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Everything posted by drsawzall
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There is a school of thought in the paranormal worlds, that there are points on the surface of the planet that there are intersections where barriers between the occult and the 'normal' world are thin or transparent.. Allowing for an easier 'crossover' between the two different worlds. As to the political world, I'm not sure my back could, at my age, withstand the constant jumping on/off the expedient political crisis's bandwagons of the moment... Ley line - Wikipedia
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Well the last bit was a kick in the pants...not sure just how any of this is going to work out...especially considering Ashlee's family....
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So much for traveling incognito...they'll need to cover/erase their tracks or create a false trail and I find it surprising that Nathan was the one to suggest breaking cover to meet with the trader...bad move for someone who makes a living as an assassin...
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This was a fantastic chapter showing remarkable growth with all the major characters...it was very enjoyable to see...I was moved with Bryan's reaction to Steve showing up at the Chinese Restaurant...seemingly without trying Steve has cracked Bryan's facade in such a manner, and have commented on this previously, that he's allowed Bryand to come to respect and love him on his own, simply by being there and acting in a steady non-judgmental manner. Loved the interaction of the twins as they cover for each other, the byplay between Billy and Trevor and that Billy out of the courtroom is truly a big old softie... I keep holding my breath, wishing old Judge Crusty Pants, who suffers from the medical condition known as ''stickstuckupyourasssideways' expires as the condition is known to be terminal...but then what fun would that be without seeing him get his just deserved comeuppance...
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Is it possible the Minister for Wanking is using occult "lay" lines and nexus's of astrological power nodes???
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Chapter Seventeen: Cascade
drsawzall commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Seventeen: Cascade
I'm with Dave... Dave said, “I’m so fucking confused. Every single hour we go on and on and on and learn new things, but so many more questions. SO MANY QUESTIONS! AHHHHHHHH!” -
As noted above there just may be a spanner in the works...I have a hunch it will resolve itself, in the meantime a warning sign has been posted...
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I fear that at some point in the not-too-distant future Jamie is going to have to tell Mike what is going on, especially considering I am still of the opinion that these specters will be coming for Jamie, if not Mike... Good on the Minister for Wanking for making that speech, but he is a career politico who can jump on and off any bandwagon issue multiple times without injuring his back... Ya know its love with the following... Mike came to hug me. “It’s not a competition. You’re important to me. I love you.” “I love you too.” Mike kissed me on the cheek and then slapped my butt. “I’ll wash, you dry.” I get the sense the shite is about to hit the fan, so to speak...
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@kbois and @Mrsgnomie why do I sense a tong war coming up...
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That’s What I Call Entertainment
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in That’s What I Call Entertainment
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Dear Lord in Heaven....I'm gonna be showing my age...the very first rock and roll concert I ever attended was Three Dog Night, if my memory serves me correctly it was in celebration of the dinosaurs losing the civil war...
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You may want to check in with your ophthalmologist...😉
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Oh my goodness, I can see all sorts of complications coming up....
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The conversation between the two lovers was too rehearsed...trust no one or anybody... something is off between the two of them... “Because the policemen, who are not on your payroll, are all out to get you. If I stay on the force, it will be a conflict of interest. I love you too much to keep on trying to get you behind bars.” “That’s nonsense. We can’t live together, so nobody will know about our relationship. Stay on the force. Get the real bad guys. I swear, the only time I did something ‘bad’ was when someone threatened you.
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Oh my...the dissipation of the entitled and the wealthy...Gatsby had nothing to do with these vacuous souls... Should we all have these challenges...
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A Murder Is Announced
drsawzall commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in A Murder Is Announced
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Ya know...with a bit of hair coloring...they could be twins...😆
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As noted above, I am not sure they are in the clear just yet...will the bow and arrows need to be used sooner than expected... The ice has been broken as to their feelings, will this be a slow boil or will passion overtake them??
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I am content knowing Manny's legacy is carrying on through others. I am reminded of the ripples a pebble makes when tossed into water...
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Colin 13: Pictures & Gardens
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Colin 13: Pictures & Gardens
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That's my image and I'm sticking to it....
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Some Surprising Turns of Events
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Some Surprising Turns of Events
I have to ask, the client, the billionaires son, Fred has to exonerate on appeal in order to keep his new job, what if he is truly guilty??? Having said that, the other files Fred has to look at, were the clients all gay, was the defense attorney Silas Fred is replacing a cousin to Bully or from the same school of motivation??? -
Well now...the Minister for Wanking got his wish and was able to find out who is behind the specter...I can't quite call it a ghost...and some food for thought, I find it curious that bullets have no effect, but a knife will. More to the point the light the specter emitted when its throat was slit, where did it go, was the release of that light the end of the specter or will it be able to rejuvenate itself??? Where is the bowl of spent bullets and what did the Minister for Wanking learn from contact with the specter??? While a heavy snowfall is occurring at the moment, the idea that the "escape" from the cellar via the broken window is bound to raise more questions than it answers. Unless the investigators will buy into the theory that the prisoner flew out the window, there's problems ahead...As we all know, snow compacts when stepped on, leaving a traceable path regardless of how much snow fell after the escape... Was the machine-pistol cleaned afterwards??? How long can Jamie and the Minister for Wanking stick to the alibi they have crafted when interrogated as they surely must be... And the following leads me to believe a fib has been told by the Minister for Wanking... “Oh, Jamie, that is not my forte. All this physical stuff.” My thoughts as to what Jamie might look like...
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I was once told the definition of mixed emotions was watching a bus full of lawyers going over a cliff and realizing one seat was empty... Hey @weinerdog, do you think they'll leave the light on at the motel???
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The very idea he would like to extend his time in the pokey, pushed him to the very forefront of all the idiots to grace these pages...
