Benji Posted October 4, 2009 Author Posted October 4, 2009 ................Excellent chapter! Very realistic death camp scene, the imagery is still stuck in my mind. I have no doubt that N. Korea will completely fall now. With the aid of the US the two Korea's will be re-united. Justice for 'Dear Leader' would be if his dear people got their hands on him, and delivered him a Mussolini type farewell. Russia is still being quiet, wonder who they will go after in the mix or after the dust settles. Looking forward for more James, excellent job!
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted October 4, 2009 Site Moderator Posted October 4, 2009 When I got the chapter from James, it came with a warning.
old bob Posted October 11, 2009 Posted October 11, 2009 Buchenwald, Dachau, Maidanek, Auschwitz.......and more than 19 others similar places in Europe(and I dont mention the japanese places !) All these are bad memories, never to be forgotten. Thanks James, to help through your story the young generations, who didnt live the times 1933 - 1945, to learn the worst sides of humanity and to understand how to fight against it. 1
Benji Posted October 17, 2009 Author Posted October 17, 2009 Chapter 21 - Momentum is posted. ...................Haha! Is there a reincarnation of Scar here? I guess the governor solved part of Tom's legal problems by 'drafting' him into service. I wonder what is behind N.K.'s door #1 in that bunker? Great chapter James, really enjoying this story look forward to more!!
Drewbie Posted October 31, 2009 Posted October 31, 2009 ...................Haha! Is there a reincarnation of Scar here? I guess the governor solved part of Tom's legal problems by 'drafting' him into service. I wonder what is behind N.K.'s door #1 in that bunker? Great chapter James, really enjoying this story look forward to more!! Looking forward to hear more from the gang as well as the battlefront.
JamesSavik Posted October 31, 2009 Posted October 31, 2009 We had a flood here last night. My Mom's house got it and my house got some too. My desktop is in pieces in the attic... with my next chapter. House is a mess but under control. I'll get it to Mike for posting probably mid-week.
Benji Posted November 10, 2009 Author Posted November 10, 2009 Twilight Chapter 22- Ultimatum is posted. ...........Another great chapter James!! Looks like the Chinese leadership just missed becoming toast!! If that is the case, the 'military' portion of this war will be over soon. China will have to give up Taiwan forever, and lose N. Korea as an errr! ally! (thorn in the side). The fallout of both the nuclear and disease looks to be the foremost problem facing the west, and part of the world. What will Eagle Rocks destiny be in it! Great chapter James, look forward to more! P.S. I did not expect the chapter, due to the flooding of your place! Benji
JamesSavik Posted November 10, 2009 Posted November 10, 2009 I just got things back together. My UPS got wet so it was fried. I took my home network apart and put it in the attic while I cleaned things up. I had most of the chapter written. I just needed to send it to my editor Talon before I posted it.
Hoskins Posted November 10, 2009 Posted November 10, 2009 That was a good chapter, I liked it. Seems like Tom's got things to work out - I'm glad his parents are there to get his back. I wonder what's gonna happen in Pyongyang...
Drewbie Posted December 17, 2009 Posted December 17, 2009 (edited) Haven't seen a cliffe in awhile, looking forward to the next chapter. btw i've been liking conner more maybe tom and him Edited December 17, 2009 by Drewbie
JamesSavik Posted January 15, 2010 Posted January 15, 2010 Chapter 24 - Head Shot will post Saturday at Awesomedude. Special early-bird treat: It's up at Deweywriter
Drewbie Posted January 16, 2010 Posted January 16, 2010 (edited) Great chapter, I could visualize the carnage that Tom put out. Can't wait to read the final few chapters also wondering who he coupled Edited January 16, 2010 by Drewbie
JensenC Posted January 20, 2010 Posted January 20, 2010 hey James, found this story the other day, only a few chapters in but already hooked, i love these type of stories and you have actually inspired me to continue with my own story that is based around surviving nuclear attacks, so thanks for that. I can't wait to get back to reading the rest of this i'm sure i wont be dissapointed.
JamesSavik Posted January 20, 2010 Posted January 20, 2010 Jensen: You need this: Fallout Protection It provides quite a bit of practical information that you'll need. It takes a lot of research to get it right. The genre is filled with people who have failed to do proper research and produced a lot of rubbish.
JensenC Posted January 21, 2010 Posted January 21, 2010 Jensen: You need this: Fallout Protection It provides quite a bit of practical information that you'll need. It takes a lot of research to get it right. The genre is filled with people who have failed to do proper research and produced a lot of rubbish. thanks James, that will help though i just write for me so not sure i will ever post but still i would liek to get the facts and stuff right i love how detailed your story is.
JamesSavik Posted February 7, 2010 Posted February 7, 2010 Facebook users: send me a friend request and you can keep up with all of my stories and when they are being released.
JamesSavik Posted February 23, 2010 Posted February 23, 2010 Chapter 25 is off to the editor. Will probably post Wednesday at Awesomedude!
Benji Posted February 23, 2010 Author Posted February 23, 2010 Chapter 25 is off to the editor. Will probably post Wednesday at Awesomedude! ..................... Awesome!!!
JamesSavik Posted February 24, 2010 Posted February 24, 2010 Twilight Chaper 25 - Peace is posted at Awesomedude. This completes the story.
Benji Posted February 24, 2010 Author Posted February 24, 2010 Twilight Chaper 25 - Peace is posted at Awesomedude. This completes the story. ..............Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the story!! Great chapter James!
Hoskins Posted February 25, 2010 Posted February 25, 2010 This was a great story. Brad + Tommy! Disneyland! Sequel? :worship:
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