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Drew's Poetry Prompts - 10. Not A Prompt- In Love

I wrote this five years ago for a boy from another school that I had an intense crush on. :*)
Looking at this poem now, I'm embarrassed I ever wrote it, but I've decided to share it with y'all.
In Love
 
Your gaze sets my heart beating ever faster.
Your smile sends my soul into the heavens.
Your touch brings warmth to my entire being.
 
Happiness
Peace
Joy
Love
 
Because of you I know them.
Because of you I am whole.
My thanks go to Jamessavik, he inspired me to post it.
Finally, Happy Valentine's Day!
Copyright © 2017 Drew Espinosa; All Rights Reserved.
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Headstall

You shouldn't apologize for this, Drew... It's beautiful and honest... I would wish for such a Valentine as this, if I was that boy. Wonderful... cheers... Gary....

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Valkyrie
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It's very sweet and I like the form. The boy would have been lucky to receive it. :) Thanks for sharing. Happy Valentine's Day! :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 11:15 AM, Headstall said:

You shouldn't apologize for this, Drew... It's beautiful and honest... I would wish for such a Valentine as this, if I was that boy. Wonderful... cheers... Gary....

Thank you Gary. :*) After I posted this poem, my heart was beating so fast, I was that nervous. But, I've since calmed down, and I am kinda glad I posted the poem.

 

Happy Valentine's Day Gary! :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 11:22 AM, Valkyrie said:

It's very sweet and I like the form. The boy would have been lucky to receive it. :) Thanks for sharing. Happy Valentine's Day! :hug:

Thanks Val.It took a lot of courage for me to post this poem, but I'm glad I did. :)

 

Happy Valentine's Day Val! :hug:

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Page Scrawler

That was so cute and sweet, Drew! You should keep practicing writing poetry! :D I wish someone had written me a poem like that. :)

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 12:09 PM, dughlas said:

It is like you adorably sweet. Did you give it to him or simply pine from afar?

Thanks Dugh! I was an incredibly shy teenager, and I was even more so around boys I liked. Well, I wrote two poems, this one is the one I didn't send, because it laid out exactly how I felt, and I was too shy to actually give it to him.

 

The one I did send only hinted at my feelings, but I was able to pluck up the courage to send that one to him.

 

Hmm, maybe I'll post the other poem, next Valentine's Day. :)

 

Anyways,

 

Happy Valentine's Day Dugh! :hug:

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 12:25 PM, Page Scrawler said:

That was so cute and sweet, Drew! You should keep practicing writing poetry! :D I wish someone had written me a poem like that. :)

Aw! Thanks Page! I know I've gotten better at writing poetry, but I still have a ways to go. So, I'll keep on practicing. :)

 

Happy Valentine's Day Page! :hug:

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Mikiesboy

You're too hard on yourself ... it's lovely and a wonderful memory of a special time in your life. Thanks to James for encouraging you to post it.

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 01:18 PM, AC Benus said:

Yes, others have said it - it's sweet and sincere. Thanks for sharing with us, Drew.

Thank you AC. :) I never thought this poem would be so well received, then again, as Tim said above, I am too hard on myself.

 

Happy Valentine's Day AC! :hug:

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On 02/15/2017 01:56 PM, Mikiesboy said:

You're too hard on yourself ... it's lovely and a wonderful memory of a special time in your life. Thanks to James for encouraging you to post it.

Thanks tim! And you're right, I am too hard on myself. I'm like that with almost everything I do, and this poem is no exception. But, I am happy that everyone likes it, it means a lot. :)

 

Happy Valentine's Day tim! :hug:

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Ashi

The guy would be flattered if he read your poem. Maybe he will reciprocate the same feeling?

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 02:25 PM, Ashi said:

The guy would be flattered if he read your poem. Maybe he will reciprocate the same feeling?

Thanks Ashi. This all happened five years ago, and we were never a couple, it just wasn't meant to be. :)

 

Happy Valentine's Day Ashi! :hug:

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Parker Owens

It is very hard to bare your soul and be vulnerable, either to the boy you liked, or to a community like this one. This guy would have had a heart of granite not to appreciate a poem like this, though. It is true and lovely and beautiful; it is nothing to be sorry about. Happy Valentine's Day!

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/15/2017 11:54 PM, Parker Owens said:

It is very hard to bare your soul and be vulnerable, either to the boy you liked, or to a community like this one. This guy would have had a heart of granite not to appreciate a poem like this, though. It is true and lovely and beautiful; it is nothing to be sorry about. Happy Valentine's Day!

Thanks Parker. That vulnerability fed into my nervousness yesterday when I posted this poem. I am touched that so many like this poem, especially since I wrote it before I learned the mechanics of poetry.

 

Happy Valentine's Day Parker! :hug:

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Emi GS

Simple, honest and straight outly presented. I would have die for you if I was him. Why cute boys always be shy...!? ;)

 

Lovelier... :heart:

 

~Emi.

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Drew Espinosa
On 02/16/2017 08:15 PM, Emi GS said:

Simple, honest and straight outly presented. I would have die for you if I was him. Why cute boys always be shy...!? ;)

 

Lovelier... :heart:

 

~Emi.

Thank you Emi! :hug: Well, I was shy back then, but now not so much. :P

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raven1

Another wonderful poem with all the innocence of youth.  I went thru high school much the same.  I was shy and had a crush on a guy I thought would make my life complete.  It's a common event in human life. 😜

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Drew Espinosa
On 4/11/2023 at 8:08 AM, raven1 said:

Another wonderful poem with all the innocence of youth.  I went thru high school much the same.  I was shy and had a crush on a guy I thought would make my life complete.  It's a common event in human life. 😜

Goodness, I still can't believe I went ahead and published a poem I wrote in high school. :lol: Thanks, Terry! :hug: 

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