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Poor Issac. I definitely understand how he would feel inferior to Jaemin as far as his history with Miracle goes. I'm glad Miracle talked Issac out of leaving. And good job with the soda can and asshole Phillip. What the hell was that kidnapping Ryder and scaring Miracle? Just for Miracle's phone. What a bunch of assholes. Ok, on to the next chapter which I haven't read yet.

So I was sitting in my car for two hours while my kid was in driver's ed and I managed to catch up with two of your new chapters. lol It's good that Jeremy is on the "case" so to speak and is trying to get as much info against Eric as he can. Can't remember if Jasmine being an ass at the rental car place is in this chapter or the next, but I'll comment anyway. lol It's really too bad she didn't tell Miracle sooner about not coming back. He didn't even have time to say goodbye to her. Also...why wouldn't her father go with her to get her settled in? And did she ship all her stuff down there? I just know when my kids go to college it's a two-car trip. Ok, I'll go to the next chapter so I can comment.

First I want to say: welcome back, Valk! That was a short vacation! lol But I'm thrilled you're back and updating! =) I think Daniel was being very unfair to Robbie. Robbie was being nice and caring, saying he'd kill Sean if he beat him, etc., and Daniel just flew off the handle and was so nasty to him. Why didn't he tell Robbie that he found out Trevor was out of jail? And one minute Daniel's answering the door "What do you want, asshole?" when he thought it was Robbie, and the next he's saying, "Door's open, babe.", also thinking it was Robbie. Did they make up? Personally, I think Daniel owes Robbie an apology, not the other way around. Now Trevor - hmmm, what's Daniel going to do? Brush off Sean and be mean and nasty and break up with him to save him from Trevor? Will he report Trevor to the police, get another restraining order on him? Bring Sean with him and have them give him a restraining order on Sean too? Can't wait to find out!

Thank God Zegan was there to save Yadrey! That ogre was pretty scary. What's gonna happen now though? Yadrey is not out of the wood yet, so to speak. lol Who will save him now? Great chapter, Cole.

Wow, that surprised me - Fear being able to change into human form. I found it very touching though that Fear would never kill Taranis b/c Taranis is his friend and he's always treated him as such and not like a wild beast. Great chapter, Addy!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SASHA!!! I hope you have a wonderful day lying in the hammock, or drop the tailgate on your truck, kick it on back, pour a little Crown in your Dixie Cup, goin' out to the bonfire out in the sticks, but don't forget to bring your compass with you so you don't get lost outstanding in our field (ok, so I cheated there ), but seriously, bottoms up, tip it on back, and you can drink to this all night, and I can go on and on and on, so I'm just gonna stfu now so you can enjoy your b-day!!!!! Have a good one, Sasha!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY COMSIE!!!!! I hope you have a great day!!!!!

I like reading things from Mark's pov, b/c we were first introduced to the story with Sam and the first story had to do with him and his pov. I hated Mark right away after reading that story. lol But the last story and this poem say it all. Mark's wishes and his tears are all in vain. He can shed as many tears as he wants, but he will never get Sam back again. Great job, Addy!

I'm thrilled that Jeremy recorded Rachel and sent the tape to the cops. I can't wait till they nab that murdering psycho Eric.

Boy, oh boy, does Miracle think his mom and Craig are rich or something? lol It sounds wonderful how he wants to make the house/apartment over, but it sounds like it will cost a fortune! Especially the pure gold tub, or were they faucets? I don't remember. haha I never understood why people go to fortune tellers. I'd be too afraid of what they would say. I must say, I felt really badly for Jeremy. All he wanted to do was to reach out to Miracle and tell him who he was, but he couldn't. It must have been so horrible to hear about what a tough life Miracle has had w/o him and b/c of him really. Ok, on to the next chapter - the birthday boy chapter. lol

Now, who's the blonde hottie with the blue shirt? lol Omg, I sound like a perv... Anyway...loved the chapter Comsie! Poor Evan - his mommy really cockblocked him that night! Hopefully he got enough beforehand. lol Loved the 'I love yous' even though I think it's a tad too soon. Maybe 'I lust you' would be better! Can't wait for the next update!

Wow, wow, wow, I don't know where to begin. lol What a chapter, Tony! And...the plot thickens. So Jacob and Co. were responsible for Melissa and those two other women from twenty years ago, and The Ripper is responsible for Xander's g/f. How about all those prostitutes at Marquette? And why are prostitutes hanging around a college campus? Better clientele? lol What was Melinda, the ME in Chicago, doing at the crime scene in Wisconsin? Wouldn't O'Connor have his own ME? Maybe The Ripper pissed all over Katelynn's body as a show of contempt, maybe to demean her even further. Hell, he could have done it while she was still alive! Oh, I did have a question: when Kieran was reading the letter The Ripper left for Xander he said, "Threatening my family is not going to sign his death warrant." Didn't he mean, "Threatening my family is going to sign his death warrant." ? Another excellent chapter, Tony!

So, they sure got themselves out of a pickled mess. lol I'm just sorry Brian had to die. That was so sad. And now Miracle, Jaemin, and Issac are in a three-way relationship. What do they call that? Poly something or other? Non-conventional but very trendy right now. There's a female author on another site who's written a few stories about three-men relationships. "Sterling went all G.I. Joe..." that was funny! And Miracle wanting to run to Hawaii for the weekend! Omg, it takes almost a weekend to get there from the city!!! Another interesting chapter, Trevor!

Trevor, you're on a writing frenzy! I can't keep up! lol So...I was reading this NYC chapter and I had a few questions. I guess I never really paid attention in the previous chapters, but...how the hell does Miracle find a parking spot RIGHT IN FRONT OF THE BUILDING HE WANTS TO GO IN???? That's unheard of in the city! You have to circle for BLOCKS and park so far away you may as well have parked at your house and walked. lol Also, when they got to Miracle's house, Miracle grabbed car keys and said "I'm borrowing your car." Who'd he say that to? Issac? How did Issac get his car there? And how did Issac get his desktop computer there? Did he stow it in his luggage in the baggage compartment? Seems pretty bulky... And what happened to Jaemin's Jeep? Didn't he leave that for Miracle in Nevada when he walked away? Now, on to those stupid, stupid kids! They are kids playing an adult game. Don't they remember that Eric is a cold-blooded murderer? They think they can just waltz in there and save Faye? They're crazy stupid. lol They may be eighteen (Miracle isn't even eighteen yet), not "men". Hunter may be a few years older and Brian, but still - they shouldn't be there. Ok, on to chapter fifty-one.

Gah, I just finished this chapter and I saw you just posted another one! lol What a chapter, Trevor! I can really relate to how Miracle felt when graduation day came. I didn't feel it so much when I graduated high school b/c I was more like Jasmine pre-Miracle. lol I hated high school. Although...one of the hottest boys in my class wrote in my yearbook: "Don't ever change, stay as cool as you are." And yes, I swooned. lol But at my college graduation I was so sad. I didn't want to leave all the great friends I made. The majority of them still live in the Boston area and I rarely see them. So Issac and Dayna's dad just lets them take off with Miracle and his mom w/o even meeting them? Especially Erica? It was sad when Aiden and Miracle said goodbye. I really like Aiden. But who's Jennifer? And how did Phil hear what Miracle and Co. were all talking about? Who did he bug? Ok, on to chapter fifty.

Jeez, how does The Ripper know that Ryan just graduated from the FBI academy thing? How does he know so much about these people? So years ago, Jacob got Dino (the crooked cop), to beat up and rape his son, Ryan. Was Dino a cop at the time? Why would he do that and risk his job? They didn't take any DNA from the crime scene? And how stupid is Moira????? Yes, I feel horrible she's dead, but come on!!!! You don't meet someone who has a "lead" on the killer ALONE AT MIDNIGHT!!!!! Her brains were up her ass. Jesus. Even I know better than that. As usual Tony, can't wait for the next installment!

I do think it's nice that A&M are paving the way for other gay kids to come out and talk to them, so to speak. Maybe they can all start their own GSA? Who knows. I was shocked that Ted and Jarrod kissed and held hands on the bus just to tease A&M. That's going a little too far. lol But not as far as Barnes went! Holy hell! He really was getting into Andy's sorta handjob! lol I can't believe he even pulled his pants down! I thought Ollie and the Goth girl were pretty funny, wanting to join in. Although when I read about Thomas' testimony in court I felt so badly for him. I can't imagine how embarrassing and humiliating that must have been for him admitting everything he and Randy did with Dillon. Great chapter, Elias!

I agree with Timothy; I hope Jamison doesn't spill the news to his wife and Lily. It's not his news to tell - it's Mikeal's. I'm happy that Mikeal's dad seemed to take the news well. I'm glad that his dad explained everything about the adoption and he even offered to help Mikeal reconnect with his birth parents. I know to Mikeal it seems like he's been lied to his whole life and he feels betrayed. But his parents adopted him and they loved him and treated him like their own biological child. A parent who brings home a baby boy just to please her estranged husband, may not treat the baby well b/c she brought him home just to please her husband. But Marigold lavished Mikeal with love and affection his whole life. He couldn't have found better parents. I hope he can get past this and make peace with his family. Great chapter, Cassie!

Yeah, wow, an hour, huh? There were a few things I noticed that I questioned: When Kieran was reading the letter from the Ripper, he was at Annabelle's desk. In his letter, the killer mentioned Xander was Kieran's FBI partner. But then Special Agent Moira Campbell is introduced as his partner. While they are still in the newsroom, all of a sudden SA Campbell turns to the ME and asks him a question. Huh? When did they leave the newsroom? When did they get to the morgue? Then Kieran came home, showed Ryan the letter, they talked for awhile, and then Ryan followed him to the bedroom. All of a sudden Kieran has the time to light candles and strip? I thought Ryan was right behind him? I'm sorry. Maybe I'm just too picky. Other than my observations, I was riveted by the chapter. How does the Ripper know so much about Kieran's life and the people in it? And why do they think it's two different people since the Ripper talked about killing Melissa? Maybe I need to reread the previous chapter again. And I just thought of something: the Ripper killed Annabelle b/c she bad-mouthed him on TV, so that didn't have anything to do with Melissa or framing Davis, right? Yeah, I better go back and reread. =) Anyway, I'm on pins and needles now. Can't wait for chapter six!

Great chapter, Krista! I was holding my breath the whole time Corey was home with his folks. I knew all along his mom would be fine with it; she would never kick him out. I knew she could never do that. I also know that she always seems to get her way when she "talks" or blackmails her bully of a husband. I'm glad he's somewhat pussy-whipped. But...there's no way he would tolerate Clinton staying on their couch if his folks kick him out. I know that. I don't think Cora could talk her way around that. But I have a feeling it'll be ok with Clinton's folks. And as he said, it's a good sign that his mom said she loved him. As for Cj - well, we knew he was the lowest of the lows. Jenny couldn't possibly want anything to do with him. I don't think there's anything he can do to redeem himself. I was so proud of Clinton for punching him and for telling him to get out of his house. Cj is no friend. A friend wouldn't tell you that the relationship is over; a friend would stand by and tell him he'll be there for him. I hope Cj winds up all alone once school starts up again. I'm glad Clinton isn't turning away from Corey. Corey made the right decision, even though I do feel a bit badly for Greg. Ooh, maybe you'll do a sequel with Greg finding a b/f. lol Anyway, I'm not looking forward to the epilogue b/c it'll be the end of the story and I have enjoyed it for so long! I'm going to hate saying goodbye to these characters.

Sean's story about Michael was so sad. It was very admirable of him to want to work in a place that held so much comfort for he and Michael. And I wanna meet Robbie too!!!! Omg, I was cracking up - he's just hysterical! lol 'Tongues and blowjobs', lol. I do want to hear about Trevor, so I'm anxiously waiting until you get back from your vacation. Hope you have a great time, Val!

Wow, what a long chapter, Trevor! I don't really understand why Tanya is being such a bitch and why Sean is her stupid lapdog. Tanya doesn't even go to high school anymore, you would think she would grow the fuck up. lol Now I remember Faye, Cody's mom. I'm sure Eric did away with her. So is Daniel there b/c Eric sent him? It couldn't possibly be a coincidence that he comes by in the last month of school to take over for their history teacher. Did Eric have their history teacher killed too?

Very sad news. My thoughts are with his family and friends.

Ah, I'm glad you changed Madeline to Melinda. lol I read this last night and I was like, what? I thought the ME's name was Madeline. I happen to like Melinda better b/c that's my sister's name. Funny, my mom thought she made that name up. haha So there was another Caldwell. Thank God Ryan escaped! I'm glad his father's dirty cop goons didn't intimidate him. They should definitely get in trouble for not reading Davis his rights. Why does Jacob have a beef with Michael? B/c Michael is successful and Jacob isn't? Can't wait for the next chapter, Tony!

Shit! I can't believe Davis' family is setting him up! What horrible people to do that to your own flesh and blood! I did have a question though: can't the cops who arrested Davis get in trouble? They didn't Miranda him; they didn't read him his rights. They're supposed to do that while they're handcuffing him. (At least they do on all the cop shows I used to watch. lol) Ok, on to chapter four.