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  1. Daddydavek
    Miles Long wrote in his review of Chapter 2: My gratitude for this chapter oddly does not curb my avarice for more...please and thank you. I just wanted to second that reaction!
  2. Daddydavek
    This is a great story and I recommend it to everyone!
  3. Daddydavek
    The lensing idea was part of the plan from when I first began the story. I'm glad that it was well received! Hopefully, I will get my ass in gear and get the next chapter ready in time! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
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    Glad you like it. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
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    Finally, got my internet connection to GA back. I think of it as Abel III finally letting us into his relationship through his log notes.... Whenever hacking into a large database, it is only a matter of time before it gets noticed. Even in the 28th Century!
  6. Daddydavek
    I have deliberately been delaying their romantic side to build it up. I think it worked and I'll let you be the judge as you get caught up with the story. Still replying from my cell phone. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    It's alright to have a romantic side. Abel III has been longing for romance for a long time. Still replying from my phone. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
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    Nellies was fun to write about too and I have been to a place just like that. I'm replying from my phone as my u-verse won't connect to GA since early this morning. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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    Chapter 2

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Talk about a couple of really nice birthday gifts! Cam and Brad? Now there is an age difference. Matt putting in a room for a sling--Sweet! More please!
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    GaryThanks for the praise! I will try to live up to it as I write more about Abel III's adventures! Dave
  11. Daddydavek
    Abel III has a strong psychic gift which he is still developing and learning about. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    Jim What an awesome review! I am glad that you like Abel III's story! I plan to post a chapter every Saturday. Thanks again, DDK
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    Interesting in that Abel III has provided crumbs describing them and continue to do so. From a telepath's point of view, looks are not nearly as interesting as what's inside and that carries through in Abel III's logs...
  14. Daddydavek
    Truly a comic genius and a serious actor as well.
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    Chapter 4 Earth

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 4 Earth

    I assumed that is what you meant in my reply.
  16. Daddydavek
    You've made a very important observation. Abel III is a lot different than his dad. However, his life experiences have been a lot different too and those are what has shaped him. Perhaps you might want to consider that silencing means locking down a person's shields permanently.... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
  17. Daddydavek
    Abel III is very hungry for romance and yes he does find it....eventually. Thanks for the compliment! And thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hey Gary, glad you are giving it a chance. The first couple of chapters provide a lot of background details to give some relevance to how things work in that time and place. If you see something that doesn't make sense, please let me know! Thanks again for reading and reviewing! DDK
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    Thanks, and yes I wrote way too much about that and had to edit it down. My intention was to show that being telepathic has a down side in that it is too easy to become a voyeur but it just didn't add much to the story so I edited out a lot. The lensing capability is even more important in coming chapters...
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    I'm glad you liked it and appreciate that you did the cheer leading!
  21. Daddydavek
    Thanks for sharing and I am waiting on the next installment!
  22. Daddydavek
    I really loved the pacing and flow of this tender chapter. Well done!
  23. Daddydavek
    Well I do have an outline of sorts, but the chapter got too long and too involved in the sexy cruise ship and I had to edit quite a bit. Thanks for liking my story and taking the time to review too!
  24. Daddydavek
    I just hope I can keep posting once a week, but that is my goal. Dennis (Brian?) does seem to be one of kind and I am glad the story is keeping your interest! Thanks for your review and the PM too!
  25. Daddydavek
    You are very welcome. I have been at it so much the last two days that I hope I am seeing it clearly and it came out the way I wanted. I usually take a day off and then go back with fresh eyes and point of view before posting, but I wanted to get it out. However, it looks like I will be going to posting only once a week on Saturday for the foreseeable future.
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