Daddydavek
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Great job and important info!
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As usual great job!
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Still not sure where this is going, but I like April's sense of humor and his ability to get in a few timely jibes.....even if it may cost him in the end!
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The comments are about as important as the story! Well said to both!
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Wonderful chapter until the cliff at the end!
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It is still a bogeyman and your chapter told the story well. With the CDC report just out this week highlighting the national increase in STD's it is a stark reminder for everyone to be safer.
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Now I'm looking forward to their time in NYC and hoping they have some interesting time before the show re-starts.
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Hurrah! Just the outcome I wanted.
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For Some Reason, I Like Blonds
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in For Some Reason, I Like Blonds
Haven't a clue where this is all headed, but I am enjoying the ride!- 23 comments
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It’s A Bouncing Baby Boy!
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It’s A Bouncing Baby Boy!
So April has a history with Jet and Jet is gonna figure it out eventually. The baby is another mystery seriously in need of solving. On to chapter 2! -
The doctor adroitly helped JJ realize a couple of things about himself and his family. She expertly pushed his buttons and used just the right amount of sass and wit to make him appreciate it. I think she will be worth twice as much as the pill pusher.
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The chapter is a building chapter and as revised, is very well done and an easy read. What's not easy is the emotions and problems the characters are dealing with and will have to continue to do so. Well done!
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We've been to a Neil Diamond concert...now a couple decades ago and he covered that song in the early '90's.
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Carlos, you nailed it...and I loved it!
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Court politics...I guess it's necessary but not really my thing and I think Kieran has to rely on Ranevargar's judgment because he would give it all up if he could....
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Great job on telling Greg's story and his point to Mason.
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@WolfM I think most authors continue to do research while filling in the details of a story, no matter how much they do upfront. I enjoyed all the replies. Thanks to Carlos and all who participated.
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Young people are always in such a hurry. I bet that coupling lasted less than 10 minutes! Chipper is right to engage a good law firm, especially using connections from the squad as the price cannot be beat! Now tell us you checked out the view from Westlight rooftop bar at the William Vale Hotel in Brooklyn. Here's the URL to a photo I found on line. You will have to copy and go... https://afar-production.imgix.net/uploads/images/post_images/images/cJxe143UaR/original_westlight-8.jpg?1502059529?ixlib=rails-0.3.0&auto=format%2Ccompress&crop=entropy&fit=crop&h=719&q=80&w=954
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Mason is crushing on Jeremy and has the erection to prove it. I'm ready for the next chapter which might have some drama....
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We learned so much and yet we don't know how this will play out. Ranevargar anticipates the best, but Maynor maintains a hold over Kieran and so it would seem in some ways the high king as well. Further I suspect that Pethron could be a problem, unless Pethron is really Rhys.......
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I will take the dark chocolate with caramel!
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Now this chapter left me wanting more bliss or is that Bliss?
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My impression is that this enhanced version is a much better read and that's saying something because I loved it the first time I read this on that other site. Twice a week posting also sound wonderful!
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Just the kind of song Adam would choose for a battle round. I must be getting used to these 1K chapters.....as I thought this one was just right!
