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Everything posted by drsawzall
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When will Seth learn he holds the key to ending his misery...the chaos??? Ty, quite an impressive attribute to say the least. Here's hoping it isn't a one time thing.... Everytime mommy opens her mouth she sinks to new lows..more on her after I reflect on this chapter... Like others, I worry for Blake but know he has reasons to pull through this latest episode. He has folks who love him
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First off...I hate moving...one good thing tho..I found clothes I put away decades ago, no comment as to what decade, safe to say there's a disco ball somewhere nearby too...having lost weight I'm debating if i should try them on...should i try to peal back the decades and try 'em on or donate??? I expect the haters to come out of the woodwork but I'm not a fan of Caleb at all... maybe I'm just grumpy from moving..
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Well if this isn't a tangled web...make sure your backside is covered boys...it is a fine mess you have gotten is into Oli...
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Well now, we're a long way from home Toto....
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Let's face it...Toby's copy of the gay porno mag IS gonna be found. The overriding question is will Toby survive the aftermath with Jasper with enough strength to make it to Grams? Will Jasper survive the righteous indignation of Brian, and his solicitors?
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The important lessons learned is that if you are transitioning to keep ones head on a swivel.
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This leads me to suspect the trauma to his neck may/might have happened in the not so distant past....
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It would appear that the north is the flame that sits under the South's pressure cooker... The king is well aware of the under currents.. . A king is the father of his realm… as the saints ordain us to be. Father, shepherd, and protector. That is why… these bridges that my Lord Uncle and Lady Mother have burned must be mended, for if I do not mend them, my realm will suffer.” One can only hope that Edward uses the reasoning that Stillingford imbued him with...
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An intriguing beginning....
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Like others, I'm concerned about the nightmares and the rope. Iffin I recollect correctly Jubal has a scar or the remnants of a rope burn on his neck. The Sawyer was a hoot and a good man to know...I remain puzzled about the sheriff tho, from the time we first met him he was/is an enigma....
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Looks like there's a detour on the road Travis is travelling...
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One has to hope Zole Assrot doesn't know what hits him.....
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A Visit with Marty and Holiday Happenings
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Visit with Marty and Holiday Happenings
Marty is learning some tough lessons... he's in juvie and is starting out as/from the bottom so to speak... Like @weinerdog I'd have gone to a bunch of parties like those, sadly living in the sticks put a hamper on that... -
Fantastic start and looking forward to more!!!
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A very enjoyable tale of love and redemption centered around the holiday season. If you believe in miracles, this one's for you!!
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Loved this, thought the following was spot-on!!! John and Ben had never had any family. During the evening’s festivities, they both realized that by asking for forgiveness, and by granting it, they were now part of a large and loving family.
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This is a great beginning and a fantastic lead-in to a deepening mystery, not to mention a burgeoning love interest...
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This pretty much says it all... “Dude,” Josh had said, “you killed people. That’s villain territory.” “I acted in self-defense.” “Bullshit! You could have teleported.” “I . . .” Josh is right. I could have Popped to Grams or anywhere else. But I chose to kill those soldiers, and the truth is I enjoyed it.
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You know, what else is also lost in the circumstances of the moment is the abject failure of Stacy's school work. While it is an assumption based on probability, I have to believe she is failing most of her courses as others have been covering/assisting with her homework and testing, she is a cheater of the highest magnitude. I would live to be a fly on the wall when those chickens come home to roost...How will mommy dearest react when she finds out her daughters only marketable skill will be one that requires laying on her back whilst spreading her legs.... Then there is mother dearest, her conversation with Seth before Mr Ellis left is disturbing on so many f'ing counts, she needs to learn that denial isn't a river in Egypt. What happened to her to so skew her worldview and the manner in which she pathetically runs her household???? She's lost living in a warped fantasy world where Seth is only allowed to exist in order to serve both she and his sister... While I worry for Blake, I am comforted by the fact that this time he knows his life has meaning and there are those who care about him...somehow, most likely with great effort, he will find his way back... Seth...the only way to get through to your mother is to call out the bullshit as it happens and the only way to save your sister is to shine the harsh light of truth on her activities. What is truly sad here is that Stacy has become a much better manipulator, than her mother ever was. How will mommy dearest react when she find out that she is only a pawn that serves Stacy's skewed sense of self-importance???? It is well past time for Seth's father to make an appearance...
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Thank you, I can honestly say I struggled mightily with this subject, it can and is very controversial and polarizing, but our children are dying because those who are able to effect change, refuse to do so...what will history say about us?
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Looks like another detour along the way to wherever in the heck they are going...
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Not sure what to say here....
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All the comments above point to the vast multitude of red, and not so red herrings, that even I picked up on the following... “Martina, I have no idea what you’re talking about.” “But—” Our stride remains unhurried, casual, but I sense a change in her posture, a sudden tightening. She shoots me a sidelong smile. It’s strained. “Michael, Frank and Rory tell me you’ve been… there’ve been a few times when…” She shakes her head. “Not the time. Forget I mentioned it.” Now that’s a nefarious statement. I smile back and drop the subject as requested, but its implications spin through my head. I strain my memory for a fight with Sam. Find nothing. Only once have I struck a person in anger. It’s not something I would do lightly or forget. And her implication that my behavior has been strange, it frightens me. Because there’s history there, even if it is ancient. And just for helping to cover all the bases...what if Micco actually did the deed and killed Sam???
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Word Gets Around and Closeness With Brandon
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Word Gets Around and Closeness With Brandon
I have to admit to a humongous error in my previous comment, sadly I compared Mason's intellect to that of a bulb found in a fridge...In retrospect, his bulb is the equivalent to a hallway night light... "No. If I didn't make sure he wasn't getting right up, he still could have stabbed me." "OK. That does match the injuries he received. And everything up to the kick, which only left a small bruise, any one of those may have been inadequate to prevent further injury to yourself. I have all I need. Thank you for your cooperation." "And that's it, Officer?" "Yes, it should be son. I can't speak to any civil action that may occur, but the police won't be concerned any longer. Thank you for the coffee, ma'am. I can see myself out." This worries me up to a point, will the nail in Mason's legal defense failure be the story of the doctored photo...is it still on his computer/pc/tablet? -
Another Jerk Plus Another Mistake Equals Pain
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Another Jerk Plus Another Mistake Equals Pain
Truly a great moment in learning one of life's harsh lessons...having said that, I am not sure Mason's lightbulb isn't anything brighter that what is found in a fridge... I would like to hope Mason will fuck up and somehow cross a line with someone and Brandon will be left with no choice but to, for the lack of better words, expose his brother and the atrocious, stunt he pulled, one that resulted in the death of a young man...I can't believe he's ever going to get away with that....
