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Cam tells Rory he will be staying a couple of weeks, and then he will move in...or on?
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From my reading so far, Mark is the complicated one and is a bit of a dare devil.
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While not shocking except to April and probably Jett, Sid and Jett's old man seem to have more than a little bit of history???
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Mark finally has found a reason for his "parents" behaviour....and of course it still sucks.
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Chapter 8 - Coming out to the world
Daddydavek commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Coming out to the world
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I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
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PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
Daddydavek commented on unilive's story chapter in PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
It was a fantastic night and it ended the right way, although some of the highlights getting there were pretty hot. -
I liked the flow and pacing of this chapter and the character development as well. Nice job. On a more detailed level, I liked how it built to a nice climax!
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Recrudescence - Word of the Day - Fri May 1, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I thought of this sentence when I saw today's word. " You thought your shingles outbreak subsided, but instead experienced a recrudescence of the virus. I first heard it from my mother's physician when she was there for a recurrence of shingles and the doctor called it recrudescence and gave the above quote. As shingles is a cruelly debilitating disease, I thought the word was perfect. -
I loved this chapter but fear Granger will feel obligated to Daventry to go to see the Tsar....
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Interesting about Brad's ongoing feelings about his grandparents despite Paddy's best efforts. I also found it interesting that the football players were interested in people who don't live in a gay bubble.
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Interesting jump forward in time and Kyle gets my vote for being interesting.
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Everything was going great until the last six lines.
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Ryan is a treasure and Danny owes Jake a coke....and is still a slutty teenager.
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Cam has found a little corner of heaven. And the vibe with Rory has strong sexual overtones.
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I also have a 1971 Sony TC-730 Reel-to-Reel Stereo Tape recorder with auto-reversing three motors and six heads which still works as well, although not as well in reverse as it used to....
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....Ummmm I still do. It plays fine to. I also have a Sony Discman....from the mid-eighties. It works too. I think that Jett and Tom are too much alike. Sorta like my daughter and granddaughter. They can get a rise out of each other with just a look. However, I have no idea what redeeming values Sid sees in Tom or why they spent nearly all night talking. And apparently neither does April or Jett. Missed any description of any interaction with baby Jay....
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Thanks for the early present!
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There's a little bit of slut in almost everyone and more than a little bit in many. Now I'm wondering if something did happen with Ryan....
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Brad's self-image acceptance to the point of appearing in an underwear add says a lot about his emotional and physical progress since the explosion. Good job. The idea of perhaps an even longer distance romance is less thrilling. Those things take a lot of commitment and work...which is why so many fail.
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I agree that Mr. Reilly's behaviour was uncalled for and probably counter-productive. I hope he gets laid soon and mellows out and figures out that screaming and yelling can't be his only modus operandi...
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I wasn't surprised that Jake sought solace with Danny or that it progressed to sex. Now I would be surprised if Ryan made it with the big guy...
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Granger is cool and handled Comstock with all the deference he deserved. He also is not worried about restocking supplies as he seems to have found an available supply to commandeer if needed.
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Reinforcements Have Arrived
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Reinforcements Have Arrived
April and Jett got it bad and it could only be better if Jett's dad packed up and got on with his own life. -
Danny got the school board to agree. Ryan's dad made a scene and actually learned from it. Jake's dad actually stood up for his son and was proud of him. Jake stood up for Ryan and made his dad proud. Ryan is learning to control his hair trigger and to stand up for himself! Nice job of writing!
