Terry P

Bored???? How can anyone get bored from this chapter. It was very entertaining. I was only sorry to see it end.

I've just recently read the first version of this story and decided to read it again in the revised form as I really enjoyed this one and all of the stories in the series.

The boys don't owe the neighbour any explanation. She should be told that her questions are inappropriate and she should mind her own business. Maybe they could give such a start that she ends up moving away.

I wouldn't be too worried about the kids. Calvin will be Calvin and royally screw things up for himself.

This is my second time reading this story and again, I really enjoyed it.

A good way to end this story - and an epilogue would be great. As for your other stories if they are written as good as this one and as moving as this is I'm in for the long haul. Happy New Year

I agree. Much better. Thanks.

Sorry, me again. I just have to get this off my chest. What kind of an ending to a story is this. I'm really angry about it. Just when we're getting attached to all of the characters in it you end it in such a disappointing way. You're a good writer. I would have expected more from you. I know, is only a story. But.......

I agree with BoyLove on this. I really enjoyed this story. But the ending sucked and seemed like a really weak way for you to end it. I highly recommend you change the ending.

I have a hard time believing Zac, and wonder if he's lying just to get back Dylan. The big question is if Dominic is exagerating about Jackson yelling at him or not. Given a choice I would go with Dominic telling as it is. All in all I feel sorry for Dylan and if he has to break up with Jackson that he doesn't let Zac in.

Since we're all thinking who might have killed Curtis Buck I will say : "None of the above". Curtis got himself into a very stick situation and probably borrowed money from a very bad person(outside of the family, etc.) and when they realized he double crossed them decided to make him pay for it by killing him. The roughing him up part eliminates a number of possible suspects, although Big and Zak would perhaps be capable, but I doubt either one did it.

You and me both. The tears were definitaly tryin to get out.

I too was kind of miffed when I saw that Kit and Tom were no longer together. I thought: "Who the hell is this Mischa?". But now in learning the whole story - at least Tom's side of it I'm use to that and very anxious to learn where this leads with all of these characters.

I'm thinking the same thing.

Yes, but at what cost?