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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 17 S2

    And the adventure begins, the search of a lifetime...what will they find???
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    As@pvtguy noted Pete is the change agent, so amply demonstrated by his two conversations regarding Dr. Danbury and Micca Breslen... Then as @RainbowPhoenixWI so wonderfully noted, Carl just might have the rest of the gang together...perhaps a picture of a cozy campfire might suit their purposes as they play... This had been lying dormant in the further recesses of my cranium for a bit...I am convinced Jordan Turner isn't as smart as he would like to think he is...if there were to be a popularity contest or an election between him and Uncle George, I would bet the ranch on who would win...
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    Chapter 19

    I think what is best about this chapter is that what we are seeing are folks living normal lives with normal aspirations, regardless of their sexuality... If we spent half the time on things that matter, rather than the time spent on those issues that are created to divide us, how much better this world would be. And it looks like the reach of the 'awesome foursome' is growing exponentially....hope to see more of them in the upcoming chapters...heck...they just might have their own story to follow this one!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter Seven

    It is obvious there is more to Cormac, might he have an answer to what is going on with Nathan's arm??? Absolve both of them from their past? This is stereotypical....and so frigging stupid. It would make the point that in all the stupid decisions Nathan has made, he has learned nothing... “I wrote that report and gave it to a courier today,” Brohm said. “Hopefully we’ll hear back from Shaw soon.” Nathan nodded, absentmindedly smoothing the bandage on his arm. From time to time, pain would spike up to his neck and chest, but he considered it best not to tell Brohm. It would only worry him.
  5. Folks who live in glass houses...always treat those who work for you as valued employees!!!!
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    Mother

    Two snippets stood out for me in this chapter and what a chapter it was... Dan wrinkled his nose, “Sort of, but I’ve never had what you could call a regular boyfriend, and life in the Force meant I kept my head down.” “So, you’ve never talked to her about what you want from life.” “Too scared I suppose. She has hopes; though she’s not religious, underneath there’s still something of the archetypal Catholic Nonna about her. Food and Family are her thing.” She stared at him, “You’ll have to bite the bullet some time, and I’ll say this for Vaughan, he’s very house-trained.” I was laughing so hard I nearly snorted my lunchtime glass of water... >No expense spared. But it is very… Another pause. >Revealing. “We’d noticed.” There was a noise on the other end of the line, but she did not say anything. “But Dan is being careful. A job is not worth giving up your dignity for.” >And Dan? “Has not lost his dignity. Yet.” >He is a very attractive young man, even Edna noticed. Those trousers are well cut, but very revealing. Edna says to tell you that you are very lucky.
  7. It will be interesting to see how Oscar makes out with the new course of studies!!
  8. drsawzall

    Reconnect

    After a bit over a quarter of a million words in this twisted never-ending tale of angst, lack of impulse control, and a shut and dried case for youthinasia, the only redeeming character in this debacle is the dog Jack... Oh...and M is preggers as noted earlier...
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Isn't that what they wear after a wild weekend???
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    Before they arrive in Ipalos, I am willing to wager that they will all need each other, then there is Krahh and I am sure we will see more of him...and how will they explain the clothing???
  11. The good and kind emperor needs a boot up his backside...
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    Chapter 2

    They have a supposition, let's hope the killer(s) is spotted quickly, hoping that they are unaware of the gang is on to them...
  13. It just keeps getting better and better...take a moment to watch the link in the comment above, it is nothing short of fantastic!!!
  14. It looks as if the Godstroll hunt commences...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 52

    Amen to the comments above, your health comes first and foremost...Please do what it takes to protect your health... Now... The human chimney decided not to come to court, will the fuckwad find his belongings on the doorstep or on the sidewalk??? Judge Crusty Pants is beginning to understand the nuances of the case before him, it could possibly be the cure for the ailment he suffers from, stickupyourasssideways, hope springs eternal!!! How much longer will Attorney Clark keep fuckwad as a client, when will he realize he's never going to see a dime in fees, past what may have been paid to date??? I snorted so hard at the following; lunch wanted to make a second appearance... “Objection, Your Honor,” Billy said, rolling his eyes. “It's common practice for attorney's to cover the cost incurred by witnesses, especially those who have to travel. In fact, I know that Mr. Clarke's firm has done this very thing, multiple times. That's how his first witness was able to be here.” “Is that true, Mr. Clarke?” Clarke looked like he was about swing on Billy. “Yes, Your Honor.” As with others, I am very concerned for Caleb, the why's and how's he ended up in the hospital...hopefully it is only to get checked for superficial bruises... Now as you know, my moniker is drsawzall and while I am able to treat any and all instances of wood related injuries, not limited to but including two by fours painfully inserted or used otherwise, I respectfully decline any sort of diagnosis or treatment plan!!! As to the ending, I shall take the following advice...can you get O'Douls in a draft???
  16. drsawzall

    Fooluru

    Studies first as always, take some time to relax as your job and main focus is to get the best grades possible!!
  17. And the adventure of a lifetime continues as the boys tour their country in all of its beauty!!
  18. The food and the show were fabulous!!!
  19. What an intriguing concept, friendship and being able to choose one's friends...and friends come in all different shape, sizes, and flavors...
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    Chapter 10

    I can only surmise that Baron Evans used, abused, and discarded young Samuel, we know from past interactions with the disgraced Baron, we know he's stuck in the past and to outdated traditions... The question now becomes will this happen before the trip to LA or after, and a deep, in-length detailed conversation with Prince George? Ya all know to make a good Bloody Baron Evans, Mary, y'all gotta add some pepper, Worcestershire, and shake the living bejesus out of it before inserting the stick of celery...squeezing the lime can happen anytime during or after to obtain the best effect...
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    And we're off on another magical mystery, who dunnit, tour full, I'm sure, of red herrings... And away we go!!!
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    The path towards forgiveness and redemption begins with accepting and forgiving oneself... An excellent chapter with much to think on!! I agree with the following, very well said... Trust your paperwork is in order, and verify that it is so... He stared worriedly at me and asked, “Does you son have access to your accounts?” “Do I look stupid?” I laughed. “That’s another reason my son hates me so much. I wrote him out of my will years ago. I’ll be damned if I leave him a penny when I die.” “Excellent,” smiled Colin. “I’ll check about getting you a new cellphone. That is if you want one.”
  23. drsawzall

    Twenty-Three

    Another fantastic chapter, loved the idioms and the vernacular. Even better is the growing bond between Thomas and Keith and it is a pleasure to watch Keith slowly come out of his shell as it were... One of my employers at the end of each contract for renovations to the facilities, would sit in his office at the end of each completed project with the contractor and myself and would go, "Let's sharpen our pencils, shall we"? as he tried to nickel and dime 'savings' off the overall costs. I heard him described by many something very similar to the following...a phrase sometimes used was something about pinching pennies with the muscles in his posterior.... “Fat chance of that. Guy that owns it skimped on the work something rotten, tight as a pig’s arse.”
  24. drsawzall

    Emu

    Whatever do you mean???
  25. What will become of Simon as is returned to the land he came from, and what will become of those who used/harmed him???
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