Trebs Posted April 1, 2009 Posted April 1, 2009 Comfort Only is a FANTASTIC new story. The plot, the characters, the prose - all first rate. I got a sneak peak of it from Myr and have not stopped raving about it since.Definitely a story I highly recommend. If you have any comments on the chapters posted so far, chime in!
JSmith Posted April 1, 2009 Posted April 1, 2009 My hand encountered my forehead loudly. “You’re the hot brainless mushy apple pie!” Dick in. Dick out. Hump – hump – hump. Feeeeels so f**king good! But no-one wants to f**king stick around to eat it afterwards—or heaven forbid…clean up. Yup. That was Mel. I'm only half way through and I love it so far! This quote had me laughing my ass off!
Site Administrator Myr Posted April 1, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 1, 2009 My buddy R.C. really came through for us on this one! Well worth the read! Myr
NaperVic Posted April 2, 2009 Posted April 2, 2009 That was a fun read . Has R.C. Mills written anything else? A quick glance at the GA author list and Nifty didn't find him.
Site Administrator Myr Posted April 2, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 2, 2009 R.C. is a pen name for a professional writer that appreciates our site. We thank him profusely for helping us out.
Site Administrator wildone Posted April 3, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 3, 2009 I'm definitely going to enjoy this story . I instantly fell in love with Kenneth as he reminds me of a close friend who seems to share an acerbic tongue with a body that can't back it up . Also the ability to use words to diffuse situations and the uncanny ability to know what buttons to push, but not too far. I look forward to the introduction of Aaron, hopefully we get to meet him soon....and alive . Thanks for the first chapter, Steve
Site Administrator Myr Posted April 8, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 8, 2009 New chapter is up.
Site Administrator wildone Posted April 10, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 10, 2009 Well it was great to meet Aaron, and I have to say he wasn't quite what I expected from the tidbits of information we got from Kenneth in the first chapter. It seems like Aaron is maybe the 'normal' one and Kenneth needs him more than visa versa. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the story. Steve
Site Administrator Myr Posted April 19, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 19, 2009 Chapter 3 is now up.
Daisy Posted April 20, 2009 Posted April 20, 2009 Ok, slightly twisted chapter. looks like a bit of a unique story . I'm thinking he threw out the phone to get rid of Daniel's number....
Site Administrator wildone Posted April 21, 2009 Site Administrator Posted April 21, 2009 Great chapter and thanks . This is becoming very interesting. Aaron obviously had a fling with Daniel. It became obvious that Daniel played both ways but it seemed a total shock that Aaron maybe does the same. Did anyone get a feeling that Aaron might be into S&M or something else that has scared Daniel? What does this mean for Kenneth? He is about to move in with Aaron. It appears that Aaron turned to men after his previous breakup and now he has broken up again. And just what is Kenneth's feeling towards man sex? He has mentioned his exploits with women, but he seemed to be slightly revulsed when Daniel suggested they do the nasty, but was that because it was Daniel or was it because he isn't turned on by the idea? I'm sure we'll find out soon enough. Thanks again for posting Steve
Site Administrator Myr Posted May 14, 2009 Site Administrator Posted May 14, 2009 My apologies for the long delay. To make up for it, I posted 2 chapters this time. There is one (very long) chapter after this along with an Epilogue. Myr
stonerboy Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 My apologies for the long delay. To make up for it, I posted 2 chapters this time.There is one (very long) chapter after this along with an Epilogue. Myr Thankyou thankyou thankyou! This has quickly become one of my favourite stories here - the characters are like nothing else I've encountered.
RCMills Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Thanks for the comments so far! It's nice to know some people are reading it and maybe enjoying it. I think I spent more time laughing than actually writing this story, which worries me a bit, because I'm one of those people who laughs at all their own jokes .
Mark Arbour Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 Thanks for the comments so far! It's nice to know some people are reading it and maybe enjoying it. I think I spent more time laughing than actually writing this story, which worries me a bit, because I'm one of those people who laughs at all their own jokes . I love your story, and I love your writing style. The only thing/person I don't love is Kenneth; way too bitchy and way too heartless for me. I find myself hoping that he gets his heart broken and ends up on the street, penniless. But I've learned from experience that it's unfair to judge a character until the story ends, and I'm in this one for the duration. Good job!
Daisy Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 R.C. is a pen name for a professional writer that appreciates our site.We thank him profusely for helping us out. I really like your story RC, the quirkiness and as you said about how you were laughing writing it is what makes it so good . It is a shame that you are here anonymously though as I would like to read your other stuff, even if it isn't available online for free. though of course I suppose that depends on what I take 'professional writer' to mean, you may not be in fiction or whatever but write in another sense entirely. but anyway thank you for sharing the story. celia
Kurt Posted May 15, 2009 Posted May 15, 2009 I really enjoy reading this stroy. It is expertly written, and a pleasure to read. However, I must agree with Mark... I dislike Ken.
Daisy Posted May 16, 2009 Posted May 16, 2009 (edited) I really enjoy reading this stroy. It is expertly written, and a pleasure to read. However, I must agree with Mark... I dislike Ken. nooo, I'm really starting to like him . his character is becoming more human in the last 2. I don't think he is all that bad. -i like the way he takes care of Aaron. -and I'm trying to work out your title Edited May 16, 2009 by Smarties
sat8997 Posted May 16, 2009 Posted May 16, 2009 Celia, I believe that may be 'where are my pants?' and if so, I don't think I want to know why Kurt can't find his pants. And I sort of like Kenneth for some reason I haven't figured out yet.
Daisy Posted May 16, 2009 Posted May 16, 2009 Celia, I believe that may be 'where are my pants?' and if so, I don't think I want to know why Kurt can't find his pants. And I sort of like Kenneth for some reason I haven't figured out yet. , I'm slightly confused. I meant, obviously my grammar wasn't indicating that, but the title 'comfort only', unless I'm being very gullible.
sat8997 Posted May 16, 2009 Posted May 16, 2009 Sorry about that! It looked like you were asking about Kurt's title (-and I'm trying to work out your title) on his member's tag since you quoted his post. And I've not worked out the story's title yet either.
Mark Arbour Posted May 16, 2009 Posted May 16, 2009 And I sort of like Kenneth for some reason I haven't figured out yet. Maybe you can relate to his bitchy attitude?
RCMills Posted May 17, 2009 Posted May 17, 2009 Maybe you can relate to his bitchy attitude? I don't think someone's personality decides whether they become sympathetic to a character or not . Kenneth was one of the more subtle characters I've ever written. More for what he doesn't say than what he does say. ahem. And for the record. I like Kenneth.
Site Administrator wildone Posted May 17, 2009 Site Administrator Posted May 17, 2009 I don't think someone's personality decides whether they become sympathetic to a character or not . Kenneth was one of the more subtle characters I've ever written. More for what he doesn't say than what he does say. ahem. And for the record. I like Kenneth. I have to agree with you. I mentioned early on of a close friend that Kenneth reminded me of. As the story has continued I see more and more similarities of the two. Maybe it is the same person . As for the title, I'll guess that Comfort Only refers to Kenneth's and Aaron's relationship. They are both really opposite ends of the spectrum physically, emotionally, and personality wise. But true to the adage that opposites attract, they find comfort in each others that they haven't been able to find in others so far. ....until maybe now with Roger and Kenneth. Just a guess
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