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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    GMA XVII

    Brad's perspective on that war is authentic...and so are his ongoing problems. Hopefully, his support network will be sufficient. Diaz was dealt with, but somehow I think he got off to easy and I suspect CJ thinks that way too. However, Owen did the responsible thing and CJ understands that too. More please!
  2. Daddydavek

    Offering

    The beast in Jed and Wolfie seem to have reached an accommodation and level of trust. Larry is something else and I suspect even he isn't sure what. Maurice is another freak in a story that seems to be filled with them.... The good news is that the sex is first-rate! More please!
  3. Somehow I expect Heath to take an active interest and a direct intervention to see Sparks job takes a turn for the better... Oh yeah he is really into the youngster with the unbelievably sweet ass.
  4. "If I had followed my better judgment always, my life would have been a very dull one." Edgar Rice Burroughs
  5. Daddydavek

    GMA XVI

    Bret knows how to handle his hot headed Cubans! And the devoted dad and son are quick to kiss and make up!
  6. Being a bit possessive is not a bad trait. Obsessing and thinking your BF is/would be doing something behind your back is destructive to your relationship. Never having any straight friends except his straight friends is a bit unusual and I'd advise you to respect boundaries and encourage the others to respect them too. That's all you can do and hopefully things will sort themselves out over time. The relationship is only just a year old and it should be growing for the rest of your lives if you nourish it and each other.
  7. One of the most romantic proposals ever! Just superb!
  8. Daddydavek

    Secrets

    Wolfgang shook Larry's hand the blood drained from Wolfgang's face which tells me he has already learned something.... More please!
  9. Daddydavek

    Chapter 19

    Rhys and Kieran are a powerful duo and the common sense of the others is a truly steadying force. Allies are good. Big and powerful ones are even better. More please!
  10. This story flows well and fast! Now I'm wondering if Wolfgang will reciprocate and be able to take Jed's passion? A whole week?
  11. The bunny isn't only lying to Heath, but also himself. I suspect a reality check is due. At least I hope so!
  12. Daddydavek

    Chapter 14

    Thank the goddess for the Connor!
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    “Humans murdered my parents and your mom,” Chris said, not waiting for Rory to finish. “Left them for dead in the middle of a road like roadkill. Have you forgotten that?” The dialogue goes on to state that and worse had happened to others who took refuge in Portento from the humans. The bias against humans is rooted in fear and hate and that is a powerful combination. Accordingly, I can't hate Chris for feeling the way he does and I doubt Rory does either. If I was a betting person, I'd say it would take a miracle for the town to accept humans or for them to accept Rory mated to one.
  14. Just getting caught up after a very busy week and had to stop by and add my:
  15. Daddydavek

    GMA XV

    I find it hard to believe that events that I remember as a twenty-one year old, happened more than fifty years ago.... CJ's timeline has moved beyond real time and I suspect that there will be some momentous events that will be unanticipated and that CJ and Owen would find interesting. I thought the reveal on Fire Island was a nice touch...I could of done with a bit more description of the eye candy though. Owen and CJ are good people. Brad was doing well when CJ stopped by, but recovery from severe trauma has its good days and bad days both physically and psychologically. More please!
  16. Daddydavek

    Aha!

    Enjoyed the story...thanks for sharing!
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 9

    While the town has its secrets, it appear that Biosense does too....including Kiyo.
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 8

    Well at least Marie has it figured out: “It must be amore a prima vista.”
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    Rory has it bad. Really bad. And somehow I don't think anything dad says will change much, alpha dad or not.
  20. Daddydavek

    Chapter 5

    Still intrigued...and Rory is the alpha in waiting and Milan is his mate (to be)!
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    I'm curious what Biosense is working on and why it's located next to a town with werewolves....and if the medicine for Milan is somehow part of the research?
  22. Daddydavek

    Chapter 3

    I admit this genre is not my usual pick and I generally don't get beyond one or two chapters....however the writing and the characters have me intrigued and I'm going onward to see if it continues to catch my interest.
  23. Daddydavek

    Chapter 21

    @Wayne GrayThe scene at the police station worked well and I think it added to the flow and logic of the story. I didn't really want to call too much attention to any changes as I was enjoying the story like it was completely new again.
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 21

    Love the story and the tweaks you gave it before publishing it here on GA. It flowed better and was just so readable that we got so involved with the story that we didn't even really have a problem with the Italian dialogue as it was all just seamlessly done. Great job on a suspense filled story with several plot twists that worked out well. I look forward to what else you bring to GA...perhaps more about Harlan?
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