent a little more time around the set or checking in on Travis.
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    Chapter 8

    Kaylen and Tomas both realized immediately that John, King of that name, did not mean what he spoke. They will be ready, as I am sure that Kaylen will be released from his order. Could the Grand Master find out something from Rome, how tied is the order to Rome? So much going on, and so well written. This just continues to draw one in.
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