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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 19

    Schemes inside of schemes. Who survives? Did Corbin kill Harris? we need the next installment pronto!
  2. Daddydavek

    GMA XIV

    Lola is hand gun if I remember right and I wonder if the murder of crows was intentionally vague? Lobster and wine including a new one for Ozzie's list. Still worried about Brad....
  3. Daddydavek

    Chapter 18

    Harriss vs Luca? Throw Stefano into the mix and I wonder who prevails and if Corbin and Paul survive?
  4. Daddydavek

    Chapter 17

    The bad guy is about to be in town and he has a plant who has wired both Paul and Corbin's homes for sound and video. I hope Harlan is a good bad guy and that Corbin and Paul keep a gun handy and maintain situational awareness. Lucca could be in on it all and also could play a deciding part in how it all plays out. I'm still hoping for a happy ending but it is certainly looking a bit bleak.
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 16

    Zampa is a cat and certainly has her favorite. Paul is a good guy and Corbin is trying to be one too being worried about Karen and her new friend Timothy. There sure does seem to be a lot of interconnected stories going on for such a small town. And finally we are given a glimpse of Harlan. Is he a threat and a tool of Lucca or a guardian angel and a tool of Lucca? Perhaps we will find out in the next few chapters. I am certainly looking forward to reading them.
  6. That was sweet and hot at the same time...and yes Heath is falling hard for the bunny and the bunny is not the scared rabbit when it comes to Heath. I suspect that they will end up owning each other's ass and probably sooner rather than later.
  7. Daddydavek

    Chapter 15

    Robin, where have I heard that name before? EDIT I couldn't let it go...Robin from Chapter 1...now that's a surprise! Paul's job is a dangerous one and he was lucky to survive. Corbin is in the cross hairs but so is Stefano and Hailey is a small town.
  8. Daddydavek

    GMA XIII

    Matching Squad tatts seems like it will be a thing. Amazing what they find on road trips but somehow they always find wine. More please!
  9. Daddydavek

    Chapter 14

    The question is Luca an ally or devious foe...time will tell.
  10. Daddydavek

    Chapter 9

    Anton is a scoundrel that we probably haven't heard the last of... Rupe is flirting and not just joking with Jeorg as I see it.
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 13

    While much has been revealed, I get the distinct impression that there is much more to the story and its various levels of complexity....
  12. Daddydavek

    Chapter 8

    Poor Rupe, I hope his blade work is better than his judgement in ever trusting Anton.
  13. Well that was certainly keeping it professional! Heath may have just solved his problem with blue balls and Aiden is likely to quickly become a lot more experienced...
  14. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12

    Harris must be a long ways away from being in the field. Who in the security business leaves a combination on a safe at the last number to open it? The blue mug that was from his daughter keeps being mentioned and I suspect we may eventually find out why...
  15. Daddydavek

    Chapter 7

    I'm beginning to really not like Anton.
  16. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    I suspect the lurching carriages on the uneven track, the house of ancient appearance and the tumbled heathland show a less than grand manor house awaiting the prince, his brother and the newly elevated rinker?
  17. Daddydavek

    Chapter 5

    Anton is scarred and still a bit resentful over his own mercenary use of his sex and still well below Rupe's station. I wonder how long it will take Rupe to come to that conclusion. Gilles is accommodating and I wonder how long before he wants to be accommodated by Kreech?
  18. Daddydavek

    GMA XII

    The car seat was a nice touch and a little detail that many would never think about! Thanks for sharing! Another chapter in two more days please!
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    Rupe is an old soul in his mid twenties as shown by his reaction to Kreech and Giles.
  20. Welcome to Gay Authors! I too have read some of your earlier works on other sites and look forward to reading more!
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 17

    Yikes, yikes and more yikes! What a revolting development this turned out to be! The troop just can't catch a break!
  22. Daddydavek

    GMA XI

    He's alive and will now face the hard part, living. The support system will be crucial...even if he pushes them away.
  23. @Graeme said: " always keep in mind the end goal. Work out how you want the story to end, and then write in that direction. Don't lose sight of that goal, because that's how you can write yourself into a corner. If you know where you're headed, that will help remind you to leave an escape route to allow you to get to that goal. Meandering on your way to the goal is fine, but don't forget where you want to finish while you wander." In my experience this is a truth worth repeating!
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    Still loving the story, but now I have my doubts about the FBI as it seems there is a mole...and somehow Harris does not seem so reliable.
  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter 10

    Just got to this and see that Corbin has committed to stay in a big way. Now on to the next chapter!
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