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Part 1 - Chapter 1 - Confession
Daddydavek commented on unilive's story chapter in Part 1 - Chapter 1 - Confession
I'm a bit late to the party, but it's off to a hot start! -
I didn't know band camp could be so depleting...
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A delightful story with a happy ending! Thank-you!
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So much in one chapter. The main thing is that David is taking charge and has some clarity about what he wants and what needs to be done to accomplish that. Now if he can just get his dad and grandad on the same page....
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Now that was a cliff-hanger!
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So it's not all sweetness and light for David...or Mark. That's hardly surprising but it does raise some more speculation and questions. The cameras work. But will they reveal anything? It seems our good friend the author likes to keep his cards close to his vest.
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Mullaney, that Mark's last name. Somehow I think that was an important piece of information.
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There are still so many questions about Mark, and let's not forget our little thief....
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David was so blinded by Mark that he didn't think to check out his room to see if anything had been moved. Granddad seems to think Mark is familiar. Makes me wonder if Sid would know who he is? St. Pat's Basilica, another thing I have to check out on line.
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"I was wrong." I'm guessing he wasn't awakened by someone entering...and now I'm off to the next chapter to find out. Maybe.
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Why do I think the title is revealing something about the missing bread...I just wonder who the little thief is and how soon he and David actually meet!
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I'm late to the party, but interested.
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OK, Jake is definitely gay and Danny is at least adventurous. Jake zeroed in on Danny's dad and his flexing buttocks in a telling way. But these guys are 9th graders and hardons are a fact of life several times a day.
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Wildone gets an "attaboy" for the shout-outs for @Dabeagle and @Mark Arbour
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JJ is actually beginning to grow up and Brad is Brad. Wade is a first hand observer and facilitator in negotiations between two of the coldest bitches ever written. Thanks for the story!
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I don't understand why Jett doesn't just throw the old fossil out. No one has a right to treat their children like grunts in boot camp.
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They say distance makes the heart grow fonder, and the distance in time between this and the last chapter bears that out. Thank-you! Thank-you! Thank-you! I hope your personal situation improves and that you and yours are staying safe during the current health crisis. As usual George has an eye for the men and I think the young Von Beckendorff is about to have a conquest of his own.
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Thanks! I thought the e-mail name was catchy and easy to remember!
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@wildone said: "Lastly, for those of you that work in healthcare, work in grocery stores or any of the other essential services that we are so dependent on during these times, we appreciate what you do and the risks you are taking to ensure we are as safe and can stay safe as possible . "
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Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Just When Things Were Going So Swell
Let's just say I am eagerly awaiting the fireworks to follow! -
Our hospitals and doctors are great at dealing with physical wounds. The invisible wounds to the psyche are much harder to diagnose, treat, or cure and can be intractable. While most people have heard of PTSD, most people don't know that there can be a delayed onset, sometimes months or years after the initial traumatic episode.
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Chapter 8 - In Full Bloom
Daddydavek commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in Chapter 8 - In Full Bloom
Sometimes dreams do come true and thrown-away kids survive and flourish! -
Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Don’t You Want To Fight For Me?
Carina, Jett and Theo/April all with an interest in Jay who is enjoying being the center of attention. I think things could be easier to sort out than the protagonists think. That's my guess and I'm sticking to it. -
I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. Thanks for reading and commenting.
