Daddydavek
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I'm glad that JJ has found friends his own age to experiment with and enjoy.
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The author has made it clear that they both considered this transactional. And thus for the adult, it is unacceptable behavior. Hopefully, JJ will get through this without feeling totally used later in life as he matures and comes to understand what being an adult means.
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Or an Audi? It seems there are a plethora of parents who upon finding their offspring is not heterosexual disown them like they were an old blanket they discovered had a stain that could not be removed...And yet these same parents supposedly were raised to believe "God is LOVE". The power balance between a homeless thrown away teen and any rescuer is huge whether the rescuer is one of the working poor, middle class or rich. People with nothing but themselves to give in appreciation should not be shamed and neither should anyone be surprised by it.
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Based on my meticulously close reading of this chapter from Johnny's point of view and the earlier chapter covering this same scene from Jason's point of view, I confidently conclude these two guys are directly on the same page and could be in it for the long haul.
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Loved getting to know Johnny better and Simon too. Poor Johnny, he really was all gaga over Jason before he even met him....
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A Night at the Theatre
Daddydavek commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in A Night at the Theatre
Loving the building relationship between Jason and Johnny....Simon not so much. -
I don't think we should be too hard on creepy Simon because we were all there watching in our mind's eye right along with him. At least I was and enjoying every gasp, groan, grunt, sigh, giggle and slurp of it! And for all those who think there can be too much sexual details in a story, all I can say is this isn't one of them!
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Been meaning to read this story for ages and I'm loving it!
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And like in California, the run-off filled with ash is toxic too.
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Catch-22 - Word of the Day - Sat Feb 8, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Unfortunately in life there are more catch-22 situations than you would think.... -
I'm in the more is better crowd. But, I'll take what you give us because I know how time consuming writing can be, especially when you try to get it right. Thanks for all you do...and keep on doing it!
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Interesting start but the beach season is about over and what will Chris do for work then? Seems George has been good to them but can he afford to keep them for free indefinitely?
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Scintillate - Word of the Day - Fri Feb 7, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Scintillating conversations can lead to physical coruscations further south... -
April is so into Jett and vice versa that I don't see any problems in them taking turns filling each other up when the time is right....
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Albeit usually a small treat!
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I am also ready for more! A lot more...
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Another good root word for amuse, bemuse
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Oppugn - Word of the Day - Thu Jan 30, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Whom are you impugning! (To use another variant of the root word.) -
More revelations which just show there is so much to learn....
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These sweet boys are so easy to like.
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Sometimes things just fall into place and work out. Hopefully James won't set too many traps for our young lovers....
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Just caught some time to read this and of course I'm hooked now....
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We Are Not Party People!
Daddydavek commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in We Are Not Party People!
What are the odds that baby Jay gets awoken by the party? -
Well Steve, I see you really can do the weekly update in your sleep....
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Just caught up with this and now I want some more!
