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Thank you for this, well done and simply fantastic!
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Does Hugo have an alibi? Most likely not!
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Azula has made himself and through has sister, a kingmaker….any harm brings the inevitable downfall of Lyria…. A masterpiece of planning and diplomatic planning! And now to produce the actual evidence! Olneth and Gesi are in for a rude awakening and hopefully don’t have poison pills in their mouths….and are forced to remain in their seats under guard….and then to their just desserts….
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Chapter 7: The Cold Equation
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 7: The Cold Equation
As much as I want to see Vane sitting with Satan, he deserves to suffer months of the same treatment. -
Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
drsawzall commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 9- Moonlight Glass
Almost a case of coitus interrupt us. And what does dear old mommy want? -
In the end of all things the perceptions and attitudes, show that while we are talking about different species, we are more alike than not.
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Brave when no one can see you, and hiding in the shadows… Then he heard it—a voice, low and mean, drifting from the shadows near the fence. “This ain’t over.” Andy stopped cold. The bus door hissed open behind him, but he didn’t move.
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It’s just a matter of time I’d think before Eli succumbs totally…this ending of the vespers cannot come fast enough…
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I’d say a cold shower is needed…..my goodness, what a chapter!
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Casey…like a bad rash that just won’t go away…perhaps he should try his wiles with Brooke….
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Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Disinformation Engine
For me there is a fundamental layering of profound sadness as @Cane23 noted. I believe we are seeing the tip of the horrors that will unfold, and yes some of those we’ve come to know and root for won’t make it out alive. Does anyone ever get released whole and healthy? I suspect not… -
Inquiring minds, while not wishing too hasten Uncle Edwin’s demise want, no need to know exactly what kind of knickknacks might populate the house in the south of France!! She laughed. “Of course, quite what you’d do with a house in south-west France and the fruits of a lifetime collecting near-erotic nicknacks…”
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I sense the Rubicon might be crossed soon….
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Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
drsawzall commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
Well thank goodness that alls well with the boys and what kind of fun, games, and drama await in the next (hint) twenty chapters? -
Well this is a fine mess you’ve gotten them into….
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I could have used a brother like that with some of my former employers…. Well now…the boys have really stepped into it..haven’t they?
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Featured Story: No going back by Robert Hugill
drsawzall commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
This reviewer has the gist of this great story and others by this author. Simply a fantastic read about ordinary men and folks doing the ordinary things that occur in daily life. I can’t recommend this story highly enough! This is well worth the read! -
Just a random thought out, way out of left field, what if Lucien is playing a longer game just to gain his freedom and playing Eli? The random thought may be a result of the geyser vapors at Yellowstone…🤫
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Speeding up the timeline … The variable is not fully accounted for… And I am loving this…. Miles and Kylie stepped into the kitchen. Eli stood up to refill his glass and heard them through the wall. “The profile matches,” Kylie said. Her voice was steady, clinical. “Timeline is tight but workable. We need you to run the alumni check.” “I’ll have it by next week,” Miles said. “We should accelerate. Given the situation.” Situation. Meaning Eli. Meaning the variable the system hadn’t anticipated. “Agreed. I’ll reach out to the Sinclair contact for the distribution logistics.”
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I phone 13 when first new and switched over from Samsung. There are things I still can’t get used to after so many years. I have one complete and have to check if it is afoul of one of da rules. And another that just popped in to my mind and will be done shortly. As to the seven words this week all I got for most of them were certain four letter words!!! In Yellowstone and the Tetons this eeek. Now I understand why they suggest you don’t pat the Buffalo!!!!
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Not to forget Parker House Rolls….or Toll House chocolate chip cookies SILVER @weinerdog
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Hopefully Calder goes down quickly. And the council send observers to keep this from getting out of hand, keeping the thirty on the sidelines
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I’m of the belief that the universe will work its wonders and that both find what they need. Miles vanished and three years later, he needs to let go, confront his inner demons, find a balance and move on. In those three years only one message….here’s hoping he can find his own happiness and meet a partner who compliments him. But then again I’m only in for the
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Against the Wall, Part Two of Three
drsawzall commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Against the Wall, Part Two of Three
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It’s a shame semen doesn’t have the same properties as blood… This was a difficult chapter to read. Stuck on a layover in Salt Lake surrounded by you know who’s! 🤔🤔 Ain’t no adjustment happening 😉😆🤔
