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  1. drsawzall

    Assessing Wounds

    Thanks, nice to see this chapter! Take care and be well, we’ll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
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    Chapter 18

    Tell us how you really feel!!
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    Chapter 2

    This deserves more than just a few chapters….
  4. Together, and next year defending the Golden Egg together! What’s not to love….
  5. I’m reminded of the old story of the fisherman saying it, was this big holding his arms out wide when the fish was only six inches…
  6. This was a fun chapter to read…And the overnight should be….interesting 😉
  7. Not so much a cliffhanger,but a wait and see hanger…next book please….and thanks
  8. Stefan truly is an odd duck…
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    Chapter 6

    The key here is for Sam while procuring the drug, to avoid using it…
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    Chapter 5

    Sam needs to temper his rage, and it will take more than one conversation with Ser Graeme, and coming to terms with the finality of the death of his parents…I believe he will get there, it will take some time.
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    Chapter 7

    While Rome is burning, no one looks for Nero… My goodness so much happened in this chapter, and I expect no one will come out of this as we see them now…and what of Renn, the little turd?
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    Chapter 4

    I loved this chapter so much going on, I have to wonder what it will take to get Nyrra to at least to accept him… And, I second the motion…
  13. I keep wondering as to how the reading of the will will impact everyone…it may just be me, but I get a sense of difficulty or foreboding..
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    MEPS, 05:12 A.M.

    The stage is set, and now to see how this all unfolds…
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    Chapter 14

    Brilliant…simply brilliant… I also have to wonder, in these future snippets, we see nothing of Lord Wylan….hummm?
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    Chapter 1

    The following resonated with me.. I spent many an hour watching the very same thing at the nature center next to my home….loved this The patient hunter, strikes at a blurry shadow, minnow, mouse, or frog for dinner?
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    Cain

    I know the lies they tell about us, Cain…. WOW! such a powerful sentiment!
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    Selection

    You had me with the simple truth of this stanza…. So I say I am a self, ingrained, born as I was, and not as chosen by politicians or scripture with less wisdom or understanding of true nature than ducks or crocuses or the rain.
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    No More Words

    The hope we all yearn for and hope it isn’t misplaced.Well done! Why did I ever let you back inside Now from you, I feel I have to hide The best way to achieve this I can't decide Here are my words
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    Garlic or Love

    The first two were great and thought provoking…and I had to reread them.. You had me with garlic, it brought back bittersweet memories of my father, who reeked for days after a meal with garlic, and drinking a bottle of mouthwash wasn’t enough either. The family cat who would nap on dad while he was resting his eyes on the couch, wouldn’t go near him… Thanks for this and sparking a memory…
  21. Thank you for this. While not having major depressive episodes, I do have my "blue" moments, and that is just what they are, moments. I can sympathize, but not having first-hand experience, I can only thank those who shine a light on their struggles. To the day when help is needed, the help needed is there!
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    Chapter 1

    I like this and want to see where it goes...
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    Chapter 24

    All I can say is, thank goodness his car is parked, safely away from him!!!
  24. Not sure I would have survived if my high school had a swimming program…all those delectable boys in speedos….
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    Chapter 24

    And we witness the birth of another red herring…. Killian needs to think things through, not properly dressed and his failure to carry the gun or something he could have used to defend himself. He may be a brilliant PI, but at the same time he’s an idiot….
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