Daddydavek

Hot casual, sexy blowjobs are always fun, but with a married man that wants more of a relationship and is 10 years older? Not too smart. As an older married guy, it is always flattering to be able to attract a younger unattached stud. But starting a relationship is time consuming, especially when you have responsibilities including a family. Divorces are messy and VERY expensive. As well as being emotionally draining and who wants to deal with that? Sounds like something anyone would do well to break off at once, especially on the part of the unencumbered party. At 26 finding someone with the right "chemistry" who is available is not all that difficult. Meanwhile our hot young stud can enjoy all the eye candy the beach affords.

Tori is a grade A bitch with a mean, nasty streak. Our hero knew that and still went and pissed her off; on purpose. The old saying about "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" is equally applicable to a pissed off bitch. So I guess, our main character has brought down "Gehenna" on himself. Playing with fire really can get you burnt.

Sexually speaking, our three malcontents, seem fully engaged but temporarily satisfied, so they can do some thinking with their other head. Seems their enemies have been fully engaged in finding them as well, so it appears their tryst, as exciting as it was written over the past two chapters will abruptly come to an end. Hopefully, there is an escape hatch and not a cliff-hangar.

Well poop! Not the chapter, but my reaction to how our multi-specie being (Glory) continues to be treated. Mr. Fougue has been too smug in his beliefs and certainly needs to be taken down a notch. Valentine is headed for the dungeon and may be forced to endure Pixie's company. All in all, not a very nice way to treat a guest. Nephy, can you stretch this out for another 4-5 chapters? Please? And don't overdo the cat persona!

It seems the story will not be hurried. Gonzo and Henry are starting to sniff the drug connection. Joel and Lisa are headed back to the guest house and to talk to Trevor tomorrow which may be their final undoing. Jim and Dirk maybe get a pass for turning themselves in after the 17th(?) and the wicked witch and her dirty cop are still plotting. Sanchez is not snoozing either. Warning, Warning, danger ahead!

Gathan and Kristin, acting like they will be separated for a school year...somehow, I don't see that happening. Somehow she has become a vital foil for one of the main characters in the story. Will and Brad enjoyed surfing and then Brad calmly accepts Will's confession like a benevolent priest and assigns hail mary's (as in extra community service). Somehow, it lacked the emotinal punch I was expecting. I actually pictured Will becoming so fearful of Brad's reaction that he waited until he could tell Robbie and Brad together. I know the episode in the gay bar sparked a huge amount of discussion in the forum and chapter comments. While I didn't expect Brad to go ballistic, I expected Will to be a lot more fearful that it wouldn't go well and that he would want the cover of Robbie being present. Children often over/under estimate their parent's reactions. Robbie still has his own guilt about Brad and Will's abduction in Paris and the mix could have been cathartic. Just saying!

It is your story and I don't have to like how it is going. And I don't. I found many parts less than believable. Guys who are cold cocked with a nearly broken jaw, do put ice on it, but don't grab a bottle of warm white wine and slink off to someone's house. They may call someone and ask them to come over, or ask if they can come over, but to interrupt? These guys are supposed to be in their 40's. Coop is a terminal f**k-up. Hooking up again with Kyle was as stupid in this context as Coop's falling for Chase after 20 years---and how does the chapter end? With Chase at the door with flowers and Coop getting all gooey. Phooey! The reactions from Spence and Sebastion were only slightly more realistic. Spence new what happened and let Kyle talk him out of it----not gonna happen. They know each other too well. Again, it makes for drama, I just have a hard time finding it reality based. {Edited in 2018----This is an example of a chapter comment that looking back has me embarrassed. While I'm not saying my opinion was B.S. I do recognize that I probably was injecting my personal bias into another author's story in a way that was less than diplomatic or appreciated...despite what JWolf says below!}

Interesting by-play with the lawyers and of course JP dropping his bombshell news. The tidbit about the relative wealth or lack thereof concerning Kristin's parents was also interesting, as was Stef's clear threat on the realestate deal The only question I have, is that the meeting seems to have got off the track Kristin wanted to pursue. She did not want to have someone else appointed her guardian until age 18, she wanted emancipation from minor status. As such she would not require a guardian as I understand the law. Is it different in Ohio? She is 17 after all. Her threat against her father also seems to have been conveniently forgotten, except perhaps by Kristen....

Somehow, with all the set-up and plans enumerated, I suspect our devious author has something completely unexpected to develop in the next couple of chapters. Our intrepid hero Trevor and his current side-kick Shane may actually see some 'old west' style action soon and very soon.

Short, dramatic and not so sweet. Not exactly Pandora's box, but nasty never-the-less. This could be short story as we've been warned the next chapter is set in 2012. Hmmm, 210+2012=2222. Numerology? Energy overload?

Well the sudden flight gave them some time together, but it seems it is still the little heads getting all the action, not that i'm complaining. Still wondering where this is all going.

Well now, I am not a cat person. Neither am I much into vampires. I am a dog person and the only character outside of our multi-faceted hero whom I like is Rover.... I am looking forward to seeing what happens when the master Vamp returns. Nephy, your use of descriptive words is almost poetry at times; but I swear you come from a really dark place as it manifests at it's peak when describing existence at its lowest. The beginning of the first chapter was exquisitely described as he awakened, cold, hugging the ground under the tree. It built from there.

Now that is quite close to a cliff-hangar.

Chapter 1 sets the stage richly with some fascinating ancient far east history references, which should be perhaps called folklore. That is always a good place to start a tale. I look forward to the next installment.

Well now, our anti-hero's fall from grace is all but complete. I guess I just expected better. The proverbial shit hitting the fan often leaves detritus on more than just the intended. The old saw about you can't throw dirt without losing ground is still true and I suspect more of life's hard knocks are on the horizon.

Hopefully with all the groundwork laid in the last several chapters, the pacing will pick up a bit as a confluence of events seems imminent. Trevor and Shane would seem to be in for some more unwanted excitement and perhaps a shared panic attack.

Glad and surprised to see chapter 11 up today. Thanks! Still not sure how powerful Jiovanni will be or whether Micah will make it through his ordeal. I agree with Nephy that only Cody seems to be in decent place. I wonder how Vincent would feel about how things have turned out?

Read through the 10 chapters and was repelled and drawn like a moth to the flame throughout. I have never understood the need for bondage, pain or submission on a physical level, much less an emotional one. Somehow, these 10 chapters expained it a little to me. Now I wonder how Jonnie will make it to 18; whether William will win him over through persistence and possibly caring; whether Micah will still want him at 18; whether Jonnie will prevail in court; whether the people who had his father killed can do further damage; if those people include Micah's dad?

I find it all very interesting that Mark's readers are so divided on this point. The chapter has many elements including Steff's being clearly unhappy at Will's happy ending display. If Steff who is Mark's most liberal character is unhappy, then I am glad that Robbie and Brad were not there and that their reaction will be after the fact and hopefully after some time when cooler emotions can prevail. I said in my comments on the chapter review that I though Will's dancing on display with a pole to a "happy" ending was shocking. I don't think it was unbelievable. Sexually active kids today are more comfortable with their bodies and with Will's "development" he has nothing to be embarrassed about. Brad was a risk taker sort as a teenager in his time too and so I don't think he will go off the deep-end. As a midwestern grandpa, I subscribe to Mark's fantasy description in his forum post 7-21-11 at 3:50 p.m., I also realize that in real life things don't usually work out that way. Most young males at a party act pretty much in "the moment" so I can see where the scene Mark gave could happen under the parameters described. Of course now with facebook and other social media being so big, such an act in 2011 would be all over the internet within hours. Smartphones are such a pain!

Well now, that was not terribly catastrophic. It was however, shocking behavior for a 14 year old. I think Brad and Robbie would have been a lot less understanding than Stefan. Hopefully, discretion will prevail. Will has certainly developed a wilder side while in Europe. Good thing they are soon heading back to LaLa land.

Read thru 6 and into it. However, I wonder if bashing in the porcelin head will really destroy the evil spirit of the long hidden great-great-etc about 20 times uncle?

Reality strikes and Coop's fantasy world has collapsed. Chase is not only more entangled with Morgan, he looks like he is still married and has been for 14 years. I doubt this gets Coop off the hook with Kyle, Sebastion or Spence. Someone who waltz's back into your life after 20 years and misleads you about their past and tells you they did it because you wouldn't understand is a snake. Snake-oil salesmen don't change. Hopefully, Coop gets his act together and matures some more. A relationship built solely on sex is never going to work.

Punch and counter punch, will it ever be enough? While we've been given ample inspiration to hate Tori, her brother is only a notch higher. Taylor is player wannabe who has been played and now gives up his best weapon? Highschool drama about rich kids with huge insecurities, too much money, and not too much character. Maybe our hero will convince his dad to let him return to his old school and his old friends who seem more "real" by comparison.

Interesting bit about the dynamics between Gathan and Kristin. It seems he may have met his match. I still wonder if it can last based on their age and Gathan off to Stanford in the fall. Will's story is a bit more titillating which I sure enjoy! Unfortunately, he is head back to the U.S. shortly and somehow I don't think Berto will accompany him. However, I do think that bodyguard(s) will be along to the club and hopefully nothing catastrophically terrible will happen. Will has been through plenty on this summer excursion to Europe already!

Nice chapter. I like Scott more all the time, especially the way he thinks fast on his feet to ease a potentially awkward social situation. I can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes.