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Daddydavek

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  1. I'll take Isabella over Aidan's parents. Michael is a friend and thoughtful too. I wonder where his love life is going...maybe a spinoff???
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    Chapter 9

    Mea culpa on the name screw-up in my comment above. I've fixed it.
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    Chapter 9

    Mr. Griffiths is a quintessential bullying knucklehead and I too wonder what Jock is up to?
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    JV Chapter 6

    Mr. Wright is definitely a guardian angel while Davies' dad is demon. With his passport impounded, I suspect the dad will not be able to follow his family to the UK anytime soon. Mrs. Hill is another sweetheart. Davies family should fit in fine and there is certainly plenty to see and do in London.....
  5. Matt I've enjoyed watching you grow, become more confident, and learn to embrace who you are and what you want to do. I hope you continue to learn and grow throughout your life. Congrats on your 10 year anniversary at Gay Authors!
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    Catfishing

    While I pity anyone whose life is so bereft of meaning that they have to create a false persona to generate positive feedback and even resorting to making up stories about illness or death to generate sympathy, I have no patience for such manipulative liars. I think watching the daily news gives us plenty of real world accounts of tragedies without anyone passing off a false one as true. If such a person has gift for writing such tragedies, write a story, that's what this site is for.
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    JV Chapter 5

    The tour of Canada sounds a bit much. The call from Davies brother is another cliffie....
  8. Well now, it looks like Aiden might have pulled the rabbit out of the hat and handed it to the one person who could best use it. Too bad he didn't come with the bargain....
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    JV Chapter 4

    In view of the sudden stroke at the end of this chapter, I now regret my prescient comment at the end of the last chapter!
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    Chapter 69

    While Wade seemed to have figured at least part of it out, his surprise that Alex's mother was having an affair with his father seemed real.... Alex and his father(?) have a frosty relationship, that suddenly turned cold stone dead. If Alex's dad didn't arrange for the attack on Goodall, was that E. D. also? Still more than a few loose ends to wrap up. More please!
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    Chapter 20

    October 29th and into the early hours of October 30th and floating bombs are exploding into fire and a brig is also set to be fired by a fuse or slow match. Hopefully, the next chapter comes along quickly!
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    Friday

    Ok, he was more invested in Simon than the first chapter revealed.
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    Wednesday

    Max has experienced a teachable moment. And hopefully he learns from it before he gets both physically and emotionally hurt. Meeting strangers through an app is inherently dangerous. Doing it as an underaged 16 year old who looks even younger is dangling bait to trolls.
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    Chapter 37

    Kieran and his cohort look to be getting ready for a crash course in power and how to handle it....whether the realms are ready or not.
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    Chapter 68

    Some people age better than others. Those that try too hard to avoid the effects of aging usually come off looking a bit contrived. Will's advice to relax and be himself was the best advice of all. I'm still looking for a Granger fix....
  16. Well that went swimmingly!
  17. Steve is resorting to stealing jokes from his great-neices?
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    JV Chapter 3

    Through three chapters and all seems to be going swimmingly....I wonder how long that will last?
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    JV Chapter 2

    Mr. Wright is generous to a fault. Somehow that raises a few suspicions.... On to chapter 3!
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    JV Chapter 1

    Davies Walker has a boss with a good heart. Alberto is a gem. Preston Wright seems like a stand-up guy too. Mrs Walker seems firmly under the thumb of her barrister husband. It looks like it's a bit uncomfortable too. On to chapter two!
  21. Great job on the prompt lines: This particular quote made me smile: "Bill shouldered his own a moment later. “It may never get here. Still, we’d better make assays while the sun shines.” He grinned. "
  22. Mine too! Thanks @Defiance19 for sharing!
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    Chapter 1

    So dad is a cop....where does the money come for them to live in a gated community and Owen to have a Ferrari?
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    Chapter 67

    Glad to see more of Will. As this chapter reminds us, he is still only a senior in high school and has a lot of time before he can really settle into a lasting relationship. I seem to recall a lively discussion some time ago as to where he would go and I don't think that has been revealed yet? I hope some of your readers go to youtube and listen to some of the songs referenced in this chapter. JJ and Will is a dynamic that will continue to evolve with much brotherly one-upmanship.
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    Chapter 8

    Closed minds don't change.
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