NightOwl88

Abe is gay, Tristan is straight. Abe is in love with Tristan, Tristan is in love with Abe. Confused? So is Tristan.

Disclaimer: This story includes sexual and romantic situations between consenting individuals. Any allusion to illicit or illegal activity, sexual or otherwise, is used purely for enhancement of the story line and not promotion thereof. Also AIDS, HIV and other STDs are a very real threat, please always practice safe sex. I can prove copyright on this story as well as any other I might post. Please don't copy or remove this story for personal use without my permission.

When the laws you have sworn to uphold go against everything you belive in you become an Outcast, a Throwaway. Can an outcast ever truely find a new home, a new people. Ask Merek Tiberius.

Descriptive note: The Alvar are an Elf like people only more earthy and less ethereal, at least in attitude. Outcasts By NightOwl Merek knelt in the center of the long, modestly decorated hall. It had been a long journey from his village, now his former village, they had cast him out because he refused to play the role of executioner. Knowing that word of his so called treachery would spread throughout all of the human controlled countryside he had fled to the only place he

Hey Anyta, first off let me go on record as saying NO POST IS TOO LONG lol. I know it annoys folks when it takes me so long to update, all i can really say is that I am trying my best to be more consistant in my posting habits, it is something that is CONSTANTLY on my mind. I am glad that you enjoy how I use Elder in the story, as much as I love to bring him into I worry that folks might find his addition and behavior to be unrealistic. It really isn't the longer a horse and it's trainer are together the closer they will become. They are a good mirror for each other though, they share much the same issues. Elder isn't gay but he is mistrustful (the reason for which will be explained in the next chapter BTW) Billy's music was actually the first thing about this story that I developed in my head before writing it. I wanted it to become a real outlet for Billy's feelings, his anger and confusion and worry. We'll see more of it soon. The scene where he is playing for David i wanted to reminicent of a love scene, I there to be an intimacy in that moment between the two of them. I don't know if it came through like that or not but it was still a good scene. The flashback, i am glad it seems to have been well recieved because I worried it might not be clear that it was a flashback, i didn't want that confusion in there. Sam I wanted to be a cross between an over protective big sister and a mother where Billy is concerned, the only person who knows more about Billy than her is David, initially she was mena toward him because she saw him as usurping her position. I am glad you like how I show here character and you REALLY need to email me that word you were considering using because I am curious lol. There is more to Candy than meets the eye, but I can't say if that is good or bad lol. We'll see though I promise. I will do my best to get back to I.S as soon as i can. best, NightOwl

Ok all here is Andy's and Agaith's replies lol. I am glad that I.S is one of your favorite's it means a lot to hear that. I am glad that you like the chapter and the development between David and Billy. Billy's progress is one of the main reasons for the slowness of the development between thier relationship (the other I address in my post to Nephy). I didn't want to rush Billy's progress or make it seem like ever aspect of his issue was taken care of and wrapped up perfectly because it isn't realistic. Of course his change is going to affect David, it is directly tied to his interevention in Billy's life lol. I really wanted David to be conflicted, he came out the Templetons a little full of himself, a little self centered but essentially a good person, I wanted his personality to be changed by helping Billy; his conflict stemming from his desire to get what he wants, ( a relationship with Billy) and do what's right for Billy, (staying out of a relationship with him lol). David doesn't want to be hurt anymore than he wants Billy to be hurt, which I really think speaks to the progress he has made himself. Billy's discomfort with Candy's brests, honestly I can't say where that came from. Yes I'm a gay man but I have no issues with breasts or indeed the nude female form, i can appreciate the beauty that nature built into it, it's just not for me lol. I will let you know on that spoiler. Best, Nightowl Hey Agaith, glad to see you here, I am glad you love the story and you're right it has been too long, I promise i am working on that. I love to hear someone comment on my characterter development because that is a point that I always worry about. I promise that build if leading to an explosion and I promise it will be a good one. I am glad I make you feel something, especailly since it seems to be rare, best, NightOwl

Ok just to let everyone know ahead of time I'm going to split up my replies here because the folks who have so far commented left very informative posts that I feel need to be addressed properly, but I don't want it to be jumbled so I am replying first to Nephy and Benjin, then Andy and Agaith and since Anyata has the longest I'm going to reply to her singularly. I mean no offence and EVERYONE's posts are important to me, this just seems simplest. Hello Nephy, I am happy to have you in the thread, I can't help it, I mean it may seem like gold to me but I still sometimes worry that it might be drek, that is one reason i love posting here is because everyone is so honest in their feedback. I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter, and like the story. You're right, that really was the theme in this chapter, communication. Your right, if they were to talk things would be much easier between them, after a fashion, If they were to talk than they both would agree that it is a bad idea for them to become involved with each other and would resolve to keep things strictly platoic. The bad thing about that is though they neither of them want it to be strictly platonic. So they don't talk about it, they dance around the subject trying to find a happy medium, where they can be close enough to satisfy that desire, without hurting each other in the process because for the momment neither of them believe they can last long term. It is obvious what William is doing, but I wonder if it is obvious WHY he is doing it? We will see lol. The last part of the chapter it a sweet one. I figured it was about someone declared their love, even if it was just in thought forms. I am glad that you loved the chapter, I love that you do. Best, NightOwl Hey Benji, you know how much I love seeing you here, Things are getting interesting I agree, and they will get more interesting lol. Your clairvoyance is right on target as well, I am sure both of your ideas will come to pass, eventually lol. It would be interesting to see what would happen if William tried to hurt one of the boys, we might ahve to explor that possibility lol. Psychic horses...an interesting concept, he isn't really psychotic, he's just...missunderstood? Sam is though, totally nutso but in a wonderful way. Billy didn't really get away from her, he is still there after all and they are 'family' like before. Beside we don't have to worry about Sam's love life for much longer. I promise I will have the next chapter out as soon as I can, Your welcome and Best Wishes, Nightowl

Hey Yall, Sorry for the delay, life has been hectic. Indiana Summe CH12 is up and ready though. I hope everyone finds the chapter to be passable, I think it's a good one. Best, NightOwl. Chapter Link, Indiana Summer CH12 - NightOwl

Hey Sage, Sorry that I've been MIA again, I have managed to get to the most recent chapters on BSC. They've been really nice. I've enjoyed them. I am curious about who it is that left the rose and the love note. I hope to find out. I like the fact that Anthony is finally sort of coming around a bit. Although I'm thinking Shawn could use a real attitude adjustment sometimes lol Best, NightOwl

Interesting, very interesting. I can't vouch for the validity of the article or their subjects but hey if it is true then awesome. A lot of guys I know would be agreeing with the Aussie's though, most straight guys I know will barely even shake your hand. I wouldn't have any issues kissing a male friend on the lips in a non-sexual way, it's context and preception of an action that changes its meaning. Having said that though i think a quick peck on the cheek/temple/forehead would be more likely than on the lips.

Personally I think your totally messing with us again. I mean it just doesn't feel right. I mean what you've written of Keith so far this seems like the kind of joke he would pull. Not to mention this is also typical YOU, leave us with such a juicy bit of information then turn it into a total 180 of what it looks like or what we think it is lol. Either way i look forward to seeing what it is. BTW I was homeschooled but I won't peck you to death, I make no secret of the fact that when it comes to school politics/cliques I am pretty ignorant so no pecking lol. I'm sorry its taken so long to read the last three chapters of the story, and to get here. I've been scattered lately, I'm trying to work on managing my time better. Best, Nightowl

Benji, dude its been AGES! I am glad that you liked the chapter. You didn't really think that I was going to stop there did you? I mean COME on. Trust me things get hairy with Grandpa Mathews. It might not be the next chapter but I promise it will be soon, and I hope you enjoy it:devil: . Best, Nightowl, P.S Your welcome

Happy Birthday Momma Rush:2thumbs:

Hey yall, Sorry it took so long to get out you but Max and Josh Ch19 is up in efiction, I hope you all enjoy it. Max and Josh Ch19 best, NightOwl

Both of the situations have their merit. Being outted while popular, while it could and likely would, cause a certain amount of discomfort could actually be a good thing. If you are poplar enough and charismatic enough you could parlay getting outted into something good. You could redefine popularity in and of itself. (Feel free to call me naive or idealistic if you like, I'm used to it.) As for being a social nobody, well I don't really think it would make much difference; if you're that low on the social totem pole would it really matter? Sorry dude, I've been really out of it lately. I DO enjoy you're summeries though, I'm sorry for not mentioning it sooner. This one though has me a little confused, I dunno whether to take it literally or not (you've sort of hinted at abuse toward Liz) or if you're going for a metaphor, with you it is hard to tell sometimes. lol. Moving on though. I really like the most recent chapters, and I'm sorry its taken me so long to let you know. I like how you're advancing things, mostly and the introduction of Keith is great. I think both Shawn and Anthony need could take a lesson from Keith on relaxing a little, ESPECIALLY Anthony. Despite how much they want to kill him (and how amusing I think it would be to see them try) I actually like Keith. I hope things work out for boy's and I look forward to finding out. Later, NightOwl

Ok thats just...ouch....I feel sorry for the dude in the lavender shirt though...I mean I wouldn't want to anywhere NEAR those things.

Hey J, Why didn't you tell me sooner that you had started a thread for N.A.L.S. This is a great story and I'm happy to be working on it. I'll talk to you soon, Laters, NightOwl

Hey Agaith, sorry its taken me so long to get here. I am glad you love my story, I love to hear that. Don't worry about how long it took you to get here, I'm just glad you have checked in. I am glad you enjoy the mix of plots and perspectives in the story, it was my hope to create an interesting dynamic in the story by telling things from Zeek's POV. While I know no one who is completely blind I do have one or two friends who are visually impaired and do enjoy, and insist, on maintaining their independence. Infact my first ever Mentor/editor was legally blind and was a fantastic writer. Its just sad he never finished his story....but thats a tale for some where else. One of the things I wanted to bring to prominance with this story is how disabled people aren't the helpless shut ins that some people tend to think they are. I admit that Lou and Lawrences means of communication was an on the fly development, I suddenly had these two charecters with no direct means of communication lol. I am sorry you were up till two am, but I am glad you enjoyed it that much. I promise to have more out to you as soon as i can and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. BEst, NightOwl

Hey Andy, Nephy, Sorry I didn't get here sooner, I've been a little busy over the last few days. Hey Andy, Its always good to see you here, I am really glad you like how i have Zeek dealing with his issues. I did a lot research on the topic of coping with visual impairment and I took some details from a friend of mine who is visually impaired. I actually never really realised that almost all the fights have been experianced form Zeek's POV until you mentioned it. I meant to do it on occasion because I really wanted to showcase Zeek's worry and confusion over the situation, i suppose I just started doing it without realizing it. Interesting lol. I agree with you actually, you are not the first person to point out getting confused by perspective shift in my work. I constantly make a note to be more clear when i shift but I always forget about it. I will work on that though because I can understand the confusion that causes lol. I can only say thank you for your *backhanded compliment* lol. I do constantly try to refine my skills and my style and I am very glad that it is reflected in my work and not just in my own imagination. This story has actually always been the low man on totem pole when compared to my other two but I've been working on, as you say, polishing it up because it is very dear to me, just as my other works are. I thank you deeply for your kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy my stories. Best, NightOwl Hey Nephy, it is always a pleasure yo see you here. I am glad that I am impressing you, I do aim to please. I'm just that I have been able to hold everyone's attention since I came here. Best, Nightowl

Hey Cia, i am glad you stopped in. I am glad you loved chapter 12, you know how much I love hearing hearing that. The ending of the last chapter was my favorite part, it was exaclty the catalyst that Zeek needed. Often with people likes Zeek's mom it has to be something shocking that snaps them out of their behavior, its the only way it works. In her opinion it was a personal attack. She has been taking care Zeek since his child hood, when he went blind she never thought about him in a romantic relationship so when he fell in love with someone that had been taking care of him fo an equally long time she felt threatened lol. I liked the costume scene too, i wanted it to be kind of light hearted to counter balance the emotions from the rest of the chapter. I guess I'll have to go into hiding since I have two other stories to update first lol. I really wish I could tell you what was going to happen with Zeeks sight and his relationship to Jake. I guess it's fair to say there will be..ah..difficulties lol. Best. Nightowl

Hey Everyone, Lovers Blind 12 is up in efiction. I hope that you all enjoy it. So you know the drill follow the link below, read, and enjoy. Best, NightOwl Link me, Lovers Blind CH12

A very nice story Kanaya, I can deffinatly sympathize with Jared, I've had friends and family go through similar situations with abusive relationships. I think you showcased Jared's fear wonderfully, as well as his relief toward th end of the story.

I loved this story, it was a nice premise, falling in love in a day. very Serendipitious.

A very good story Graeme, very thought provoking. Almost a psychological case study with a dash of sci-fi tossed in.

I loved it, very Poignant. The love betweent he brothers was very touching; made me with I had a better connection with my older brother. I hate the fact that you left it in a cliff like that but it was fitting. Loved it, best, NightOwl