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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 5 of 10

    What will you do when it all goes sideways and find out your desires were just smoke-filled dreams....
  2. Dylan ain't all that....sorry...not sorry...
  3. Could Jack, the fortune teller, possibly replace Cassandra once this is all over?
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 45

    Thank you for this, If they don't have grey hair now, they should after the next 4!
  5. drsawzall

    27: Finley

    Wowzer, that was a fun read....
  6. Shoplifting a couple of beers isn't a federal crime or deserving of jail time, I can't imagine anything short of restitution, fines and community service...but this is @Lee Wilson's world... I bet there is room in the Korner @weinerdog.....
  7. There's a reason all these folks, including Mermonster, are being brought together....
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    What happens when one plays with fire....
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    I am stunned with Will's lack of foresight, I have to wonder as a small child, he was told not to touch the hot stove and simply had to touch it... Stunned that he actually asked Aiden for advice... Hasn't made the appointment to see the Dr., it should be job #1 I have to agree with @Summerabbacat, I don't think Catlin is preggers, it could be a 'false' pregnancy... Here's hoping the show does well.... I have to admit I have been very harsh on Will, for that I have to blame the author for doing his job, to invest the reader in his work...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 4 of 10

    Someone is channeling their inner Kathy Lee Bates I know that our love is fake. It's not real – I forced it upon him. Even so, how could I not fall in love with Seth while knowing this? The sound of his voice, the way he talks, even the way he smiles when he shows his teeth. I could be good for him, you know. I could make him happy. I could worship him. He's had to make his sacrifice to be with me (granted I thrusted that upon him), so this will be mine. I will make Seth Boughton happy. All he has to do is stay with me all the days of his life. Delusional just a bit??? Whatta you gonna do when it all goes to crap??? I can't describe the way I felt my face going any other way than that: strange. I was remembering the spell, remembering invoking and pleading with the dark forces to do my bidding.
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    While the cat tiger is away/occupied, the crew will play...hard!!!!
  12. It looks like the master is pushing Richter to harness the most of his abilities!!
  13. drsawzall

    Blurb & Flashback

    This should prove to be interesting...
  14. One of the best "pants are coming off tonight" lines!!! “I’ve got us a reservation at Monroe.” My eyes widened. “Wait—Monroe Monroe?” He gave a small nod, already turning onto the main road. “Jesus. That’s… kind of fancy.” He glanced at me sideways. “You’re worth it.”
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    Chapter 20

    It's good to see that the Lady in Black has met her match. Was she flying solo, or are there others like her? I can't forget that there is a possibility of a treasure hunt on the newly acquired property!!! You might want to go back and edit this chapter; you have used the same paragraph twice!!! As the adrenaline began to fade, Reginald felt a wave of exhaustion wash over him. He sank to his knees, the weight of the battle finally catching up to him. Alex and Omar, who had been watching from a distance, rushed to his side, helping him to his feet. "You did it, Reggi," Alex said, his voice filled with awe and relief. Omar nodded; his eyes wide with admiration. "You were incredible." Reginald managed a tired smile. "I couldn't have done it without you both. Thank you for being here." They helped him back to the manor, where he could rest and recover. The battle had been won, but Reginald knew that there would be more challenges ahead. With the support of his friends and the strength of his newfound abilities, he felt ready to face whatever the future held. As the adrenaline began to fade, Reginald felt a wave of exhaustion wash over him. He sank to his knees, the weight of the battle finally catching up to him. Alex and Omar, who had been watching from a distance, rushed to his side, helping him to his feet.
  16. As with the travels with the Prince, things are not always as they seem....
  17. You will never look at a college application essay the same way ever again, simply brilliant!!!
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    Thanks, Dads

    Just so pithy and sweet....loved this!!!!
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 3 of 10

    Troy is in desperate need of help and medications....
  20. The first of many 'public' steps taken, I did miss however, one Venetia Murray...
  21. drsawzall

    Skull's Watch

    And after all this , they are no closer to ending all of this....there has to be a sunny day oceanside somewhere...
  22. Oh...the things we should say when it is time to say what we feel...
  23. Early days yet, but hope is growing or so it would seem... Ewan turned to go—but paused. “For what it’s worth,” he said without looking back, “I like your mother. And I respect her.” Kieran grunted. Then, quietly, “Yeah. Alright.” And Ewan walked off. Kieran stood alone in the courtyard, the wind tugging at his cloak. Maybe leadership wasn’t about controlling everything.. Maybe it was about letting go of what didn’t matter, so you could fight for what did. And right now, that was keeping Arcum’s soldiers alive. Those disgruntled nobles have a pathetically short memory...they were once nearly food for demons... Seraphine isn't doing that great of a job concealing what it is like to have a splintery stick up her butt.... Rory needs a giant bottle of testicular fortitude, assert his rank, and f'uk the rest of the high and mighty elves and tell 'em to assume the positions....
  24. I think those legs need a closer exam after that strenuous workout...Pronto Troy, freaking pronto...time's a wasting...
  25. This story keeps going from strength to strength and just keeps getting better!!!
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