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    Chapter 7

    At fifteen, Levi hasn’t had a phone, either land or mobile, and no internet; one has to wonder as to the rigidity of the ‘bubble’ he has grown up with. Somehow, I am reminded of a poster I saw some years ago...
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    Chapter 6

    Every one needs to remember small steps and respecting other diverse views.
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    Chapter 5

    It is early days yet to decide where Levi falls on the religious spectrum…and he should be exposed to other less strident faiths and remember the golden rule.
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    Chapter 4

    A very difficult situation handled with the utmost grace and compassion!
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    Chapter 3

    I am curious as to similarities between our three power users…
  6. And the noose tightens…no chances for any missteps now, not with nearly two years till the old bastard does, and lord only knows how many folks will be hurt… No matter what his mother may think, she best keep her upper vagina clamped shut…
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    Chapter 1

    My thoughts exactly, and being late to the party, time to binge read!
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    Chapter Seven

    Just has a random, @weinerdog moment, and they are all good… What if Margot accidentally gets outed, through no fault of Owen’s, before Owen comes out?? And hopefully Ryder won’t overload Owen to soon! I enjoy The VBS segments of the story as well!
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    Chapter 18

    Now…if only Ivas could fly an airship….
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    Chapter 10

    Hopefully surgical skills will only need to be used on the two goons.
  11. Perhaps we need Dr Livingston to pull the stick from Stanley’s backside…..
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    Frank

    My goodness this was an intense chapter and very well done.
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    Aftermath

    Taggert, living on a self imposed island is beginning to see that it’s ok to step off and test the waters so to speak…. The other commenters above have said it much better the I could. This was a fantastic chapter…
  14. My comment from the first time reading this... Simply a masterclass in story arc and development. In many ways it was a rollercoaster ride for the gamut of thought provoking emotions. All in all it demonstrated that as flawed humans we are capable of redemption. Poingant, sanguine, and heart wrenching. I found the ending simply powerful.......Thank you!!! Thanksgiving is coming up in six weeks or so. MJ will be there. Come up to the Twin Cities for the holiday. Carrie would love to get to know you, and the kids need a chance to meet their uncle.” Sarafian’s face looked wary. “I don’t know. I’m not—” Knowing what a leap for him such a visit would be, I cut him short, and covered his hand again. “You have to be there. You’re family.”
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    Chapter 17

    When this is all over and accounts settled, I believe the following just may become reality… Your home is beautiful and warm,” Raithion said, looking toward the house. “Yulin loves it here. And the women in the kitchen have shown Skye so much love than I could have imagined. Thank you for inviting us into your space.” Azula settled the heavy towel around his neck. “What about you, Raithion? Are you comfortable here?” They reached the heavy front door, and Raithion stepped ahead to hold it open. “I do feel a peace here that I haven’t felt in years,” Raithion said honestly as they stepped into the cool, quiet hallway. "I've slept deeply, eaten good food, and spent hours enjoying the weather in your courtyard. Everyone we've met has been very kind. We love it here."
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    Chapter 16

    To a new beginning and let justice be served! It is time to make Gesi Ajai pay for his crimes. A cornered animal is at its most dangerous…What comes won’t be easy and I expect plots within plots…
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    Chapter 15

    Hopefully the meeting in the morning should go a long way towards normalizing the issues between them. When Azula meets with the Basileus Dio, nothing less than full independence from Lyria should be granted…
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    Chapter 14

    Could not have said it any better….
  19. And now the hard part comes…rehab!
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    Chapter Six

    Early days yet…but Ryder has set the hook, now to land Owen. Cole…call me we don’t live that far apart, 123 Maple St, Anytown 23455
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    Chapter 9

    Perhaps they could alternate nights and positions….. This is tragically hilarious… The worst kept secret that keeps the town laughing and placing bets..
  22. So mother wants to marry Rose off to Oliver….a minor complication hopefully! And finally the boys consummated their love by having their cake and eating it too!
  23. I agree with all the others and look forward to more!
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    Chapter 12

    Or one with a reoccurring rash in his secret place…
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    Chapter 11

    And now for the fun part, the original Mission Impossible!
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