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  1. drsawzall

    Reckoning

    If the killer had good lawyers, that's exactly what they should do: to use the plea to mitigate portions of his life sentence...
  2. We are so lucky so many talented authors take the time to share their work with us!
  3. The two are made for each other, and Billy is a putz….and I like Joey!
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    Chapter 17

    Can you color the planets outer atmosphere yellow?
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    Chapter 17

    Hopefully the spire neutralizes the father and then self destructs.
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    Chapter 15

    The escape was thrilling and now to find Camilla to wrap this sordid mess up.
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    Chapter 12

    Can’t add much to these comments other than to say they were fantastic… Hopefully the switch happens before the inquiry into who was actually to blame for the loss of the 500…if not rat the bastard out!!! is it required to polish the lances before using??
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    Tongues Sliding

    Take Mike on a date or just to your apartment! It is time to take this further!!!
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    Chapter 29

    Twin sons a double blessing and once again Danilo is worth his weight in gold…the bit about the necklace was priceless… Is the good friar about to overstep is position, preaching himself into a corner with no exit? Lauretta has wisdom far beyond her years, she is a treasure. Which way will the winds blow?
  10. You've left us hanging with a couple of outstanding items. I did notice Daphne's attitude, might she be a distant cousin to either Clare or Brittany??? The message from Alice, what's up??? I'm confused...This just to name one of couple other comments, remind me of Sam? "Hmm... here." Bitter nausea spread through Dante as he handed Frank his phone with the message, and then seconds later he could see something very similar flit across Frank's face. "Do you remember the address?", Frank then asked seriously, handing the phone back. Some additional background is needed here... "We can't just-" "What can't we, huh?" Frank raised his right hand and began counting off on his fingers. "Give the Sapphires the finger, give Matt and Alice the finger, make some people very happy, grant us a wish-" Thank you for taking the time to gift us with this story. The ending seems incomplete to me and could have been fleshed out a bit better...but, that's just me!!! Will you be finishing White Sheets?
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    Chapter 20

    Trail cameras, easy to order on line and even Amazon as well!!! If it is proven one of the Bres’ was responsible, stringing them up by their testimonials would be too kind……
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    Song and Sex

    Could it possibly be two hands on the organ? 🤔
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    Chapter 2

    So much success may make the thief’s overconfident…Just surprised stronger measures weren’t taken after the second theft.
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very intriguing and captivating! And a very interesting plot….At least we have a name of the Lord behind if not all, some of this destabilization program. Very well. In any case, this last amount of black ore should be enough to serve our purpose.” “You had better hope so. Otherwise, if the plan breaks, Lord Hulan will not spare us. Move the tree, get rid of those two, and let’s get moving.”
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    Song and Sex

    Neil...you sly dog, and good on you!!~!
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    Stay

    So much said in so few words.... Proof that my life was no longer shaped only by what I had survived. It could be shaped by what I built.
  17. Loved this story, and it was a delight to read. I highly suggest reading it!
  18. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Looks to be an interesting story!
  19. One can only imagine how the talk went and what to do….
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    Chapter 16

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    Chapter 20

    Son of a bitch…..just knew something like this would happen, they knew who was in the truck and the authorities should be told, and if not arrested, made to understand they won’t get away with it. If I remember correctly there is still the well where the broken leg was healed. Perhaps it may be another portal. And for goodness sakes, place a couple of trail cameras there…. Just so unnecessary sad….
  22. Thank you for sharing this and looking forward to more of your work!
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    Chapter 13

    Oh my goodness, bring on the next chapter! Wowzer was that hot!!!
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    Chapter 28

    Be very certain of the “statements “ you make in any direct confrontation, and as Mateo noted earlier when retrieving Gianluca, there exists the possibility of misbehavior by the church…this could easily go either way… There would be a reckoning, but it would be deliberate. He began to consider the form it might take. A public exchange, perhaps. A disputation framed not as punishment but as inquiry. Benedetto would be invited to stand by his words before magistrates and clergy alike. Let him explain what obedience meant in a city whose peace depended upon it. Let him define rebellion in the light of day.
  25. I once had a like minded friend who was almost as gifted…sigh….
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