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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Randy like a bad rash just may keep coming back.... Why waste time talking when you can just jump right into the action....I mean, words are superfluous at this point, moaning and groaning is the order of the day/moment!!! “Have I told you lately that I love you?” Ricky asked. “I don’t know tell me again.” “I love you,” Ricky repeated. “We’re talking too much, let’s fuck.”
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 108

    Thank you for this update...am eagerly awaiting the next chapter...thanks!! Humm...a bit of foreshadowing perhaps??? “A country that was once poor with a sudden glut of money,” I explained. “Whose family will frivolously spend money for their prince’s birthday...” “Who would also not blink at spending a billion to get him back,” Peter furthered.
  3. Not sure what is more preferable, an engagement on the open seas with a well-matched enemy or doing battle with the pit of vipers that pass for "society' in London... And then this...not to mention the send-off as he was relieved of command, manning the yardarms is a tribute indeed!!! Durham laughed at that, and Granger laughed with him. “A most useful card to play. I understand you had the privilege of sailing with my sister-in-law.” He was referring to Lady Elgin, a horrible shrew of a woman. “I do not wish to speak badly of your relation, and as I can say nothing nice, I will say nothing at all,” Granger said, making Durham laugh again. “My wife will appreciate your comment,” Durham said. “I suspect that if Lady Elgin came up in conversation, the two of you would just stand there silently staring at each other.” They laughed some more until Durham’s steward came up to him. “Sir, Lord Brentwood left some stores for you,” the man said. “This is their estimated value.” Granger held up his hand to stop this line of conversation. “There are some smaller items, and I leave them as a gift for you. Perhaps you can find a use for them when you first host your officers for dinner.” “That is most kind of you, my lord,” Durham said.
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    As an ardent lover of the Sci-Fi genre I thought this story rocked! I hope this isn't the last of it, either thru prequels or sequels!!! Thank you SA!!!!
  5. Oh dear lord, if a bit over 1400 words is gonna fry my synapses, I shudder to think what a longer chapter is gonna do... Mucho caliente Mama...and I ain't describing the 100 degree day with a dewpoint north of 70 here at the farm....than god for handy facecloths... Off to the showers boys and others...
  6. drsawzall

    Ercole Redux

    This chapter had me chuckling at Ercole's antics....he's like the, energizer bunny
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    One thing is for certain, amongst this group peccadillos abound...Can't add much to the comments but I would be calling Owen on the way home if it isn't too late, or before breakfast... Then there's this....drunk logic that almost makes sense...Well done, I found this very entertaining and very enjoyable!!! More please and thanks!!!! Stephen smacked Percy in the back of the head as he said, “Underwear can’t be gay.” Percy rubbed his head as he glared at Stephen. He said, “I didn’t think my asshole could be gay, and then Five stuck his dick in it. And my gay asshole definitely liked it.” “Well, if I’m to be honest,” Five said thoughtfully as he tilted his head as he stared at Percy. “My dick kind of liked your gay asshole.” “Underwear and assholes can’t be gay,” Timothy said as he rolled his eyes. “Only the penis in the underwear can be gay.” “Whew,” Five said as he wiped imaginary sweat from his brow. He looked at Percy and said sadly, “I guess it’s my straight dick and your gay asshole from now on.”
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    Oh the memories… Old man?” I laughed as I clutched my chest. “Boy, I’ve been sucking dick since I was twelve.” That seemed to open the door. Stanley laughed and apologized. “I’m sorry,” he said. “I just can’t picture someone your age in bed with another man.”
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    Just a tiny bit of foreshadowing...hummm Four very young men parted feeling exceptionally good about life. Fortunately they were all too young to have been hit by any kind of adversity… yet. And Handsy Randy, he of the russian hands and roman fingers, needs to be hit by a transit bus or subway car...just saying...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    A masterpiece in descriptive English and prose, well done!!!
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 22

    Well...it wasn't exactly a kick to the groin or a blow towards his pride but Franz can chalk it up to new experiences... As to Jolanda...here's a prayer that her comeuppance is complete and thorough....
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    Well now, if Janek isn't the one of his dreams, shouldn't Marc not be leading him on, or at least have a healthy discussion considering they are tossing the 'L' word around...hope a messy ending isn't in store for Janek...or Marc doesn't succumb to an ankle biter....
  13. Well, this is a heck of a start...an unexpected visitor to say the least and most likely thru the weekend...and longer??? BTW, it sounds like the parents both need two behind the ear....
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 16

    One door closes and another door will open, Matt has a quandary to navigate. I would seem as if going home to see 'mother' is not a choice, and the path back to Windy Island is always a consideration. I suspect Matt may spend a few days in Turkey to sightsee before heading back towards Scotland...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 20 - Kai

    Here in Central Massachusetts, we are under a tropical heat wave with temps from the low 80's to mid-90's and expected temps to reach a real-feel temp of 100 tomorrow. Humidity, and I need to remember it isn't the heat but the stupidity @Summerabbacat..., in the 70 plus range. Spoke with my neighbor farmer yesterday and he told me his dog was chasing the cat...both were lying down... I just loved the slow burn of this chapter and the character development... @Andr0gene, were you leading me on about Ch 21...I just laid in an extra box of tissues and freshly washed bath/shower towels... Well, in Europe, where I live, we're in heat, we're hot, we're simmering, we're smoldering, it's quite warm.
  16. drsawzall

    The Headshot

    From the frying pan to the fire....hopefully Makayla isn't badly hurt and time to say vamoose to the Ponderosa....and skedaddle back home...
  17. drsawzall

    Chapter 27 S2

    That being said....
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Kind of like Abbot and Costello's "Who's on First" comedy sketch....
  19. drsawzall

    King Dick III

    Oh, my goodness, looks like kingdoms are being lost/given away everywhere...
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Talk about an open and shut case...the evil twin was so careful in plotting and planning, but very neglectful as to matters in the home....
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 27 S2

    They were guests in company of others, there are times and places to fight your battles, this wasn't one of them. It was as I said inconsiderate and rude...
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Could this be true love???
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 27 S2

    An interesting chapter and yes, the boys were reckless...Devin especially so...the boys need to learn that sometimes discretion is the better part of valor. That sometimes taking into consideration that other people's feelings and concerns need to be respected...talk about rude and immature... “And Devin and I are going to do this,” I stated firmly while looking directly at my mom.
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    But does Marc know about the last conversation between Janek and his scumbag brother???? And....No fair leaving us with coitus interruptus......grrrrrr!!!!
  25. Another chapter that had me totally delighted...and the bonus was even though I was laughing so hard, I was able to keep dry!!! No trip to Mr. Washing Machine for me!!!
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