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  1. So good, Paul isn't being pressured as he thinks this new environment out, coming to terms with it will be one heck of an adjustment!!
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    Chapter 5

    I have a hunch that Cianán is an ethereal being, and the vial just may be a key, a key that may fully bring him into this world. At some point everyone has to realize just how out of place he is. Declan knows this. I think the Bresnhan's may sense he is different What are the Bresnahans' louts thinking, that they can act as they do with impunity? More please and thanks!!
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    Chapter 4

    Sometimes the mind works in mysterious ways. I kept looking at the picture and hearing a story needing to come out...
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    Chapter 26

    Why does the herald remind me of...
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    Chapter 25

    I agree, these folks deserve each other, it is like the Perils of Pauline... ..
  6. Ryan is a tinderbox looking for a match....
  7. Three people can keep a secret so long as two of them are dead...Gossip spreads faster than the speed of sound...
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    The Latin Choir

    All they need to do is use a sword destined for destruction by Arlo, to kill the Queen and steal her crown...sounds simple and easy...don't it!!!
  9. I remember watching TV shows and movies with my parents, dear old Dad, when it would become obvious as to who the bad guy was going to be, would yell at the TV, thinking the good guys could hear him, to "lock 'em up, shoot the bast#@d," or some other such thing. Not realizing the show wasn't half over...never realizing half a show would mean nothing but commercials... So why am I yelling at my computer????
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    Chapter 4

    And thank you for reading!!!! I had seen the picture I had used for the story cover, and for whatever reason, it stuck with me, and from that, this story came. It is a powerful image of resilience and tenacity.
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    Chapter 4

    A fate worse than death?? "Fine," Jen muttered, sinking back into the couch cushions and closing her eyes. "But if you ruin my vacation by getting murdered I will never forgive you. I may spread your ashes at a Walmart."
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    Chapter 16

    I can’t add much to what has been said other to note the shared burdens and the awful cost that the defense of Thornmere placed on the three of them. The visit to the pallets of the wounded was poignant and tender and the words to the dying so heartfelt. Vows of love spoken and confirmed under the stars, speaks to the sanctity of their love. Thornmere rests and heals as it awaits the coming storm, will they stand alone against the clans blood feud ?
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    Chapter 13

    The white deer is a significant part of this story… What’s the expression, “when pigs fly” I think I want to visit the site of the murder and see things for myself." Novak nodded. "Be careful." "Aren't I always?" "Right, and I'm the Jolly Green Giant." Why did everyone assume I was careless?
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    Chapter 3

    At some point the tables will turn….
  15. Sakis meets, or is that meat, for the crocodile….
  16. Sounds like Graham’s family tree skipped a few evolutionary steps watering down the genetic pool…
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    Chapter 1

    It gets better just wait and watch the bad guys fold!!
  18. OMF'ing God...
  19. Am enjoying this very much!
  20. An intriguing start, let’s see where this goes…
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    Crossing Lines

    Yowzer that was hot! Mathis intrigues me!
  22. What he said… The title for this chapter could have been “Progress”
  23. Please tell us we’ve turned a corner and this misery comes to an end. Dare we hope? I pray it is Tom and Harbor… But the story was still turning. And something — someone — was about to enter Kitt’s world who would shift the balance again. The crack before the change. The hush before the next hit. The moment before the world tilts again
  24. One hopes something gives and not drag on, I am impatient to say the least….Matt…drag your ass back to Riverbend…pronto!!
  25. Steven simply cannot admit that he is wrong, he may have doubts but cannot admit he is wrong. Pride goeth before the fall…
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