Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 12, 2011 Author Posted March 12, 2011 Jesus...they made you Promising.....God help us all jk....congrats Q-man xD Hardy Har Har missy - Just for that I won't post chapter 48 for a week. Well maybe tomorrow still. ................. Congrats Andy!!!! Well deserved is all I can say... B-man, Kevin - thank you both. 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 12, 2011 Author Posted March 12, 2011 Chapter 48: After The Break is up and ready. One left and we be done. Thanks to everyone who helped me along the way. Andy 1
AnytaSunday Posted March 12, 2011 Posted March 12, 2011 What'cha gonna do... what'cha gonna do... what'cha gonna do when we come for you... DEMANDING more of your delicious writing to consume? Mmmmmmm... Seriously, I think you'll have people hankering you for more stories. hehe, okay, I just wanted to leave a little something in here. It's just so cool you have your own place for this!!! 1
Nephylim Posted March 12, 2011 Posted March 12, 2011 Oh, my bad. I just read your responses to my reviews and you were asking about the defence lawyers bit. In the uk the only time that prosecution witnesses would ever meet with defence lawyers would be in the company of their own lawyers. There is a real paranoia that evidence could be corrupted and there is no contact at all between defence and prosecution witnesses. If there is the whole case could be compromised. Of course there are planned meetings between the lawyers and the witnesses with the lawyers but it just wouldnt be able to happen like it does there. if it was the uk both Peter and Jason would have been grilled about their relationship and sexual orientation and tastes as you can be sure that Jordan's team would be trying to suggest that it all happened because Peter made a pass at him. I think that the system here can be a lot more intrusive. 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 12, 2011 Author Posted March 12, 2011 What'cha gonna do... what'cha gonna do... what'cha gonna do when we come for you... DEMANDING more of your delicious writing to consume? Mmmmmmm... Seriously, I think you'll have people hankering you for more stories. hehe, okay, I just wanted to leave a little something in here. It's just so cool you have your own place for this!!! Yeah it is kinda cool, and just think you can start ANY topic you like in here and it won't be off topic. Though I do think fewer people will see the topic. There are good and bad points to having your own forum. The bad is fewer people just 'stumble' upon it like they do when you are in the main story forum. But then I don't have to worry about it getting lost amongst others either.
MikeL Posted March 12, 2011 Posted March 12, 2011 I just read chapter 48, Andy. Jason really is in a sad state. His friends are trying to help, but without much success. Ethan may be trying a little too much, but he is respecting Jason's wishes despite his own desires. Another great chapter. Still looking for the happy ending. 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 13, 2011 Author Posted March 13, 2011 I just read chapter 48, Andy. Jason really is in a sad state. His friends are trying to help, but without much success. Ethan may be trying a little too much, but he is respecting Jason's wishes despite his own desires. Another great chapter. Still looking for the happy ending. Mike, the thing with Ethan is he is also trying to help himself. Despite the smiles, jokes and happy go lucky exterior, he is still hurting from his own break up. They'll be fine and it shows, they both care about each other, not just getting off. 1
Rakuten06 Posted March 13, 2011 Posted March 13, 2011 Great chapter, I was surprised by a twist of how Jase (I liked that nickname) tried not to mix Peter and Ethan into the mind when they almost had sex. I guess Jase is a very nice guy because he's willing to wait till Peter makes a decision but I doubt that they will get back together, but of course Andy will surprise us all with the Grande Finale 1
Benji Posted March 14, 2011 Posted March 14, 2011 Chapter 48: After The Break is up and ready. One left and we be done. Thanks to everyone who helped me along the way. Andy ........................ Great sadness and upheaval here as Jason comes to terms that the relationship might be over. No hint or word from Peter, I think the seperation is a good thing to resolve issues, hopefully Peter will make adjustments. Jason could not rebound, that is a good sign here............. Not saying any more!! 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 14, 2011 Author Posted March 14, 2011 ........................ Great sadness and upheaval here as Jason comes to terms that the relationship might be over. No hint or word from Peter, I think the seperation is a good thing to resolve issues, hopefully Peter will make adjustments. Jason could not rebound, that is a good sign here............. Not saying any more!! I think is fair to say, Jason still very much loves Peter - if only it was safe to say the reverse was true. Maybe - right? Geez what am I going to do when i can no longer tease everyone by saying soon, or next chapter or tomorrow. LOL Thanks B-man, only one more to go 1
Rakuten06 Posted March 14, 2011 Posted March 14, 2011 Yeah that's the problem, what the heck will you do here after you finish the story!? 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 16, 2011 Author Posted March 16, 2011 Chapter 49: Moving On is posted. This is kinda the last chapter. It ties up all the story lines except the trial of Jordan Colmar. I will post a short Epilogue later this week which will be more of a preview of a short story I intend to write about that trial. It will NOT have anything to do with the main conflict of this story so 49 really is the end of Jason and Peter's story. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I can't begin to explain how gratifying it was to post this and to see how many people not only enjoyed it but took the time to comment. THAT was perhaps the best part of posting - reading everyone's comments. So thanks again to you all Andy 1
delayedreaction Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 (edited) Great ride, although it's always a bit sad when something good ends. I ready to head up the lynch mob when I saw the title of the last chapter. Good thing I read it first. Edited March 16, 2011 by delayedreaction 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 16, 2011 Author Posted March 16, 2011 Great ride, although it's always a bit sad when something good ends. I ready to head up the lynch mob when I saw the title of the last chapter. Good thing I read it first. Yeah it was a bit bitter sweet to post the last chapter. hopefully it was worth the wait. I titled it that for two reasons - the first was Jason was trying to move on and the second was the very end when they are on Peter's bike, moving on together - but I figured the first 1/4 of the chapter would only reinforce what folks were thinking when they saw the title - sorry I am a tease to the end - can't help it. Thanks for the post I see it was your first one - Andy 1
Rakuten06 Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 Great way to end a wonderful and fantastic story! I was relieved when they are back together and living its own life happily ever off to the sunset (I know, I mixed a country and fairy tale endings together ). It would be interesting to see the short story "sneak peek" soon... John 1
Frostina Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 Chapter 49: Moving On is posted. Andy, I'm sorry for that stupid mistake! 1
Anya Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 I see you were teasing us again with the title =/ lol Anyways...great chapter Q-man....guess you were afraid of me after all because you made Pete and Jase end up together. You don't have to be ashamed to admit it 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 16, 2011 Author Posted March 16, 2011 Great way to end a wonderful and fantastic story! I was relieved when they are back together and living its own life happily ever off to the sunset (I know, I mixed a country and fairy tale endings together ). It would be interesting to see the short story "sneak peek" soon... John Thanks John, this felt the best way to end it so this is how it ends As for the short story - well that isn't written yet so I am not in a rush to post the epilogue because it will be some time before that is ready - and I don't need too many people asking about it too soon LOL Andy, I'm sorry for that stupid mistake! Bah, nothing to be sorry for, I read, Anyta read it, you read it, I read it again twice, and it was still there. BUT it's gone now so most folks won't notice it when they read it Thanks for the help along the way Frosty I see you were teasing us again with the title =/ lol Anyways...great chapter Q-man....guess you were afraid of me after all because you made Pete and Jase end up together. You don't have to be ashamed to admit it Nope, sorry Anya, this was written well before you started threatening me - so this is how it was meant to end. As for 'Moving On' I was stumped for a good chapter title - I didn't want - "The End' or 'Peter's Choice' I toyed with Second Shot, but that was a give away. Moving on was perfect because they are moving on with their lives - just that it is together, not apart. Shesh, there is no pleasing some people is there? 1
Benji Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 As for 'Moving On' I was stumped for a good chapter title - I didn't want - "The End' or 'Peter's Choice' I toyed with Second Shot, but that was a give away. Moving on was perfect because they are moving on with their lives - just that it is together, not apart. Shesh, there is no pleasing some people is there? ........Haha! I thought the same thing when I saw the title, a big uh uh moment! I'm very glad Peter saw that he needed therapy to continue his relationship with Jason. A great story and an added bonus of a epilogue is coming? Look forward to it and the short story of the upcoming trial, Thanks Andy! 1
Anya Posted March 16, 2011 Posted March 16, 2011 Nope, sorry Anya, this was written well before you started threatening me - so this is how it was meant to end. As for 'Moving On' I was stumped for a good chapter title - I didn't want - "The End' or 'Peter's Choice' I toyed with Second Shot, but that was a give away. Moving on was perfect because they are moving on with their lives - just that it is together, not apart. Shesh, there is no pleasing some people is there? Excuses, excuses Lol...I liked that the title confuses people...a tease till the end ;p 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 19, 2011 Author Posted March 19, 2011 Chapter 50: Epilogue is posted. More like a teaser for the short story to come, but it sort of hints that while things have come to a close, they never really end, now do they. Andy 1
Rakuten06 Posted March 20, 2011 Posted March 20, 2011 Now it seems that you're ready to focus on refereeing training and a short story before we can be ready for your new story (companion story), so because it finished so should I unlike the story to remove "Second Shot" from the notification or? 1
Benji Posted March 20, 2011 Posted March 20, 2011 Chapter 50: Epilogue is posted. More like a teaser for the short story to come, but it sort of hints that while things have come to a close, they never really end, now do they. Andy ........................ Awwww! I love it, plus that fact that you are in your element here counselor! I did not expect the epilogue to start at the trial, perhaps my crystal ball was to dusty Anyhow, I love the set-up so far, plus the somewhat revenge factor on Jordan's fathers business dealings, maybe father and son can still bound together in prison!! 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 20, 2011 Author Posted March 20, 2011 Now it seems that you're ready to focus on refereeing training and a short story before we can be ready for your new story (companion story), so because it finished so should I unlike the story to remove "Second Shot" from the notification or? Well that is up to you, but speaking with my ego, I'd prefer you leave it up, you don't have a limit on how many you can like. Maybe it will makes others read it if they see more 'likes' Okay, who am I kidding, I just like having as many as I can Seriously thanks for asking but it's up to you. I don't see me adding anything to this so the only reason to keep the 'like' on it is to make me feel good. LOL 1
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 20, 2011 Author Posted March 20, 2011 ........................ Awwww! I love it, plus that fact that you are in your element here counselor! I did not expect the epilogue to start at the trial, perhaps my crystal ball was to dusty Anyhow, I love the set-up so far, plus the somewhat revenge factor on Jordan's fathers business dealings, maybe father and son can still bound together in prison!! Well this is somewhat fitting. This- my post will be the 400th of the topic - quite likely the last too - and that it is in response to you - makes it seem right - you've been faithful in your posting so I think it only right I give you the shout out for post 400 Opps this is the right one. B) Andy
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