Jump to content

[dkstories] Dreams of a Father


Recommended Posts

  • Site Moderator

Now we know the fate of Zack. It also sounds like he could be an double agent, so I don't think we've seen the last of him.

 

It was also good to see the interaction between the two boys.

Link to comment

Say Orrock, are you sitting in front of your Browser, refreshing Dan's site every few seconds? Damn, you are fast announcing new chapters. :P

 

I'm still not sure what's up with the prophet and the sisters, but thanks to Henry being sneaky and doing what he has been build for, Atrix Prime has been warned. Even if it was only partly necessary, with them misleading Torellini's fleet.

 

Thanks for the chapter, Dan. :)

Link to comment
I have to give y'all fair warning. I just finished writing Chapter 19, and it is probably one of the most evil cliffhangers I've written in a long time. Consider this fair warning about an upcoming cliffie. :)

:wacko: That's 4 chapters away! We'll never remember that we're supposed to expect a Cliffy by then.

Link to comment
See, now, this just PROVES that people LIKE and WANT cliffhangers. If they didn't, there wouldn't be an award....

 

It's the goats fault. I have proof!

 

somewhere :unsure: ahh yeah, the LiS thread all there in black and white... or gray and black...

Link to comment
I have to give y'all fair warning. I just finished writing Chapter 19, and it is probably one of the most evil cliffhangers I've written in a long time. Consider this fair warning about an upcoming cliffie. :)

Pah! Threatening us with a evil cliffhanger! Seems hollow. I want proof. Now! :P

...and the the conclusion, right after. ;)

Link to comment
Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

Our Privacy Policy can be found here: Privacy Policy. We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue..