Billy Martin

Good Luck!

How very observant of you. To be quite honest about it I have no experience at running, except running late for stuff. I had wanted Sammy to be fast, but perhaps not world record fast. Thank you for reading my story and feeling compelled to comment on it.

It's back up now. I hope you like it!

OOOooooopppssss did not mean to publish... not finished!

The Field of Love Chapter 9 After Sammy had been hastily ushered into the surgical waiting room by one of the nurses, he glanced around the room and noted a 40-inch flat screen TV tuned to the Weather Channel with the sound turned off. A family of three sat across the room from Sammy with the woman, whom he assumed was the mother, whispering to her small child. The little girl looked to be around the age of four and clearly didn’t like what she heard, as evidenced by the frown s

What would you prefer?

Your observations were spot on and what I need to make my work more enjoyable to read. I assume you are interested by your post. As I posted, I use goggle documents program to write and give my beta and editor total access to the chapters at their convenience. I can e-mail you the link to my documents and then give you access.

Sorry it's been so long, but life has a way of changing one's priorities, but here I am attempting to finish both The Field of Love and Trials and Tribulations; however I am seeking both a beta reader and an editor. Here is a post I left in the writer's corner. Due to the length of time between posting. I've lost contact with my beta reader and editor, one to death. I've authored Trail and Tribulations, 2011 Readers Choice award winner. and beginning to restart The Field of Love story. I begun work on chapter 9. Therefore, I am seeking both an experienced beta reader and an editor to assist me in this endeavor. Send me any questions you may have. Here is what I am working on now. After Sammy had been hastily ushered into the surgical waiting room by one of the nurses, he glanced around the room and noted a 40 inch flat screen TV tuned to the Weather Channel with the sound turned off. A family of three sat across the room from Sammy with the woman, whom he assumed was the mother, whispering to her small child. The little girl looked to be around the age of four and clearly didn’t like what she heard, as evidenced by the frown she wore. The father’s eyes were red and his face wet from what Sammy thought had been from crying. He stared out the windows behind Sammy with a sad expression. His eyes osculated between hope and despair as he searched for answers. Sammy looked down at his blood covered hands and leapt to his feet. He had an urgent need to wash Tony’s blood from his hands.The little girl was staring at him wild eyes and opened mouth when she noticed Sammy for the first time. Sammy felt guilty for shocking the child. Quickly muttering an apology to the girl’s mother, he turned to exit the room as fast as he could. But the father of the little girl blocked his way. “Are you okay son?” the father asked with concern noticeable in his voice. Sammy looked into the father’s eyes and saw that the man had a good spirit. “Yes, sir. A friend was hurt and I need to wash up. I want to feel that my beta or editor likes the story's characters almost as much as I do and wants to protect them even from the author. For sure there is room for open discussion. I use google documents so that at anytime my beta/editor can make suggestions/edits as they see fit. There is as much time as needed within reason and given life situations we all have to navigate. As for story reviews, Trails and Tribulations was written prior to GA up grades. You are free to look at the reviews and comments left at the time.

I want to feel that my beta or editor likes the story's characters almost as much as I do and wants to protect them even from the author. For sure there is room for open discussion. I use google documents so that at anytime my beta/editor can make suggestions/edits as they see fit. There is as much time as needed within reason and given life situations we all have to navigate. As for story reviews, Trails and Tribulations was written prior to GA up grades. You are free to look at the reviews and comments left at the time.

Thank you. I'm ready to write again. And it looks like you're practicing to edit 😉

Thanks

Due to the length of time between posting. I've lost contact with my beta reader and editor, one to death. I've authored Trail and Tribulations, 2011 Readers Choice award winner. and beginning to restart The Field of Love story. I begun work on chapter 9. Therefore, I am seeking both an experienced beta reader and an editor to assist me in this endeavor. Send me any questions you may have. Here is what I am working on now. After Sammy had been hastily ushered into the surgical waiting room by one of the nurses, he glanced around the room and noted a 40 inch flat screen TV tuned to the Weather Channel with the sound turned off. A family of three sat across the room from Sammy with the woman, whom he assumed was the mother, whispering to her small child. The little girl looked to be around the age of four and clearly didn’t like what she heard, as evidenced by the frown she wore. The father’s eyes were red and his face wet from what Sammy thought had been from crying. He stared out the windows behind Sammy with a sad expression. His eyes osculated between hope and despair as he searched for answers. Sammy looked down at his blood covered hands and leapt to his feet. He had an urgent need to wash Tony’s blood from his hands.The little girl was staring at him wild eyes and opened mouth when she noticed Sammy for the first time. Sammy felt gulity for shocking the child. Quickly muttering an apology to the girl’s mother, he turned to exit the room as fast as he could. But the father of the little girl blocked his way. “Are you okay son?” the father asked with concern noticeable in his voice. Sammy looked into the father’s eyes and saw that the man had a good spirit. “Yes, sir. A friend was hurt and I need to wash up.”

Thank you

Due to the length of time between posting. I've lost contact with my beta reader and editor, one to death. I've authored Trail and Tribulations, 2011 Readers Choice award winner. and beginning to restart The Field of Love story. I begun work on chapter 9. Therefore, I am seeking both an experienced beta reader and an editor to assist me in this endeavor. Send me any questions you may have.