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Drew's Poetry Prompts - 4. Poetry Prompt 2 Haiku

Haiku 1
 
The winds sing today
From tenor to soprano,
The song continues.
 
 
Haiku 2
 
In melodic purr,
A snow white bundle of fur
Sleeps on this warm bed.
 
Haiku 2 was about Guero, so I think it is fitting to dedicate this poem to his memory. I love you, Guero.
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Mikiesboy

Drew, I'm outta likes but I'll come back. While I like the second one.. the first screamed YES! It was such a wonderful descriptions of the wind. It was terrific!
tim

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/28/2015 05:52 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Drew, I'm outta likes but I'll come back. While I like the second one.. the first screamed YES! It was such a wonderful descriptions of the wind. It was terrific!

tim

Oh wow! Tim, you're making me blush :*) It means a whole lot that the abecedarian poet himself thinks I did a good job :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/28/2015 05:55 AM, Headstall said:

Yup, like tim, the first one speaks to me... it's wonderful... cheers... Gary...

Aw! Thank you Gary! I never would have imagined that the first haiku would be so well received. Heck, I'm still blushing.

 

Again, thank you Gary :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/28/2015 05:58 AM, Defiance19 said:

Another wonderful job Drew! I know exactly the sound of the wind from your description..

Thanks Mama! :) I'm glad you liked it! :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/28/2015 06:44 AM, Puppilull said:

Haikus that mean 'Stay indoors'! LOL A very cozy picture, at least when you're on the inside looking out.

I know, right? lol. Yep, it was nice and warm inside, but outside, it is really cold.

 

Thanks for reading Puppilull! :)

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Lisa

Terrific, Drew! :)

 

I could hear the wind singing in different tunes, and I could picture a sleeping cat or dog on the bed.

 

Great job! :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 01/09/2016 04:21 PM, Lisa said:

Terrific, Drew! :)

 

I could hear the wind singing in different tunes, and I could picture a sleeping cat or dog on the bed.

 

Great job! :)

Thanks Lisa!

 

Between the two, the first one was my favorite to write. The second one, not only was my cat sleeping on my bed, he was hogging it :gikkle:

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Aviana

Both were so sweet!! The first one's description of wind's song from tenor to soprano was so superb.

N if m not wrong the second one is of a pet cat stretching in a warm sofa!! 

Wonderful haikus!!

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7 hours ago, Aviana said:

Both were so sweet!! The first one's description of wind's song from tenor to soprano was so superb.

Thank you Aviana! I still blush a lot when I get high praise for the first haiku.

 

7 hours ago, Aviana said:

N if m not wrong the second one is of a pet cat stretching in a warm sofa!! 

Yep, you got it! :thumbup:

 

7 hours ago, Aviana said:

Wonderful haikus!!

Thanks Aviana!

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raven1

I have had a long standing love for Haiku poems.  These are wonderful.  The tribute to Guero was a very loving remembrance.

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On 7/15/2017 at 8:03 PM, Albert1434 said:

Great poems:hug:

Gorgeous, I didn't realize I never thanked you for your comment. To make it up to you, I'll shower you with hugs and kisses! :hug: :kiss: x1000

5 minutes ago, raven1 said:

I have had a long standing love for Haiku poems.  These are wonderful.  The tribute to Guero was a very loving remembrance.

Haikus were always challenging and fun to write, thanks Terry! :hug: 

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