Daddydavek
-
Posts
12,222 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Daddydavek
-
Orson's empathy and compassion were exactly what was needed. Hitting Clay up with the question of Mason being a cop was inspired.
- 57 comments
-
- 13
-
-
-
That really was a cruel ending, but somehow I don't think April or Jett resisted their baser impulses....
-
A preoccupation with death can be fatal it seems. Well told!
-
Talk about things that go bump in the night! What a great Halloween story!
-
Loved it...would have loved it more with another 2k words!
-
I didn't like this part the first time I read it and don't much care for it this time. Clay not only didn't trust his son, he didn't trust Greg. After all Greg and Mason have done that wasn't called for. The parental reaction defense doesn't wash either as Clay admitted he didn't even read the material.
- 44 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
Rory has a choice, how much will be reveal to the council?
-
Yuli wants to like the perceived snob.
-
Jeff is so into April he can't act straight and April is putty in his embrace despite the mouthiness.
-
Due to my ongoing problems with my cold, and coughing up chunks, I respectfully decline to offer any comment except thanks for this chapter.
-
There is a real fraternity among most police departments and bros take care of bros is more than just a saying. Greg's immediate offer for Clay to bring Orson to the Refuge was no mere gesture but a heartfelt act of compassion and obligation for a wounded brother. Families pitch in and help and Mason surely gets that too as exemplified by his willingness and help. Sorry about the wind and fire danger in your area. That back-up generator and powerwall may both be in your future.
- 41 comments
-
- 15
-
-
-
Well Kieran is now fully apprised of Mr B's real identity and of his manipulation too as well as the complication of Rhys. Ranevargar is an ancient Elf and was high King before K's grandfather. Still no idea as to the new powers K weilds, their source or how K was gifted or why. More please!
-
I loved the chapter...still miss longer ones!
- 46 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
-
Thanks for this gem of a story! I really enjoyed the progression and growth in the characters and especially the bond between Damien and Gussie.
-
I cried the first time I read this. I bawled like a baby this time.
- 61 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
The cards keep tumbling.
-
I can't comment as I know what is coming next. However, I will say I didn't like the cliff the first time I read this story either!
- 55 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
-
Wes in jail....how delicious. Karma can be bitch is shown to be true again!
-
I still don't think their families have a clue! I also think Justin will be taking the evidence to the police....
-
Both Danny and Gus are about to face families that are clueless to the point of cruelty. I can't wait for the next installment.
-
Hopefully all the money and power in the world will be insufficient to get that snake out of it.
- 41 comments
-
- 10
-
-
James is more than a bully; more likely a sociopath. Gus and Danny have grown up a lot and I expect their parents will be surprised just how much.
-
A playmate for Damien, now that was a godsend! I suspect it will take a while to get him into a routine.
-
Justin has his hands full and it's only his first day of having his son in his care... I'm loving it.
-
Now that's just being obvious!
