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Drew's Poetry Prompts - 3. Poetry Prompt 3 Lyrics

A New Christmas Wish
 
Finally, a man in my bed,
Just in his underwear.
Kissing from my mouth to my neck.
The fun’s just beginning.
 
Beep, Beep, Beep. It was just a dream?
Damn! No beau for Christmas!
I get out a pen and paper
And I write, Dear Santa.
 
I hope I followed the prompt by only implying my emotions. smile.png
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Drew Espinosa
On 12/26/2015 04:16 AM, LitLover said:

I hope your Christmas wish comes true next Christmas, Drew :hug:

By Christmas next year, I'll be at a university nearby a city. :) So hopefully, my wish will come true, lol.

 

Thank you for reading Lit! :hug:

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AC Benus

It's good, Drew! As far as the prompt goes, it asks for a regular rhythm alternating between 8 and 6 syllable lines, and you do that brilliantly. I'm very happy with your efforts.

 

Thanks for taking the poetry prompt challenge!!! :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/26/2015 05:39 AM, AC Benus said:

It's good, Drew! As far as the prompt goes, it asks for a regular rhythm alternating between 8 and 6 syllable lines, and you do that brilliantly. I'm very happy with your efforts.

 

Thanks for taking the poetry prompt challenge!!! :)

Thank you AC! Your words mean a lot to me! :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/26/2015 11:47 AM, Headstall said:

Great job, Drew... and you made me laugh... don't ever change, little buddy... cheers... Gary...

Thanks Gary! :hug: Glad I could make you laugh :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/26/2015 11:54 AM, Mikiesboy said:

OH in your dreams!! Lol.. I'm joking.. nice poem.. and i hope your dream comes true!!

Thanks Tim@ :hug: I hope my dream does come true. :)

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Defiance19

Lol Drew.. Loved the personal touch.. Good job and I hope you attempt more of them..
Now if mama can can talk Santa into making your dreams come true.

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/26/2015 10:35 PM, Puppilull said:

Just hold onto your dream! And keep doing the poetry prompts!

Thanks Puppilull! The next prompt I looked at was Meter, it's so intimidating, but it'll be fun to learn! :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 12/27/2015 07:55 AM, Defiance19 said:

Lol Drew.. Loved the personal touch.. Good job and I hope you attempt more of them..

Now if mama can can talk Santa into making your dreams come true.

I plan on doing more prompts and I might even post a separate story for poems that don't follow any particular prompt :)

 

Thanks Mama! :hug: I'm sure Santa will listen to a charming lady such as yourself.

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Lisa

That was great, Drew! Made me laugh -- Dear Santa... that was a funny touch. :P

 

Seriously though, maybe for Valentine's Day cupid will bring you a man only in his undies...lying in your bed...

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Drew Espinosa
On 01/09/2016 04:20 PM, Lisa said:

That was great, Drew! Made me laugh -- Dear Santa... that was a funny touch. :P

 

Seriously though, maybe for Valentine's Day cupid will bring you a man only in his undies...lying in your bed...

Glad you liked it Lisa! :) And I hope Cupid does send a man my way, hehe.

 

Thank you! :hug:

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Aviana

Hope your dreams come true:) 

A cute poem with an innocent ending...asking Santa for a gift...!!

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Drew Espinosa
7 hours ago, Aviana said:

Hope your dreams come true:) 

Hehe, I hope so too. :)

 

7 hours ago, Aviana said:

A cute poem with an innocent ending...asking Santa for a gift...!!

Huh, I never thought about the ending as innocent. Thank you for the insight Aviana! Looking at it like that, makes me realize it is a wonderful juxtaposition to the not so innocent dream. 

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raven1

What a fun poem that had me laughing.  When I was old enough to have those dreams, I had stopped writing Santa years before.  Did the letter work for you?

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Drew Espinosa
Just now, raven1 said:

What a fun poem that had me laughing.  When I was old enough to have those dreams, I had stopped writing Santa years before.  Did the letter work for you?

Thanks Terry! :hug: Nope, it didn't work. I was probably placed on The Naughty List that year, by mistake obviously. :P 

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