Renee Stevens No More Hiding

[Renee Stevens]

Want to discuss the story "No More Hiding" with other readers or with myself?  Well, you found the perfect place to do so!  Feel free to post reviews as well, but discussions between readers can be interesting as well!!!

[Trebs]

Very cool beginning...  Phillip seems to value kids more than anything, and it ended up biting him badly.  I love the interaction he's able to have with his niece and nephew (not to mention his "older" brother), but damn, the dude is hurting.

 

Great beginning and looking forward to seeing where you take this.

[Renee Stevens]

Glad that you enjoyed the start of the story Trebs!  Kids are a very important part of his life and I wanted to make that very clear right from the start and it seems like I accomplished that.  As far as his "older" brother, the "older" part always gives me a chuckle when it comes up.  Yes, he's hurting, which is completely understandable given the circumstances.  I hate putting him through it, but, it's necessary for the story.

 

I hope you enjoy the rest and I look forward to hearing your thoughts as the story proceeds!

[Dr. John NYC]

I, too, liked the way Phillip interacts with kids -- including Trevor, at the gym. The langorous start not only emphasizes Phillip's pain but also gives me, at least, a sense of his character: slow and steady and a bit risk-aversive.

 

I'm curious to see where the interaction with Vance is going. Not sure why, but I got the sense that ultimately Trevor might become more of an interest: something about Phillip "not understanding brightly colored hair" makes me want to see him learn to understand that and more about Trevor. Anyway, looking forward to more, Renee.

 

John

[Renee Stevens]

I, too, liked the way Phillip interacts with kids -- including Trevor, at the gym. The langorous start not only emphasizes Phillip's pain but also gives me, at least, a sense of his character: slow and steady and a bit risk-aversive.

 

I'm curious to see where the interaction with Vance is going. Not sure why, but I got the sense that ultimately Trevor might become more of an interest: something about Phillip "not understanding brightly colored hair" makes me want to see him learn to understand that and more about Trevor. Anyway, looking forward to more, Renee.

 

John

 

Thanks for your comments John!  I'm glad that you enjoyed the start of the story.  I'm glad that you're able to get a bit of a feel for Phillip with the start of the story. 

 

Regarding Vance and Trevor, well.... I can't say too much there without giving away some of what's going to be coming up in future chapters.  I can only hope that you enjoy the upcoming chapters.  I look forward to hearing your thoughts on future aspects of this story! 

[wildone]

So I'm downright upset at what Renee has done to end this chapter Chapter 7 to be exact!

 

To make things worse, when talking to her, she immediately showed me pictures of her new kitten and totally distracted me from what I wanted to discuss with her!!

 

Be warned, if you post do not be distracted by cute kitten pictures that she may post to distract you from the chapter ending!

 

[Renee Stevens]

Be warned, if you post do not be distracted by cute kitten pictures that she may post to distract you from the chapter ending!

 

 

Who me???

 

[Slytherin]

I am impatiently waiting for Saturday and a new chapter. Love this story

[Renee Stevens]

I am impatiently waiting for Saturday and a new chapter. Love this story

 

Thanks Slytherin!  I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  I always like to hear that readers are impatient for the next chapter, that tells me I'm doing something right!!!

[Slytherin]

I'm impressed how well you handle this story, Renée, the story feels so real. I really love this story. Only five chapter left Well done !

[Renee Stevens]

Thank you Slytherin!  This story was a hard story to write and I was quite nervous as to how it would be received.  Luckily it seems like most of my worries were unfounded and while I'll be sad to see the story end, it's time for something new.  Besides, I'll be able to focus on some of my other stories that have been waiting patiently to be updated

[Mann Ramblings]

Congrats on the completion a lovely piece of fiction, Renee. I know how bittersweet it is to be at the end, but you should be very proud of this. It's a wonderful story.

 

[Suvitar]

Absolutely wonderful story with great characters and a beautiful ending    Thank you! I really enjoyed the whole story   

[Renee Stevens]

Congrats on the completion a lovely piece of fiction, Renee. I know how bittersweet it is to be at the end, but you should be very proud of this. It's a wonderful story.

 

 

Thank you Mann, especially for your kind words.    I think out of all of my stories, this one was probably the hardest to see end, simply because of how intense it got at times.  Without those moments though, the story wouldn't have been what it was.  I am so glad that you enjoyed it. 

[Renee Stevens]

Absolutely wonderful story with great characters and a beautiful ending    Thank you! I really enjoyed the whole story   

 

Thank you Suvitar.    I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed my work.    I really enjoyed writing about these characters (most of the time) and I felt that the ending just pulled everything together perfectly.  I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.

[Slytherin]

A bit sad that it's over but I am very happy that I bought premium so I could read this wonderful story!  loved it ! 

 

[Renee Stevens]

A bit sad that it's over but I am very happy that I bought premium so I could read this wonderful story!  loved it ! 

 

 

Thank you Slytherin!!  Sorry about the delay in responding!  I'm glad that you enjoyed No More Hiding and while it's always sad when a story ends, look on the bright side, that just means that I'll be working on other stories