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The Last Boys in Clinton 1. Clinton Boys

   (6 reviews)

Prompt #9 - Creative scene by @wildone

You run into school knowing you are late, again. You quickly stop at your locker and ditch your jacket and grab some books. As usual the halls are quiet during classes. You dash to your classroom, open the door and start on your explanation and stop. No one is there. No teacher, no other students. You leave and look at other classrooms, all empty. You check your phone and it is actually a school day and not a holiday or anything else. What's happening?

Although it has the 'no sex' tag, there is some seductive talk.
Copyright © 2025 Lee Wilson; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (6 members)

  • Action Packed 5
  • Addictive/Pacing 4
  • Characters 6
  • Chills 4
  • Cliffhanger 4
  • Compelling 6
  • Feel-Good 4
  • Humor 3
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 5
  • Unique 3
  • World Building 3

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pvtguy

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

This semi-apocalyptic tale challenges the reader to consider what would one do if one day you awakened to find you seem to be the only one alive?  Luckily, there are others who survive what initially is a mystery.  Questions abound:  how do you survive?  When is taking what one needs for survival not stealing?  What happens when the majority of the elected government is wiped out at once? 

All these questions are dealt with in this relatively short story.  It does not answer all the questions raised in the story, which I find satisfactory as life does not answer all questions, but rather challenges us to find the answers as we live the experiences which form our lives.  Of course, this allows for an author to write sequels....hint! 

Lee Wilson is a gifted writer.  it is definitely worth reading and pondering this story and the questions it raises.

Response from the author:

Thanks a lot for the great review. Yeah, I have done a number of sequels that were initially unplanned, haven’t I?

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centexhairysub

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

What happens when you discover that almost all those anywhere close to you are gone in the blink of an eye.  What would you do, and would you have what it takes to survive.  Could you help others, or only worry about yourself?

An interesting story that is attempts to answer these questions, well written as always and the characters were truly memorable.

I think most that give this story a shot will enjoy it.  The two main reasons it lost a star for me were the lack of closure, yes, I realize that there may well be a sequel for the three boys, but so many other stories were left with no real answers.  The other was the lack of menace for the type of story it was.  I don't mean death and gore, but the fear of what was going on seemed to be missing for me, but neither reason is strong enough to keep me from recommending this story to all.  

Response from the author:

Thanks. I appreciate the honesty. Fear, like many emotions, are definitely a weak spot in my writing. I’ll review this closer when I begin a sequel and try to close any open points.

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weinerdog

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

I will refrain from saying too much about this for apparently there is a sequel coming. But I put 5 stars here so people might read this before the sequel.You'll enjoy it 

Response from the author:

A sequel won’t be close to right away, already have one done for tomorrow, and 2 more started. But thanks gor the 5 stars.

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ReaderPaul

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This was a well-written tale and a story to be enjoyed, despite the fact that the author should have been more aware of places with similar names for the lab and the fact that prevailing winds normally blow from west to east.  (Another author, on another site, named a fictional city in 2004 and gave it a fictional location, only to be informed that there was a real town of 3,000 with the same name at the location he gave as fiction for a city of 125,000!)  Sometimes Google Maps can be your friend.  In spite of a couple of drawbacks like this, I give the story five stars because it is such a pleasure to read -- once you get past what happens in the first two chapters, and questions start being answered.

Suspense builds as more questions are raised and questions are answered.  I recommend this story as a good read that intrigues, interests, and involved readers.

Response from the author:

Thanks for the review, but believe it or not, I googled Mission Critical Labs. The first response was a generic definition of what a mission critical lab might be. The second said this (bold highlight mine):

Mission Critical Labs was formerly a consultancy on the edge of San Francisco's Mission district.

And the wind can blow whichever way an author wants it to in fiction. According to Merriam-Webster, fiction is:

1a: something invented by the imagination or feigned

2a: an assumption of a possibility as a fact irrespective of the question of its truth

3: the action of feigning or of creating with the imagination

I’ll make enemies saying this, but if a book says a man can walk on water, come back from the dead, and a whole host of other impossible things, the wind can blow in whatever direction I need it to.

Sorry to pick on your review, but it’s a major pet peeve of mine when someone says “it isn’t like that” for one part of a movie, story, whatever, when the bulk of the rest of it is unreasonable.

If you all can believe someone can invent a chemical formula that cures cancer but kills you if you don’t have asthma, the wind blowing the wrong way is the bigger issue?

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chris191070

· Edited by chris191070

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

This is a truly amazing response to Prompt #9.

Read on to discover what happens when two friends, run into school and find no-one there.

It's difficult to say much more, without giving anything away, especially as there is likely to be a 2nd book, sometime in the future.

Response from the author:

Thanks. Build up the curiosity for future potential readers.

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