Daddydavek
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Don't over think it too much regarding the other reviews. One of the problems with a serial story is that people start relating to it in a very linear way. Having gone back and reread the story, I see how you are developing the diverse threads in their lives and I have great hopes you can tie them all together down the road.
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I figured that they would choose the Big Easy. At this point, anything that keeps them together is the best work around. Since I figure you know the city, you can really take advantage of the locales, describing them from a personal point of view. Good job Robert! Now more of the Barry, aka Bulldog and Dave show!
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I caught some Britains Got Talent from last year on YouTube and the winner was Collabro. Here they are singing: "How Will I Know" at Brighton Pride 2014
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Teenagers finding their way....a way which can have many forks in the road. Life is a journey and your characters will find there are always some bumps in the road too.
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I'm sorry for your loss. Hug!
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What Are We Walking Toward?
Daddydavek commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in What Are We Walking Toward?
The carrot and stick approach does seem a bit obvious on the part of the FBI and Barry and Dave clearly saw through the motives of the AD and the Bureau. Still, there are the upsides and it is worth considering..... -
Chapter 9: H-Power on the Arctic Circle
Daddydavek commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 9: H-Power on the Arctic Circle
Information, disinformation and misinformation and the manipulation thereof seems to be a universal human trait. -
For those of us old enough to remember watching the original Star Trek episodes as they aired in the sixties over the course of just three short seasons, none of us could have envisioned the series would become iconic and spawn the conventions and later movies that it did. I was an avid fan then as I had already become something of a sci-fi fan. Nimoy as Spock was a cool example of clear thinking and a perfect foil for Kirk. Bones, Scotty, Uhura and the rest were really an ensemble cast in a series before much was made of such innovations. Leonard Nimoy, RIP
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I just finished reading this story. I must say I found the slavery to be reprehensible and despite Damien's attempts at reform it really remained an odious practice. The plight of Kayden had him reduced to a quivering animal. Yet somehow your story drew me in and I kept reading and saw a transformation in all the characters except Roman. And he got his just desserts. Well done and congrats again on the Amazon deal! DDK
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The tulips are lovely! The idea of either Pvt. Tim with or without Jeremy's suggestions taking over writing is enough to scare Mark's more reserved fans into a panic. Hopefully the hiatus does not turn into a sabbatical.....
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Congrats!
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Chapter 8: Dryads and Dead Zones
Daddydavek commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 8: Dryads and Dead Zones
The Romanov's may have more than just one 'problem' member... -
James' mom said it best and gave him something to think about.
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More support for Sammy and another solid performance. Nice job. More please!
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OMG, Earth! What a surprise!
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Chapter 7: Telepathy and Cartels
Daddydavek commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 7: Telepathy and Cartels
Learning to block and filter does seem a pre-req for a telepathic. -
You are very welcome! I do plan to do a follow-up down the road but I don't see it happening until next year. I am a slow writer and I usually do just one project at a time.
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I don't like to see your characters get hurt either! Please hurry the next chapter....
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Chapter 6: School Days
Daddydavek commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 6: School Days
Why do I suspect that the Romanov convocation included some who have their own agendas? -
Dave did the right thing by getting the shrink. I wonder what plans the AD has? More please!
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Not how I expected that chapter to end either.....Let me just echo Normischell
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James has talent, a caring heart and an independent streak. Sammy didn't back down either in asking the hard question: (Would there be any pie left for James?) More please.
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Thanks for my Jonas fix! But I'm getting way curious about the "person" Opie has in mind for Jonas.... More, please!
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They just might have a chance..... More please!
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Your lack of output has been missed, but life does intrude at times. So TCB and we will just have to be patient.....
