Lisa

Each time they were together I was waiting for Eric to just catch them. It was just a matter of time. And of course Eric feels even more betrayed now that he had to see it for himself. He did sound like a jealous girlfriend though. And he never liked any of LM's boyfriends; it makes me wonder why. Why does he feel no one is good enough for LM? Is he really jealous of these guys, does he want LM for himself? And Ogre; was Eric right about Ogre? Will he just bail on LM once word gets out? Will he find it necessary to prove his "straightness"? Oh, all these questions! Awesomely angsty chapter Mann! Can't wait for the next one!

Shit, shit, shit Fitz! How could you leave it like that??!! I'm on pins and needles here wondering what happened to Zach. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. =)

I've been catching up on all your newly posted chapters, but felt I had to comment on this one. I can't believe that Willow speaks to her four year old like she does. That is horrific. What's more, I can't believe Noah is APOLOGIZING to her for getting on her case about the way she treats their son. I think any other father would have called the cops or child services right at that moment and had her taken away. And the trailer condemed. What a horrible place for Zah to have to grow up in. With a horrible 'mother' and I use that term very loosely. It's apparent that she doesn't give a shit about Zach; she only wanted to get back at Noah, so out of spite she filed for custody. And Noah's right; she's not fit to take care of a plant, never mind a child. Ok, on to the last chapter.

Well, that's one way of shutting Min up; by kissing him. lol But I think Young Jae likes it too much. =) And of course Min is denying his feelings. Min always seems annoyed. I wonder if that's his usual personality, or if it's just b/c he's under so much stress and b/c he's doing a job he didn't really want to begin with. I do think if he wanted his mom to back off, he should have been nicer and more like a son than a businessman. And I think he's being totally unfair to Lara. She seemed really nice and sweet. I'm looking forward to the gala. I wonder what will go wrong there? lol

I don't understand how Adrian could tell Alexi that he's possessive of him also and he admitted he's glad that Alexi isn't seeing someone b/c he doesn't know how he would handle that. That's really selfish of Adrian. And didn't Adrian just admit to Alexi that he had met someone for breakfast or something? And if Adrian doesn't want Alexi to be with anyone else, why is he pushing Alexi away? I was surprised it turned out to be Adrian. Mainly b/c of the meeting with Lily and Taka. I thought they ruled Adrian out. I can see that Alexi feels totally betrayed by Adrian, but even in his anger I know he won't want Adrian going to jail. I know he's probably going to try to prevent that and his family and Lily won't agree. I'm looking forward to see what happens next.

Shit! I used up all my likes; I'll have to go back and 'like' it tomorrow.... I don't know how I missed this update! I can't believe I missed it b/c I look for it everyday. lol So, Caleb now likes Ethan, who he wasn't sure of before. And he may still like Jake, well, as a friend. I'm glad they made up. I'm also glad Jake isn't hiding who he is anymore. The boyfriend bit threw me though. =) But why is Jake so sad and withdrawn? Is it b/c of what happened with Caleb and how he thought his friends didn't like him anymore? Maybe now Jacob can go back to sitting with everyone at lunch again. Great update furnished! You always leave me wanting more.

I agree with Ricky; I think Thomas' dad is beating him up b/c he knows Thomas is gay. And doesn't Thomas' personality sort of reflect how a lot of gay kids deal with their sexuality if they don't want to admit it or if other people are on their case; they become bullies themselves to throw others off. And besides, what straight boy would offer a kiss or a BJ to someone for their silence? I hope Thomas can become friends with J&K and Amanda and her group. I think he needs all the support he can get. But Kyle is right; he needs to tell someone about his 'father'. His father needs to be taken out of that house. What about his mom? Is she in the picture? Does she know her husband beats her son up? Great chapter podium!

A new man? Good for you girl! lol That's the best excuse for not posting! I was reading Krisz's review and I must be so slow. I didn't even THINK of Alec and Simon knowing each other. Is that why Simon wants to hurt Alec? Because they were together once? I didn't even know Simon swung that way. And Nina; what a bitch! Stirring up trouble for Alec and Heath. Heath will have a conniption fit when/if he finds out she was talking to Alec. Great chapter as always Kim! Good luck with your new man!

Yay, you're back! Now I can call off the search and rescue team. I totally agree w/Clockwork; Corbin is psyching himself out and stressing over something that he has no control over. And he is totally missing what Pete is telling him. In the last chapter, when Corbin went over to Pete's to tell him how he felt, Pete was talking to Dakota on the computer. Pete introduced Corbin to Dakota and Dakota said that Corbin is cuter than Pete said he was. I know I said this in my last review, but straight guys don't really talk about how cute a friend is, I'm assuming. lol AND Pete thinks Corbin is cute. Corbin missed when Pete explained that he would never tell Dakota why he picked OD; b/c it's not too far away from her in DC. He wouldn't tell her b/c he didn't want to give her the wrong impression. Obviously it was the same impression that Corbin had: that he liked her 'that way' and wanted to be somewhat closer to her (distance-wise). But if Corbin actually LISTENED to that sentence, he would realize that Pete DOES NOT like her 'that way', which he already explained to Corbin a few times I think. Corbin needs to get a grip and relax. I also hope he doesn't book out of there or, get wasted. He gets drunk (as they all do) way too much. lol I want him to be nice and sober when he meets Dakota. Now as far as Lee is concerned, Corbin was pretty mean to him. And you know, not for nothing, but....Corbin isn't 100% positive that that's what Lee really did. He just heard heresay from David. What if David was setting Lee up b/c DAVID wanted to be with Corbin and he knew in order to throw Corbin off of Lee he had to think of something good. David already showed Corbin in the last chapter that he was interested. Just a thought. Another hella awesome chapter Jon! I'm glad you're back! Can't wait for Hurricane Dakota!

Haha, I echo ninecila; I thought I'd have to go back and reread b/c I didn't remember a Pete either. lol I'm thrilled Coop took Owen with him. A week is definitely TOO long a time to go w/o seeing one another; especially since the relationship is really new. Looking forward to more. )

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Heidi! She's such a pisser! I can't believe she slapped David. He deserved it for sending Little Man away. I'm wondering why Eric doesn't like LM and Ogre hanging out together? Does he only want to be LM's friend if they're out of the group setting? He seemed kind of jealous. Anyway, awesome chapter Mann!

Ah, poor Henry. It really stinks to have this unrequited love. Jean is young and immature. I honestly don't see him being with only one guy. Or....maybe if Henry shows an interest in someone else, Jean will feel jealous and vow never to sleep with anyone again, as long as he and Henry are together. lol Yeah, ok, not gonna happen. So. Again, poor Henry. I liked the way Olivia comforted him. It's sad that Oscar was brought up thinking that guys aren't 'manly' if they show emotions. But I know it comes from his asshole father. Anyway, good chapter James, as always.

Corey's father is a real ass. I can't believe he just sold Corey's motorcycle (even though I hate them. lol) right from under Corey's nose. And Corey had no say in it! AND he was also trying to get rid of Trouble. Thank God Corey has such a great mom. I don't know what she ever saw in his father. Thanks for updating so quickly Krista! I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully Clinton will tag along too and they can ditch Jenny.....oohhh, poor Jenny, if she only knew she'll never get anywhere with Corey. lol

Ok, I'm so confused. Wasn't Dean the one who is blackmailing Davey to tell Tyler he's Dave? Dean gave him a month to confess to Tyler, otherwise Dean would tell him. So why was Dean so shocked when Dave told him about Tyler? Dean already KNEW Dave had the hots for Tyler. Ok, so I was thinking that Dave could have called Tyler as Dave and not Davey. As a favor you know, like Dean is doing. Tyler wouldn't know Dave is Davey (shit, even I'm getting confused now. lol) and then when Monday rolled around they would see each other, but Tyler would be none the wiser. Is that how the saying goes? Anyway, I was thinking of this when I was trying to figure out who Dave/Davey called. Oh, also, why did Dave tell Rick that his b/f knew of their bet? Oh, b/c the b/f is supposed to be Dean, and Dean knows all about it. Now I get it. lol Well, I cannot wait for the next chapter; this is getting so good. Omg, especially since I think Dave FORGOT THAT TIMMY'S FATHER IS TYLER!!!!!!! Holy shit, is Dave planning on confessing toTyler at the party? Wait, if Tyler is back from his business trip, WHY THE HELL HASN'T HE CALLED DAVEY YET????????????????? Omg, I'm on pins and needles now, anticipating how this party is gonna play out.

I ditto everything Louis said. I also got kinda choked up reading it, especially the last line. That was beautiful. But besides crying, I was laughing hysterically throughout this chapter, just like the last chapter. Rebecca was so funny in all her obliviousness (is that even a word?), but omg, my mouth was hanging open when Tristan let that comment slip. Holy shit! And their banter at the bar was so amusing. They all get along so well that they can really be themselves. You know, like friends who have been friends forever, not just work friends. They can really let their hair down, so to speak. Tony, I'm also impressed by all your pictures and the whole Craigslist thing; it's really cool how you do that. Especially since I'm so computer stupid. I just learned to copy and past about a year ago. Seriously. Now I'm gonna be anxiously waiting for chapter three ! =)

Tony, Tony, Tony! I just creeper-stalked your profile (and you are a cutie-patootie, lol) and realized that YOU'RE THE HELLA AWESOME AUTHOR WHO WROTE THOSE FANTASTIC STORIES on the other site. lol I was like, omg, I read that, and I read that one and that one. haha I'm so glad you're back to writing; I loved all your stories, but especially "Maybe the Sky Will Fall" and "Second Star to the Right". I can't wait to read chapter two! =)

I am so happy Scott is finally trying to move on without feeling like he's betraying Steve. After all, Steve would want him to be happy again; he wouldn't want the man he loved so much to wallow in self-pity and shut himself off for the rest of his life. I also have a funny feeling that Noah is Will's friend who Scott is meeting on Monday. I actually got that feeling when Noah asked Scott if he wanted to talk about the bad year he had. Noah said he was a really good listener and that got me thinking that maybe he's the person Scott's supposed to see. I'm glad you'll be updating more Fitz; I really enjoy this story.

Hey KC! Congratulations on publishing your story! That's so exciting! And is the hunk on the book cover Percy? Awesome choice. lol

Holy crap! I just looked over to my left while I was reading the other reviews and noticed you just posted chapters two and three. Shit, I better catch up. This is an awesome story Tony. I was laughing from start to finish. Tristan had some of the funniest lines I've read. He's a real pisser. Oh, I did notice a discrepancy though: when Tristan was daydreaming about kissing Cameron, he didn't notice Cameron getting up from behind his desk and coming towards him. He heard his name called and he blinked. (something like that) But Tristan never told Cameron his name, as was pointed out a few paragraphs below when Cameron said to Tristan, "I never got your name." Just wanted to point that out in case you wanted to take a look at it. Anyway, on with chapter two!

Renee! You're back! I LOVE Alyssa! She is so cute, and so typical of a little kid that doesn't know how to filter their thoughts. lol I'm sure with Shawn's sweet and gentle personality she'll warm right up to him. I also loved Brian being the protective, older brother. Luckily he didn't scare Shawn off. Great chapter Renee, looking forward to the next one. =)

See, I knew Coop meant for the BOTH of them to find a place! lol Gee, and all Owen had to do was ask, but no, instead he spends a sleepless night fighting anxiety. Glad they got all the misunderstandings cleared up!

Shit, these were the longest six days waiting for an update! lol I'm glad Ogre confessed to Heidi and I'm glad she told him he needed to fix the relationship between him and Little Man. I'm really glad Little Man decided to take Ogre back. He was displaying all the symptoms of depression and I was really worried about him. I just hope and pray that Ogre is true to his word. And here was another chapter I thought Eric was gonna walk in on them! lol Then of course they won't have to tell him anything. hahah Terrific chapter Mann. Whew! Now I can relax till the next update.

Em!!!! You're back!!!!!! God I was really missing this story! Or could you tell by all my nagging? lol I keep forgetting that David/Davey's name is Dave Matthews. haha I'm assuming that Rick invited Tyler and Timmy (that's Tyler's son's name, right?) to Josh's party? That should be interesting when Tyler sees David again. I wonder if this time he'll notice anything familiar? Hmmmmm. Can't wait to find out! And I can't believe Davey's mom! Jesus I would NEVER impose on my kids like that! Just assume that they'll just LOVE all these people crowding their small apartment. Poor Davey. Although his mom is a hoot! lol Looking forward to the party Em! =)

Oh man, Nina is a thorn in Heath's side. She is NOT going to go away peacefully. Hopefully when she 'visits' Alec, he won't believe any of the shit she'll be spewing. lol Great chapter Kim! Although I was frustrated (of course not like Heath and especially Alec) that they didn't get to "finish" (wink, wink) their date.

Krista! You're back! I had to re-read chapter fifteen to see where the story left off. And wow, I'm glad you updated b/c that was sorta a little cliffie there. =) I hope Clinton can help Corey forget about that two-timing Greg. I'm also glad Clinton knows enough about dogs to know they need to eat and go outside every once in awhile. lol With every chapter I hate Corey's dad more and more. How can his mom stand to live with someone like that? He is so controlling, so overbearing, no wonder Corey's a mess inside. Nothing he ever does is right according to his father. Thank God his mom is there as a sort of buffer with every situation that comes up. Anyway...I'm glad C&C are getting closer. I hope Clinton wasn't lying when he said he would still be Corey's friend when CJ got back. I hope CJ doesn't coerce him into ignoring or worse yet, abusing Corey again. Clinton needs to learn how to stand up to CJ also. I hate CJ just as much as I hate Corey's father. Great chapter Krista! Hopefully the next one we won't have to wait so long for....hint, hint....