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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    And hopefully not chew my sneakers said the old man with the glasses….
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Flip must of had second thoughts, wondering how Arthur’s log was gonna fit into his fireplace, good thing the prostate starter button was working.
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Thank you for this, letting us know that if we get our act together, there’s hope for the future… This was very well done and could have been a three part episode of the Twilight Zone!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 24

    The quiet before the storm of movie making takes over their lives…and kudos to the award if he is nominated and wins! And he should…
  5. Time in the morning to go back to the inn, and hopefully they haven’t moved on
  6. After that last sentence I’m a fearing there mite be several more chapters before the boys skedaddle and get on the road…my poor nervous condition….talk about heart palpitations…
  7. drsawzall

    Fire watchers

    They are getting closer….now for alibis to start falling apart
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Wow...so much food for thought, and for me, the best line in the search for the ledger and the logic behind disseminating copies to ensure its survival... Jocko nodded. “Good. Hard to steal a fish after it’s already been cut into chowder.”
  9. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Well now...This can go so many ways and more than a handful of assumptions....
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    If you had only used the cooking spray Pam...this could have been avoided....but no...next time I make wings... He moved to the second wing, but that produced the same results. By the time he tried the third wing, he put all his power behind it, and the tray skidded across the counter. He frowned as the reality set in. He had forgotten to coat the pan with oil.
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very well done and captivated me from the start...
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    When one assumes they make an ass out of you and me...Ambrosia...
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A unique take for sure...I caught the shaky hand as well...As well as Tom...and the alley...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Of course you aren't gay...are you?
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    While not my cup of tea, this was very well done, the imagery alone was fantastic.
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Thank you SA. We are but shades of differences from the past
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Not necessarily my cup of tea, but well done SA
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    From the best of the Twilight Zone or Outer Limits...this was well done...thank you SA
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Same here!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Did you want a @weinerdog instead???
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    What a twist...well done SA
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Loved this story!!
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I won't say the author of this comment is lying, I also remember those pesky little maps standing in the AAA office watching the wizened old clerk highlight my route, irrtated as I used my parents AAA card...I did get my own...
  24. drsawzall

    Pillars

    Thank you for this Wayne…simply a fantastic and excuse the expression, a barn burner. looking forward to how this wraps up…No, I may have been harsh with my comments regarding Zane in the last chapter, supposing 63 million reasons may be sufficient as a form of punishment….leastways, for what ever reason the branding stuck with me. As vile an act a man could do to his son, to me should not go unpunished or unknown….again 63 million reasons isn’t enough in this case. This truly is among the best of your work…
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