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ascendancy - Word of the Day - Sun May 10, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The concept of ascendancy—referring to a position of dominant power, influence, or the process of rising to such a state—is vital for crafting compelling narratives by driving character evolution, shaping power dynamics, and building immersive worlds. It dictates the stakes, structural arcs, and thematic exploration of ambition, morality, and change. The importance of ascendancy when writing stories: Character Arc and Motivation: Ascendancy provides a clear, high-stakes trajectory for characters, often involving a "leveling up" or transcendence of mortal limitations. It enables the exploration of how power shapes—or destroys—a character's psyche. Structural Power Struggles: It is foundational to plot, establishing hierarchies and the conflict that arises when a character challenges the established order, as seen in the Path to Ascendancy series. World-Building and Stakes: The concept allows for building complex, often "arcane" systems of power, where characters might ascend from mortals to godlike figures. This establishes a "sense of wonder" or looming threat, essential for engaging readers. Thematic Depth: Ascendancy allows writers to explore "gray areas" between right and wrong, forcing characters to make difficult choices that define their morality. It can represent the triumph of will, but also the potential loss of humanity as one rises higher. Understanding the distinction between ascendance (the process of rising) and ascendancy (the state of being in power) helps authors refine the pacing and thematic focus of their storytelling. -
ascendancy - Word of the Day - Sun May 10, 2026
Bill W commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
"Ascendancy" (dating to 1712) refers to a state of dominant power or influence, formed in English from the adjective ascendant (from Latin ascendentem) combined with the abstract noun suffix -cy. It stems from the Latin root ascendere ("to climb up", "go up", or "rise"), combining ad- ("to") + scandere ("to climb"), which is also the root for ascend + the suffix -cy, denoting a "state of being" or quality (similar to infancy or supremacy). The term comes from the phrase "in the ascendant," which originated in 17th-century astrology to describe a planet or zodiac sign that is "rising" on the eastern horizon and therefore has "predominant influence". It refers specifically to a state of governing or controlling influence (e.g., "gaining dominance"). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun ascendancy is in the mid-1700s, with their earliest evidence dating to 1744 in the writings of 'H. Polesworth'. The variant ascendance appeared slightly earlier, in 1742. The word was formed within English, deriving from ascendant + the suffix -ancy. Ascendant (adjective & noun, around 1386) is the person or thing that is rising/dominant. Ascendance (noun, 1742) a closely related synonym that sometimes emphasizes the act of rising, while ascendancy usually refers to the state of being on top. Ascension (noun, around 1315) is often used for religious or formal upward movement. -
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Leverage in storytelling is the strategic use of narrative elements—such as tension, emotion, and structure — to amplify impact, maximize audience engagement, and achieve a specific goal with "less effort" or resources. It is the process of turning a simple anecdote into a powerful tool that resonates deeply, builds trust, and influences behavior. Here is the importance of leverage in storytelling, broken down by key areas: Maximizing Emotional Impact and Retention: Brain Engagement: Stories that leverage emotional, personal, and well-structured narratives (introduction, conflict, change) engage more of the brain, making the message up to 22 times more memorable than facts alone. Creating Tension: Leverage involves managing uncertainty. By highlighting a "porthole" or a specific, high-stakes moment—like Luke Skywalker aiming for the small exhaust port in Star Wars—storytellers can amplify emotional resonance, making the audience feel as though they are experiencing the tension themselves. The Power of Change: The core of effective storytelling is the transformation at the end. Leveraging this change helps pull the audience along emotionally. Strategic Communication and Influence: Building Trust: Leveraging personal stories or customer case studies allows brands and individuals to build authenticity and trust, rather than simply buying attention. Driving Action: A well-leveraged story with a clear, emotional call to action can move an audience from passive listening to active engagement. Simplifying Complexity: In areas like research or marketing, leveraging simple, specific anecdotes helps cut through the noise, making complex ideas relatable to a broader audience. Efficiency and Resource Allocation: Doing More with Less: Just as financial leverage multiplies returns, storytelling leverage uses a single, well-crafted narrative to achieve multiple outcomes. Repurposing Content: A single story can be repurposed into a blog post, video, or infographic, providing a high return on investment (ROI) for the time spent creating it. Scalability: Systems can be built around storytelling to deliver messages at scale, which is crucial for building a personal brand or company culture. Creating Shared Meaning: Uniting Audiences: By tapping into universal themes (struggle, triumph, tragedy), stories act as a unifying force, helping different audiences relate to one another. Internal Alignment: Leaders can leverage stories to communicate core values to employees, creating a shared frame of reference and fostering a strong organizational culture. How to Apply Leverage in Storytelling: Capture Emotion: Actively look for experiences that trigger emotional reactions, then capture them for later use. Use Visuals: Use visual storytelling (e.g., Canva-made infographics or short videos) to grab attention quickly and convey complex messages. Storyboard First: Plan your story using a storyboard to ensure a strong first impression. | Focus on the "So What?": Ensure your story answers the audience's question, "What does this have to do with me?".
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Leverage" originates from the Old French levier (12th century), meaning "a lifter" or "crowbar", derived from Latin levare ("to raise") and levis ("light in weight"). It reflects the Poto-Indo-Euroopean root legwh-, meaning to make something "not heavy". The term signifies using a mechanism to make a heavy task light. Leverage is closely related to words conveying lightness or raising, such as: alleviate (to make lighter), elevate (to raise up), levity (lightness of manner), and relevant (to raise up/bring to bear). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun "leverage" is from 1724, appearing in the London Gazette to describe the action or mechanical power of a lever. Originally was formed by adding "age" to the noun lever, OED cites usage from 1297 in [Robert of Gloucester's Chronicle], and referred to the mechanical advantage of a lever. The first figurative use of leverage was in 1858, and used for influence or power to accomplish a purpose. Usage of the financial sense of the word leverage was 1933/1937 and used to describe using borrowed capital. The verb form of "leverage" appeared in the 1930s, with OED evidence from 1937.
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Have you ever wondered what smells spiders hate? Spiders primarily hate the strong scent of peppermint oil, as it overwhelms their sensory receptors, acting as a natural repellent. Other effective, strong-smelling deterrents include tea tree oil, lavender, eucalyptus, citrus (lemon/orange), vinegar, and cinnamon. These scents disrupt their ability to navigate and track prey.
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The concept of dominion—defined as supreme authority, sovereignty, or control—is a fundamental pillar in storytelling, serving as a primary driver for plot, character development, and thematic depth. It explores the tension between power and responsibility, and the consequences of exercising authority. Here is an analysis of the importance of dominion in storytelling: Driving Narrative and Conflict: Power Struggles: Stories often revolve around characters seeking to establish, maintain, or overthrow dominion (e.g., political thrillers, fantasy epics, and dystopian fiction). Moral Turning Points: Dominion serves as a catalyst for critical moments, showcasing how authority is used—or abused—to shape the world within the story. Character Development and Responsibility: The Stewardship Model: True dominion, often seen in narratives exploring leadership, is framed not as exploitation but as responsible stewardship—a "shepherd" model of caring for the vulnerable. Internal Mastery: Beyond external power, dominion represents the internal discipline and control over one's own mind and character. The Pursuit of Purpose: Characters exercising dominion often transition from victims to agents of change, pursuing authority to flip oppressive circumstances. Thematic Exploration of Values: Critique of Power: Stories often examine the "darkest of times" when the pursuit of dominion turns into tyranny, causing suffering and challenging the moral compass. Redemption and Authority: Stories of redemption frequently explore how a character moves from misusing power to using it for the greater good. The Evolution of Beliefs: Narratives can explore how ideas themselves exert dominion, reshaping cultural standards, such as the rise of empathy or the value of the individual. Setting the Stakes: Colossal Consequences: When the stakes involve "dominion" over a kingdom, planet, or society, the narrative gains an epic quality, forcing characters to face profound ethical dilemmas. Humanity vs. Nature/Technology: Stories often explore the limits of human dominion over the environment or AI, highlighting the dangers of uncontrolled mastery. Dominion in storytelling is rarely just about who is in charge; it is an exploration of why they are in charge, how they behave, and what that authority means for the world they inhabit.
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"Dominion" originates from mid-15th century Middle English dominioun, meaning lordship or supreme authority, derived from Old French dominion and Medieval Latin dominium (ownership, lordship). It stems from the Latin dominus ("lord, master"), which is rooted in domus ("house" or "household"), tracing back to the Proto-Indo-European root *dem- for household. The original meaning of dominion denotes "right of uncontrolled possession, use, and disposal," evolving from the concept of a master ruling a household. By the 1510s, it meant a territory or people subjected to a particular government's control. It is often used to describe high-level, sometimes absolute, power, such as in the Biblical sense (Genesis 1:26) of human rule over creation, or in the historic designation of British self-governing colonies, such as the "Dominion of Canada". Related words: Domain: Shares the same root of territory/control. Domination: Implies control over others. Domus/Domestic: Derived from the same Latin foundation of "house". According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun dominion in English is from around 1430. It appears in the writings of the poet and prior John Lydgate. The word is categorized in the Middle English period (1150–1500). While it initially meant general "lordship" or "power," it began being used in political context to describe specific territories, such as Wales, as early as the 16th century (e.g., in the Laws in Wales Act 1535). The term's colonial usage was later applied as an official title to Virginia around 1660 and to the Dominion of New England in 1686. According to the OED, the earliest known use of the noun domination is in the Middle English period, with the earliest evidence dating to around 1386. The earliest known use of the adjective/noun domestic dates to before 1425. The earliest known use of the noun domain in English is from before 1500. The earliest known use of the noun domus in English is in the mid-1700s. The earliest known use of the noun dominance in English is from 1823.
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Exploration in storytelling is essential for building unique worlds, driving character development, and fostering deep audiance engagement by transforming passive consumption into an immerive journey of discovery. It moves narratives beyond simple plots, allowing for thematic depth, emotional connection, and the creation of wonder. Key aspects of the importance of exploration include: World-Building and Uniqueness: Spending time exploring a setting makes a story unique, differentiating it from others and preventing it from feeling generic. Character and Plot Development: Exploration drives characters out of their comfort zones into new worlds, fostering growth and forcing them to confront new challenges. Engagement and Empathy: Immersive, exploratory narratives allow audiences to connect emotionally with characters, turning abstract concepts into personal experiences. Validation and Empowerment: Stories that involve exploration of difficult themes can turn trauma into resilience, offering solace and perspective. Active Learning: In educational contexts, exploration helps learners actively engage, develop curiosity, and understand complex ideas rather than just absorbing facts. Balancing Exploration and Pacing: While exploration is valuable, it must serve the story to avoid dragging the pace. Effective exploration connects directly to the plot or thematic development, rather than existing only for its own sake.
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"Explore" originates from the Latin explorare, meaning "to investigate, search out, or examine", which likely began as a 16th-century hunting term for scouting game by shouting. It combines ex- ("out") and plorare ("to cry out or weep"), indicating a literal, early sense of "crying out" to reveal something. Explore entered English in the late 1500s from Middle French explorer. The term evolved from its literal "crying out" meaning to broader, more general investigations by the 1580s. The definition expanded even further in the 1610s to include traveling to a new country for the purpose of making discoveries. Explore entered English in the late 1500s from Middle French explorer. Explore shares the plorare (cry) root with "deplore" (to cry out against) and "implore" (to call out to/beseech). According to the Oxford English Dictionary, the verb explore was first used in English in the mid-1500s. The earliest evidence cited by the OED is from 1531, appearing in a translation by the Scottish poet and translator John Bellenden. The noun explore appeared much later, with the earliest evidence in the 1870s (1873), utilized by physician Thomas Watson. The noun exploration is recorded slightly later, in the mid-1500s (1544) in Acts of Parliament. The noun explorer is attested from the 1570s, while the noun explorement appeared in the mid-1600s.
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What time of mine, Lee? A coal mine, a gold mine, a silver mine, or a mine from the Strait of Hormuz?
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The concept of "advance" in storytelling is crucial for maintaining momentum, preventing stagnation, and ensuring the plot moves forward through pivotal narrative reversals or actions. It acts as a counterweight to scene expansion (description/emotion), shifting the narrative from a current state to a new one, keeping the audience engaged. Key Aspects of Advancing in Storytelling: Driving Plot Progression: Advance ensures the narrative moves from one point to another, often via dramatic turning points, reversing a character's fortunes (e.g., from positive to negative). Without it, stories feel "pointless" or stagnant. Balancing "Advance" vs. "Expand": While "expand" slows down to add texture and emotion, "advance" acts as a gear shift to move the story forward. A compelling narrative often alternates between expanding (deepening a scene) and advancing (moving the action). The 8 Points of Progress: According to Dramatica Theory, progress is measured through key elements: defining a goal (e.g., stopping a murderer), identifying requirements to achieve it, and managing consequences. Structuring Action: Advancement uses a sequence of events—often marked by words like "then" or "next"—to maintain a logical order that prevents audience confusion. Triggering Actionable Engagement: In business or strategic storytelling, "advancing" is used to move people to action, transforming a brand or persuading an audience by taking them on a journey rather than just presenting facts. Effective storytelling uses advance to create tension and release it, ensuring the story moves toward a specific goal rather than meandering.
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"Advance" originates from the Mid-13th century Middle English avauncen ( meaning to further or improve), derived from Old French avancier (12 century). The root is Vulgar Latin $abanteāre, formed from Late Latin abante ("from before"), combining ab ("from") + ante ("before," "in front of"). Originally spelled avaunce, the letter 'd' was added to the English word in the 16th century, likely in a mistaken attempt to align it with a Latin ad- prefix (re-latinizing). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the word advance (in its verb form) was first used in English during the Middle English period (1150-1500), with the earliest evidence dating to before 1250 in the text Ancrene Riwle. Early forms often lacked the 'd', appearing as avaunt or avaunce. The noun "advance" has its earliest evidence from before 1400, appearing in the writings of poet and historian Robert Mannyng. The related adjective advanced is recorded from the 1530s.
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Escape in storytelling is crucial for character development, acting as a catalyst for transformation by forcing protagonists to shed their old selves, overcome internal fears, and act against self-interest. It drives plot through high-stakes, action-oriented, or emotional journeys, allowing characters to seek freedom or change. Key Aspects of Character Escape: Internal Growth (Self-Escape): The most profound escape is not from external foes, but from the prison of a character's own limitations, fears, or selfishness, enabling them to change. Driving Plot and Stakes: Characters must escape difficult emotional or physical situations to create momentum, often leaving behind a "small self" to achieve a necessary, profound inner transformation. Active vs. Passive Characters: Characters that actively flee, pursue, or change, rather than merely reacting to events, make stories more engaging and relatable to audiences seeking their own escape. Motivation and Goal: Escape acts as a primary motivator, driving characters toward a new, often improved, state of being. Relatability: When characters escape their realities, readers or viewers often connect with the universal human desire for change and freedom. Ultimately, an "escape story" is a, if not the, foundational element of fiction, allowing characters to overcome challenges and achieve meaningful transformation.
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"Escape" originates from the Vulgar Latin "exappare" (c. 1300), meaning "to get out of one's cape," formed from Latin ex- ("out") and Late Latin cappa ("cloak/cape"). The term likely came into Middle English (escapen) from Old North French escaper and Anglo-Norman escaper. It literally describes leaving a pursuer holding only one's cloak, which later meant to evade, flee, or get away safely. The word is a doublet of "scape" and is related to escapade. The Italian scappare (to run away) is cognate, and it shares roots with "scamper," potentially linked to ex-campāre ("break loose from a field"). According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the verb escape in English is from around 1330 in the writings of Robert Mannyng (also known as Robert of Brunne), a Middle English poet and historian. As a noun, the earliest evidence of "escape" is found even earlier, around 1300, in the text Kyng Alisaunder.
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The "rush"—often characterized as a rapid acceleration of plot, high adrenaline, or a sudden, cathartic release of tension—is a critical tool for creating high-impact emotional payoffs in storytelling. When strategically deployed, this rush transforms a narrative from a mere sequence of events into a visceral, memorable experience, bridging the gap between audience investment and narrative resolution. Importance of the "Rush" in Emotional Payoff: Creating Visceral Connection: A well-timed rush activates the listener's or reader's limbic system, allowing them to feel the story's emotional weight—such as fear, adrenaline, or intense joy—rather than just observing it, which makes the story more engaging. Enhancing Memory and Impact: Neuroscience shows that stories with high emotional arousal (the "rush") produce stronger neural connections, ensuring that the audience remembers the experience long after the story ends. Delivering "Earned" Moments: A rapid, intense climax that follows a carefully crafted, slower buildup makes the payoff feel earned rather than forced. Maximizing Dramatic Tension: Adrenaline-pumping scenes allow characters to confront their deepest fears or enemies, providing a satisfying, often cathartic, resolution that justifies the audience’s long-term investment. Reinvigorating Audience Attention: A sudden acceleration in pacing can break up monotonous sections and capture the audience's attention during pivotal moments of change. Techniques for Using "Rush" for Emotional Payoff: Speed Up for Climax: As a scene approaches a transformative moment or climax, increase the pacing through shorter, punchier sentences and active verbs, making the audience's heart race alongside the characters. Contrast with Calm: A sudden, hard cut from a quiet moment to high-octane action can increase the intensity of the rush, amplifying the emotional impact. Utilize "Tug and Release": Alternate between high-intensity moments (the rush) and slower, reflective scenes to keep the audience invested and emotionally balanced without burning them out. Add "Knife-Twisting" Stakes: Just before a major payoff, raise the stakes even higher to make the final resolution feel more significant and emotionally satisfying. | Leverage Sudden Revelations: A rapid unfolding of information—a "revelation" rush—can instantly flip the emotional context of a story, such as turning terror into relief, to create a profound shift in the audience's emotional state. Balancing the "Rush": Avoid Excessive Speed: Rushing through the entire story can make it feel "flat" and cause the audience to feel disconnected from characters, ultimately making the payoff feel unearned. Allow Room to Breathe: The rush is most effective when it is preceded and followed by moments of lower intensity, allowing the audience to process the emotional weight of the scene. Ensure Purposeful Acceleration: Every "rush" must feel earned by the preceding events, ensuring that the speed serves the story's overall emotional arc rather than feeling erratic or disjointed.
