Looking for help with a re-write

[Justin4Fun]

My first published story is currently hosted on a different site. I won't say which site, nor will I reveal the name of the story, as I don't want to endorse another site on this site.

It is 105 chapters long, and while I don't have an accurate word count, I'd guess that it's roughly 200k. I'd like to re-write it and break it down into several smaller books. I need help re-working some of my concepts, fleshing out some parts, and making it a bit more realistic. Rather than an editor or beta-reader, I'm looking for more of a sounding board that I can discuss changes and/or new ideas.

Synopsis: A teen boy meets another teen boy and falls in love, only to find out that his love is a vampire. After an accident, he gets changed and ultimately becomes the King of all vampires in the world.

[lawfulneutralmage]

Have you found somebody?

[Justin4Fun]

On 8/26/2023 at 9:50 AM, lawfulneutralmage said:

Have you found somebody?

I have not, but I started posting chapters.

I'd still love help shaping the story.

Feel free to PM me, or mail, or whatever you want to call it. LOL