Not how i pictured Will and Zack's encounter, but we'll see how it eventually works out.
JJ is another person with a problem which hopefully he can gain some insight into from a therapist and not just a pill pusher....
More please.
Probably more truth than speculative fiction, albeit presented in a funnily uncouth way!
Although I find it hard to believe any sentient race would be unaware of security against hacking....The old "knowledge is power" bit.
There may be a big difference between users and abusers but it can become a fine line that is easy to cross. I wish Chipper well, but he may be a bit too trusting with people he doesn't really know.
Well the two partners, removed from their former roles, sure didn't waste any time in revealing their true feelings for each other! I'm also ready for the next chapter!
Just got a chance to read this opening chapter and I love this edited version even more! So glad you are posting it on this site! I'm ready for chapter two and the arrival of Clay and his son Mason!
Interesting that Brad still hasn't figured out how to handle JJ and just as interesting that JJ hasn't figured out how to handle Brad.
Actually, I think it's more peculiar that JJ hasn't figured out how to handle Brad because that's what kids do to get their way.
But they are both so self-involved and take their family for granted....
I think it's time for Will to figure out how to deal with Zach and maybe end it sooner rather than later.
More please!
Good job Carlos. I think you hit all the right notes with Carson, Chipper, Christina and Carolina. The chest hair pulling is typical of infants/toddlers and if you wear glasses they reach for them too... Sort of a cliffy on how the performance goes though.
More please for this sad old guy who needs the distraction!
Poor Chipper, life can be distracting enough without the family drama from his sister's soon to be ex!
I'm still trying to adjust to these mini-bytes after all the chapters that were over 5K in your other books...I think some of your other readers are too.
It took me about 40 chapters before I got used to Mann's 1k chapters. Perhaps a 2k format twice a week would be a bit more satisfying?
@Headstall With the calendar no longer showing birthdays, I can only find out by searching for birthday wishes a year ago. So if we missed one last year there is no easy way to learn of a birthday. Same goes for new members....
1k chapters are easier for me to get in while chasing the grandson, but they always leave me somehow unsatisfied.
But of course I already love the story trajectory.
I love how you provided the baby's first words.
I too am looking forward to see how Chipper does.
edit. (Damned android tablet always changing what I type! Although I make plenty of mistakes on my own too.)
OK, the new source of energy or type of energy that produced the white light has me exhilarated and concerned. Exhilarated in that it appears to be a game changer; concerned in that Kieran may be overconfident in his ability to control it. In any case, I can't wait to catch up with Ranevargar and see how he is handling things.....