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    Mostly given.
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well that sucks. Elijah is enjoying driving home in his brand new SUV and has the earth fall in on him. Thankfully Tyler and his family are there for him. Letting him go home alone into the aftermath of a crime scene was not such a good idea. Elijah is still figuring out his sexuality, but he is reacting to Kage.... And Kage could be a friend or a foe, I'm hoping for a friend.
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    Chapter 35

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 35

    OMG! Will is taking it slow (for him) with Mike. Somehow I don't think this is a one-time hook-up! The info about the foundation was interesting and I expect Will shakes things up! Still have no clue how Jake and Brad work it out if Jake goes back on duty....
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    Moving Reasons

    Daddydavek commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Moving Reasons

    I enjoyed this short interlude with Fab and Thiago. James Potter, Debbie and Coco made favorable impressions. The schedule guy was a dick. Hopefully Mr. Potter can intervene as needed in the future, as being a dick is usually not curable. Impatiently waiting for your next missive!
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    The part with Ray was sweet. The part with Rusty was interesting. The part with Connor was where Jonathan should have ignored the group and walked away.
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    I've had my share of impolitic comments over the years!
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    It's all in the point of view whether it's flout or flaunt!
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    Chapter 34

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 34

    I think that Will is well aware that people will try to get close to him because of his money and connections and can spot them at 50 yards.....He didn't suddenly become uber rich and part of a super rich family.
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    If you've got it, flout it.
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    Chapter 34

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 34

    That last line got Will's and the readers' attention. I suspect that was entirely intentional. Now I'm guessing that Mike was egregiously wronged (in his own estimation) and it may cause him to drop out of school. Oh, the horror!
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    The soup kitchen work was practical and perfect and Maddox reacted perfectly. The play was a groping match and Maddox's role was funny but predictable. The make-out in the car was a cherry on top of the sundae!
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    There were plenty of children's books, but my first real long story was The Story of King Arthur and His Knights by Howard Pyle which I read when I was 10 or 11. I was enthralled by the Arthurian legend. Camelot, the Broadway Musical Play debut was in 1960 and the cast recording was a hit. The movie Camelot came out in 1967. It was gorgeously filmed and was based on the play. It is still one of my favorite films...
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    An even worse dad joke....
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    Chapter 33

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 33

    Nice one, except I hope Will doesn't forget to get Bongo a decent haircut!
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    I get the impression that Jonathan's parents treated him as a status symbol, never quite satisfied. Expecting kids to be transactional in their friendships is loathsome. Mad Dawg is concerned about Drew, who only kissed Jonathan when he wanted something.
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    CDMX

    Daddydavek reviewed Carlos Hazday's story in Fiction

    Book 14 of the CJverse is a masterful weaving characters and an episode foreshadowed in the story about his brother Ritchie's time at the Air Force Academy. As the episode in Cadet was never fully explained it became the longest running cliff hanger in GA history until it is finally revealed in this story. That the story has garnered more commentary than any of the other contemporary stories is a tribute to the author and the story with the general camaraderie displayed therein which carries over to the readers. Others have reviewed the story and mentioned the great writing. I'm telling you it's a great story told well. My hat is off to Carlos Hazday, may he continue to treat us with his ability to spin a yarn.
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    Chapter 32

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 32

    I thought that was the driveway in Malibu.
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    Chapter 32

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 32

    Blocking the car seems to be Will's go to solution to stopping flight syndrome... Brad and Will always find relief riding the waves. Loved the chapter. Travel safe!
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    I agree: Well Done Carlos! Late to the party and @tabaqui laid out all the points I would have made! Congrats on another successful foray into your well conceived CJverse.
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    The Inevitable

    Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Inevitable

    They are college kids and the ending scene confirmed it. The seduction of M.D. was complete and of course doomed Jonathan into realizing he is in love!
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    CDMX • XXXVI

    Daddydavek commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in CDMX • XXXVI

    This chapter was well told. It took us in with things going normally and then exploded while Northmann was plodding through his meeting. The planning and waiting until dark was nerve wracking. The final encounter was bound to be screwed up, plans usually are. And it was so like you Carlos to end with a cliff hangar on your longest running cliffie. Of course I'll be checking back frequently, impatiently waiting for the next chapter!
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    CDMX • XXXIII

    Daddydavek commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in CDMX • XXXIII

    I can think of at least 5, but why not start with one whose last name begins with A......or T.
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    So we have two gay boys curled up under a blanket exchanging histories.....And mom calls. Alright already, I'm waiting for the next chapter!
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    Chapter 60

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 60

    I will try to put some meat on your bones. What a great line coming from George to his fanboy!
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