Daddydavek
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This is the best chapter yet. Kieran and his pack have thus far eluded the high king and his lords but they ended up in Maynor 's realm. Kieran is the human form of himself...Will be be able to figure that out and get his companions safely back, or must they muddle on in this more magical realm? Thanks for sharing!
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Kaleb sounded like he was the one on a sugar high for the whole chapter! I think the new parents are really gonna need a lot of help and thankfully they have a more than helpful family! One baby is a lot of work. Two is three times as much work because of the interactions between the babies in addition. Three is beyond comprehension! I think perhaps they should invest in P&G who makes Pampers as they are going to be using a boat load.... Great chapter and thanks for sharing!
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"l'chaim!" Great story filled with personal touches and a great back story on 21! Thanks for sharing.
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Chapter 24 Disneyland and FireFighters
Daddydavek commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 24 Disneyland and FireFighters
I admit I was more than a bit distracted several times while reading this chapter, which took me all evening to do. However, I can't help but say that I was really beginning to think that Jamie was a bit dimwitted and his excuses about contacting Ben were just too weak to be true. Other's have said they both needed a good slap and I have to agree. Now if they can keep their heads out of their asses and not stuff it up again, just maybe they have a chance. Ok, given Jamie's record, that may be a bit of wishful thinking..... -
I suspect that the opal channels energy from the other dimension. In my opinion the real danger is that Kieran wield so much as to be "burned" by it ...
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I found it realistic and more than a bit sad. Dan's life sucks and now so does Jaylen's. Cory has lost his partner and his "spirit" to get back into a relationship. Seth is a douche. But the others could and should find some happiness, so yeah...I 'd like some more too.
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I'm really enjoying this story...and it seems Rhys and Kieran are beginning to...:-)
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Readers, why do you read a story but not Comment?
Daddydavek replied to Former Member's topic in The Lounge
I try to leave a comment, unless I have nothing to say that hasn't already been said and there are already several. If I start a chapter and get interrupted, I may not get back to it unless I really like the author and/or it really drew me in. Finally, I try to say something positive. -
It started with some of my favorite tunes and ended with Happy Birthday! My only complaint is no drawing of the tattoo! As always, thanks for sharing!
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I understood that the opal turbo charges Kieran's basic abilities. I just got the impression the candle flame seemed harder.
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Making a visible arrow that hangs in the air that others can see is easy, but making a little candle glow is difficult. I am having a hard time understanding the optics, or perhaps Kieran is making it harder than it is??? Geston seems like a bit of trouble perhaps under the influence of the other dimension. Kieran and Rhys having all night and soon to be sharing a room...it's about time! More please!
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Tonyr is on to something and it they are using Ozzie's sister 's eggs then CJ will be donating the sperm. So much is covered in snippets in their uber busy lives that I am still a little breathless. Time to read again to see what else I overlooked.
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I have to re-read this a bit later. Too much to process at 5:10 am.... But as always thanks for sharing!
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While I realize 2018 was trying for you, I am forever grateful that you finished "Jonas"! And I hope your projects for 2019 are just as enthralling!
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I suspect that Kieran's own little group will keep getting stronger and present an ongoing dilemma for the elves...and their king. I also have a feeling that the gay feelings end up prevailing in the long run but as our author has indicated this is a lengthy story, not without setbacks.
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Good for Ethan. Good for CJ. Good for Thiago. A flat bagel with a schmear...I'm surprised you didn't think that needed explaining.
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Read and loved it but been too busy to comment sooner.
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"The New Year is like turning a page hoping the story continues but somehow gets better."
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I've waited for someone to comment on CJ's comment about the really great author who wrote "Melvyn Ford"...
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A broken wrist...that apparently did not require surgery and hardware to repair still sucks for six weeks! Nadine and Thiago face a decision with real consequences either way... The Springsteen theatre experience sounded wonderful! As always, thanks for sharing.
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and my prayers for you and your family!
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Authors, how do you reply to comments by readers?
Daddydavek replied to Aceinthehole's topic in The Lounge
As a reader and a writer, I think comments deserve a response, at least a short one. Some authors are really clever in their responses and some readers are too. While I have my moments, mine are usually fairly ordinary, but I hope writers and readers appreciate that I took the time to comment or respond to one.- 42 replies
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Good thing Ozzie's a lawyer and not a surgeon....the way they landed sounds like a broken wrist or arm may be more than a possibility.... Other than the bad landing, I think this book got off to an epic start. Thanks for sharing.
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"The LORD bless you and keep you! The LORD let his face shine upon you, and be gracious to you! The LORD look upon you kindly and give you peace!"
