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  1. If Dickoless truly wanted to hurt Richard, he certainly picked the right moment; all of his excuses after the meet-up are so frigging hollow. I can't find fault with Sizzler Boy; he doesn't have the backstory...For the life of me, I simply can't understand Dickoless at all... Hopefully this experience, along with the catharsis of the painting, will help Richard find his equilibrium...after being gutted by Dickoless... But what truly bugs me is Dickoless when caught saying : “Shit – oh, wait, it’s okay,” Nicholas says. “It’s just Richard.” They laugh, their eyes shining in the dark. And kudos to the author for crafting a story that has all of us pulling out our hair and expressing our feelings in the comments...well done!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 28

    Forgiveness is divine, and in Vale/Maelor's case, doubly so. If forgiveness holds such power, what power does a love like the following hold? Celyn turned towards him despite the cords binding his wrists. Their eyes held one another with desperate intensity, as though the chamber and all within it had vanished. It was the look of men who had already chosen each other over the world.
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    Chapter 25

    I read this as Xavier trying to push Austin to get him angry enough to force the wolf out...I just have a sneaking suspicion we won't see Austin's wolf until the fight.
  4. I think they will be sucessful in mating... The four of them stood up, and Nos held a hand out towards Cal, a tentative smile on his face. Cal made a show of being indecisive, holding his chin with a tilt of his head for a long moment, before finally reaching over to thread their hands. His antics made Savvie snicker. She leaned over to whisper in Nos's ear. "At the bottom of patience one finds heaven."
  5. I have read this and encourage everyone to read this fine story!
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    Chapter 22

    I would like to think Brent learned a lesson, but I doubt it. He won't let this pass, and once he is done licking his wounds, he'll be back for another beatdown... I would have quietly reported Andy's exchange with the "huge" donor; his security should have caught that exchange, but in all fairness, it was a large room...Perhaps he should let his security team know, so that some other young kid doesn't become either prey or a victim...Loved this chapter!
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    Chapter 29

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    Chapter 29

    Matt may have silenced Casey for the moment, but I still don't think he is done with Levi, and glad to see Jimmy and Dan are letting the past transgressions go and are back to being good friends again...Brooke may need a different kind of napkin tho... Well, I now know what a Yowie, drop bear, and a Hills Hoist are. I could use a Hills Hoist for my yard and let the good lord dry my clothes! Another quiet and calm chapter, and I am suspecting another bump in the road...
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    Chapter 27

    The end of this chapter notes decisions made by 'free will'....will this be the key that unlocks the endless cycle? Or is it continuing the cycle?? “Stay here,” Marco said. “Absolutely not.” Christopher continued up the path. “If I died tomorrow, what would you do?” Marco already knows what the historical answer would be. He would search. Christopher waited. “What would you do?” Marco finally said, “I would grieve you.” Christopher pressed, “And then?” Marco looked towards the sea. “I would go on.” Standing above the storm, with the sea closing around the Tor from every side, Christopher understood that certainty was no longer possible. Perhaps it had never been. He did not know what waited above them. He did not know whether Vale was right. He did not know whether the choice they had discussed could change anything. But he was tired of waiting for knowledge before deciding how to live. Every step that had brought Christopher to the summit had been taken by his own choosing. From the prologue... Maelor's knuckles whitened around his staff. "You speak boldly for a condemned man." The centurion gave a humourless smile. "If I am condemned already, why should I fear boldness?" Celyn turned towards him despite the cords binding his wrists. Their eyes held one another with desperate intensity, as though the chamber and all within it had vanished.It was the look of men who had already chosen each other over the world.
  10. I still think, despite all of this chuntering, that there is some sort of bump in the road coming. That and it looks like a busy travel schedule coming up for Alex...
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    Dawn, part 4

    Passive aggressive much????
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    Catalysts

    Not sure what to say here...Vicky is going to mount a legal challenge against the school board; Dickoless is beyond the pale, ignoring texts from Richard. Is it possible he's that deep in the closet??? And FFS Richard, grow a pair, rub one out occasionally, actually twice a day might be needed....Not sure how much more of this cluelessness I can take; how can he function fine nearly all the time yet remain so obtuse...
  13. Based on the condition of Gram's house, I'm suspecting that Barnswallow might be in the same condition, a fine working farm. After all the money to build such a fine house in town had to come from somewhere...and we know from her letters that she kept the place up.
  14. I also had the strong suspicion that both ladies are friends of Dorothy, and although the phrase won't become known for decades, it certainly applies here...
  15. As well-written and masterful a suspense story that will keep you glued to the screen; if it were a printed book, we'd call it a page turner. Not gonna give anything away other than to say...read this!!!!
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    Chapter 10

    Hey @weinerdog...I'm in last place on Page 2....
  17. Glad I wasn’t the only one who noticed this….if this was Massachusetts we’d call him a Masshole…..a million worthless bonus points to the first one to come up with a equivalent…for starters… You can take the man out of Massachusetts but ya cain’t the masshole out of him… Loved this chapter….
  18. This story was exceptionally well done from beginning to end…leaving all sorts of interesting possibilities….thanks for this. Loved the pacing, the twist and turns!
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    Chapter 26

    But would a true love ever allow this? Marco held his gaze, "Every time I found you, I believed I had undone the last farewell. Every time I lost you, I promised myself I would find you again. I never once learned how to live after you."
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    The Number 8

    That they know so little of the world outside their territories is interesting
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    Chapter 24

    When is the next full moon, 28 days or so...take the time to train rather than rush right into facing the A-hole...
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    Chapter 10

    Lord, don't I know it. Last week, coming off I-495 for a dental appointment, I pulled onto a dual-lane road in either direction. Mind you, I was in the right lane when the car beside me in the left lane decided there was enough space (wrong), and made the move to my lane. My reaction was to turn the wheel to the right and hit the brakes, where my right front tire ate a granite curbstone... Did the idiot stop...nope...but the tire was easier to take considering all the crap that went into an accident report, not counting missing the car...but as luck would have it, the traffic was backed up because of an accident, one of the cops directing traffic, pulled the masshole over and they are paying for a new tire and rim, just shy of $800....my damaged underpants, not so much...
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks, this story has all sorts of directions it could go in, I wonder how different our worlds of today would be, and the years just before and after the Civil War... Shhhsh...it's a secret bit there may be one, if not two, follow-ups for the anthology....
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    Going Home

    Can't add muct to what the commentators have said other than...
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    Chapter 10

    For those not familiar with the great Commonwealth of Massachusetts, we mentioned how one half of the state, the eastern half, is all sunshine, puppy dogs, unicorns, and rainbows... The other half could also be described as Appalachia north...Centrally located along the Interstate 91 corridor...There's a word that describes some of the folks, Massholes....It is a term generally reserved for idiotic drivers, and we are chock full of them...that's my story, and I'm sticking to it, make your own inference here folks.... And, I'm loving this story...you've been missed on these pages....
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